I’m going to almost guarantee that the majority of people giving this books high scores have never actually read it. According to the “author” the characters were based on real people and I’m willing to also bet that it was a case of “I’ll put you in my book! Just give it a great (fake) review!” There is no other explanation.
Seriously. DO NOT waste your time, this “book” is horrible. It reads like a very poorly written short story for a freshman creative writing class.
Let us take a look at the sin count:
1) Due to the third party, jumping around narrative, it was impossible to become invested in any of the characters.
2) There are too many characters/ there are too many characters with similar names.
The writing is so poor that for several chapters it made no sense that some twit was all over “Pete” who was not “Peter”. It was never made clear.
3) Just as the story would start to actually go somewhere good. It would drop off and focus on another group of characters and never pick up again.
4) You pretentious nit. You put yourself in your own book! For no fricken reason! It did not add to anything to have all these famous people talking about their pal “Shane Moore”. You’re not Stan Lee. Take a seat.
5) This is a book about zombies. Your readers are already suspending disbelief, so when you do something even more outrageous then ZOMBIES and your readers are calling you out on your shit. You need to rethink what is going on.
6) What is with all the biblical quotes and rapture talk when apart from a small blip in the beginning, you don’t go into it AT ALL!?
7) Did you even have an editor, Shane Moore!? Do you know what an editor is?!
8) In the back of the physical copy there are places for celebrities, actual celebrities, to sign their names. Why the hell would anyone want to sign this book? Because some F-List “writer” felt the need to name drop to try and make sales?
Honestly I can’t keep going. This “book” is utter garbage and there is so much more to tear it apart on, but I don’t have the time. Is this book self-published? If not, the publishing company needs to shut down for this horrific piece of inexcusable crap they have allowed to come into the literary world.