I received this ARC in exchange for an honest review!
The plot is simple: Sydney is a university student at the exotic Hawaii, focusing on her studies after a break-up. She’s assigned for tutoring hottie, bad boy type of Coen. Despite all her resolve not get involved with him, things fast change and all things getting heated-up.
My reading experience can best be described as: continuous debate, as the result of several reasons, see below:
Rhythm of the book (that’s my thing, might sound stupid, but that’s one of the first things I experience when reading): it started very tentative, like the writing wasn’t sure where and how is heading. And than it all speed up and practically rushed through the whole story. On one hand it was somehow good, because it was sort of a page turner, as I was curious where it was all heading. But on the other hand, it caused lacking in story, character development .
Characters : Sydney – nice, girl next door type and totally inconsistent. I didn’t get it whether it was because of her character; or simply lacking in character development. All blushing, while acting all sort of nymphomaniac (I really couldn’t put my finger it); Coen – loved the name, original; totally hot guy, perfect body, classic too-good-too-be-true, but nothing more. Supportive characters: Nancy – big mouth, some comments and dialogues here and there, didn’t know much about her (thought there was some more prospect in her); Henry – puppy eyes begging type of best friend being in loved with Sydney like forever and also good looking (I think he would have been better as some geek sort of guy). Mostly annoyed me, then totally surprised with a twist (just a snap and he does an 180).
Conflicts, drama, emotional factor : there were added, but randomly and like a blast. There were good, at least. But I didn’t see them coming as there wasn’t any kind of indication either in the characters’ behavioral or in the story itself. They simple just came from nowhere. Sydney’s emotional turmoil was understandable mostly, but I got annoyed with after a while. At least it wasn’t too dragged on, but therefore solution came sort of easy and fast. She pretty much got over her break-up/heartbreak pretty fast with a quick exchange on the beach with his ex.
What disturbed me most that there wasn’t any emotional development, bonding time, nothing. Both Sydney and Coen became attracted to each other; mostly sexually, than came the emotional part, but there wasn’t anything that suggested that. It was a like a flick of a finger, and suddenly, they have feelings for each other, while having mostly general discussions.
Sex factor: at first I was worried that I got several scenes that gets me all hot and bothered, and nothing happens between Sydney and Coen. This was stroked by heavy petting and original scenes, which also helped a lot with a story.
The strength of the story are : exotic location offered additions (whale swimming scene, Rose); one-on-one scenes (probably these were more easily executed than the overall storytelling); indication of the issues of the past (I always loved characters with screwed-up background/history); sex scenes.
It should be a good beach read for the summer or when you really want to get cozy in the cold with some hotness. But when you’re more into the storytelling, character/emotional development, you might get slightly disappointed.