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Thorin “Thunder” Vaduva is a journeyman MMA fighter—toiling in the shadows, a set of strong shoulders to lift other fighters toward stardom. After years in prison for a crime he didn’t commit, he’s trying to get his life on track—be a good father to his teenage son, get his fights in, do his work, keep his head down, keep his demons at bay.

Nina Rodriguez is trying to get her life started. Her days are filled with work and school, slowly climbing toward a meaningful career. Her aspirations aren’t flashy, but she wants a life with purpose.

When Nina comes to the Capital City Fight Center so her brother, Thor’s teammate, can teach her to fight, she and Thor really notice each other for the first time. After that they fall hard and fast, even while they’re taking things slow.

Their love comes easy. But life is hard, and full of storms.

When one of those storms tears Thor’s life apart, only real love can bring the sun back.

355 pages, Kindle Edition

Published March 7, 2020

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Susan Fanetti

84 books1,419 followers
I was born and raised in the Midwest, but I was transplanted into the dusty soil of Northern California and have apparently taken root there. An inveterate geek and gamer, I am a fan of many things considered pop culture and maybe even lowbrow.

As a reader, my favorite genres are science fiction and fantasy, but as a writer, I've found my home in romance--or perhaps it's better to say simply "love stories." I have a yen to try other genres, too, at some point, but for now my muse wants to tell stories about lovers and families.

I write for the joy of it, and I write stories that I want to read. If others like them, too, that's just the cherry on top. I’m not interested in rules and formulae. I follow my muse and my characters and let them take me where they want to go, wherever that might be. I like big emotions, dark and light.

I like complicated characters with flaws and weaknesses as well as strengths, and I like each character’s strengths and weaknesses to be different from those of other characters. I’m much more concerned that my characters be interesting and diverse than that they be widely considered to be likable. I try to create people, not types.

Likewise, I want my stories each to be distinct from the others. Once I’ve told a story, I don’t want to tell it again. So even within a series, one of my books might be very different from the next. Some might be very dark, others equally mild.

That isn’t to say there aren’t trends and recurrences in my work. I’m drawn to certain themes and settings, and my muse has her favorite toys and tools. But I guard against those tendencies becoming a formula.

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A note: I don't spend much time here on Goodreads. I try not to read any reviews of my own work. Besides, this is a site for readers, but since I write at a fairly manic pace, and read and edit for other writers, I don't have much time to read recreationally. Mainly, I log on to update my info. So if you message me here, it might be a while before I see it.

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Profile Image for TeriLyn.
1,385 reviews442 followers
March 9, 2020

5+ "Always try your hardest..." Stars

I don't think there's much anyone can say that would justify (and I'm not saying a lot because it's a story that needs to be experienced fully) the absolute bravery in the telling of this harrowing story from Susan Fanetti. The courage and faith present in her story telling in Thunder is immeasurable. Once again, I find myself in awe of her strength and conviction to exercise honesty and pain in a way that completely guts you yet provides a source of admirable might and hope.

Thunder will leave you raw and emotional. It will uplift you. It's a devastatingly beautiful story of loss, healing, and love. I'm beyond proud of the truth, pain, and hope in this story and how it's used to create real emotions in readers. I highly recommend for the brave and the truth seekers.
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1,842 reviews1,046 followers
April 2, 2020
THUNDER is the first book in a new series about MMA fighters. Thunder packs a punch with heartbreak that leads to a newfound hope! I ate my feelings through this book.

The telling of Thunder felt like a therapeutic healing and I feel honored that we, as readers, were trusted to read this story. The vulnerability and courage in sharing something so deeply personal made my heartache for the author and her family.

Ms. Fanetti offers an author’s note at the end of the book that shares her journey in writing this story. Before the story begins there's a content warning and a link that takes you to the author's note. For those wondering if this story has a HEA -

From now on I will look at Japanese cherry trees and remember this story. “Always try your hardest, and you’ll never disappoint yourself.” ~Adam Williams

Do yourself a favor and read this powerful, beautiful, heart-wrenching story of love and hope.
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Author 6 books606 followers
March 8, 2020
I knew what this story was about from the beginning ... I was prepared for the heartache and loss. I was not quite prepared for the love and strength that went with it but I was so glad it was there.
This story is beyond brave. It is beyond painful. Beyond any test of strength I could imagine.
It is also the most hopeful, healing story I think I’ve ever read. Maybe the best story I’ve ever read period. And that’s saying a lot because I’ve got a list of amazing books written by Susan Fanetti which I cherish as my favourites.
This book is not easy to read. It hurts. But I promise you, it is worth every bitter-sweet moment.
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2,670 reviews3,289 followers
February 13, 2021
5 Truth Telling Stars
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I am a broken record when it comes to Susan Fanetti. I Love Her. I have a deep respect for her talent and storytelling. She has always told the truth as she knows it. She has followed her path, gone where her muse has led her, and sometimes it was down a very very dark path.

I have gone willingly every single time.

Thunder (Capital City MMA #1) is more than a new series about MMA fighters and the women who are part of the team and loved ones. It is all that and so much more.


It will take you on a rollercoaster of high ups, downs, and the climb back up. It will give you insight into what we as people can endure and how we must find our way to love, peace, and happiness no matter what.

This book is masterful in its way of crafting and the feels will touch you to your core.

I love Susan Fanetti. She is not one to want accolades or awards. She writes because she must and we benefit from it every time.

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~~~~~ Before Reading ~~~~~
Susan Fanetti is Fearless...
She has taken on MC Clubs...
Focused on The Mafia...
Gone Back in time to the Vikings...
And Lived to Write Some More...

Now She has set out to Reveal...
The Inner Workings and Heart of MMA...

She has set in Sacramento, CA...
It will Feel Real...
Because the Location is...

It will Touch Your Soul...
Because the Characters are Cut...
From Life's Hard Knocks...

There is Much to Consider...
Reasons to Rejoice...
A New Series Coming...


Thunder (Capital City MMA #1)-March 7, 2020

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Profile Image for Malene.
1,343 reviews759 followers
March 14, 2020
A new series from Susan Fanetti and she starts it off with a bang with Thunder. This story is heartbreaking but filled with so much love and hope. It’s a romance and a story of love. The love between two lovers and the love between father and son. There’s a trigger warning in the beginning that is optional to read before starting and I chose not to. I’m glad I didn’t read it cause I always know that Susan Fanetti will deliver a powerful and satisfying story. She definitely did with Thunder. I fell in love with Thor, Nina, David, Rafe and the other characters from the Cap City universe. It’s an emotional story because of the subject matter and it’s also why it touched me so deeply. Thunder is a fabulous character driven story. Thor and Nina’s story encompasses some of the most difficult and heartbreaking things a human can experience. I appreciate how the author chose to write and explore it through Thor’s eyes and emotional state as well as Nina’s who was his rock! It made the story more human and relatable. It was a tough but very rewarding story to read when I reached the epilogue. Thunder is the start to a fantastic series and I can’t wait to follow these characters.

4 This Love Stars
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692 reviews1,475 followers
April 2, 2020
I have always been a fan of Susan's writing. Her storytelling has this unique rawness to it that you rarely find in romance - it is not sunshine and rainbows. She tells painful stories but there is always this underlying feeling of hope, of moving forward, because life does move forward after heartbreak, after unimaginable loss - you can move with it or fight it, but it keeps going.

The author's note - Truly broke my heart for Jim, Adam, and Susan.



Profile Image for Lisa - (Aussie Girl).
1,472 reviews219 followers
March 24, 2020
Warning - This is not a comfort read. It is a confronting story with a crime that all too sadly happens in today's society. Susan Fanetti is an amazing, empathetic writer who gets to the heart of her characters' emotions and lets the reader experience all the joy and the sadness through her words. To read the Author's Note at the end and realise how personal this particular storyline is, I couldn't give Thunder any less than five stars in acknowledgment of the author's bravery in putting it out there.
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1,231 reviews153 followers
March 15, 2020

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After reading this I realized how her life has informed her writing. How awful things happen to good people all the time, how you have to just deal and move forward. Pain is part of living. And while I have lost a child, I didn't lose him brutally, so I give her much respect for finding a way to honor him in her writing.
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668 reviews32 followers
March 5, 2021
This is one book that I got when it came out; the author is auto-buy for me.
But then I put it aside to read later and forgot about it; also, MMA is not my scene but I thought since its SF, I might give it a try. I came across the book again when I was updating my GR shelves in December.
And I really regret not reading it when it came out last year.
Also, the book is part autobiography; the main aspects of the book relate to an incident in the author's life; I was not aware when I got the book; I only read the note when I finally decided to read it.
It's a fabulous book; and I cried so much while reading this.
The story, while dealing with very heavy material, moves along smoothly; there are no moments where it lags.
The characters are great; h is a gorgeous person and side characters are just as great.
But the undoubted star is the H; the story is actually based around him.
He is a great guy who has suffered but keeps working hard and moving along; he is a great father to his son and a wonderful boyfriend to the h.
I won't delve in the tragedy but will say it's huge; also, remember, this is a real incident as well.
I must say, the author deals with the tragedy with such sensitivity and honesty, such dignity.
She also does it without bad-mouthing the main villain; she maintains her dignity as well as the H's.
And then we get to see the H as he struggles and slowly starts moving towards recovery. The themr
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196 reviews
March 7, 2020
All I'm saying in my opinion - go in blind don't read her note till the end.

its heartbreaking, soul destroying and leaves you with an ache in your heart and Susan is the master of all these . but she does manage to put you back together again. well kind of..m

Thank you and sending the biggest hug to you both.
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834 reviews2 followers
March 13, 2020
Before you start this book there is a note giving you a choice to go to the back of the book and read the authors note as this story deals with some of the heaviest heartbreak there is. I decided not to read it and and I’m so glad I went in blind. I loved the story even more for that. When I got to the end the authors note sent chills up my spine. Thank you Susan Fanetti for sharing your note at the end of the book, something so personal and from the soul. I’m so glad you gave your voice and story to Thunder, Nina and David. I absolutely loved Thunder and David’s relationship, that boy loved his dad. Of course no way am I giving spoilers, you just need to delve right in and give this one ago. I don’t think I’ve read anything of yours I didn’t like. It’s also a great treat to look this author up on Pinterest before I start one of her books, so many pictures to see of characters and places, really sets the scene before delving into the story.
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1,501 reviews74 followers
October 15, 2020
This was amazing, heart breaking and redemptive. I'm not going to tell you about the book, read the blurb. I will tell you there will be some who will not read Thunder because of the content (see spoiler below) and that is fine, they shouldn't if it is too difficult. It is horrific and I couldn't begin to understand families and friends who have experienced such a thing.

I will say, I was one of the people who heeded the warning in the author's forward. I read Ms. Fanetti's very emotional and very personal connection with this subject matter in the Author's Note at the end of the book and I don't think reading it diminished my reading pleasure one bit. She is incredibly brave and thank you to her for writing it.

While heart breaking Thunder is also redemptive. The main character, Thor, is already dealing with the shitty hand he was dealt, but he works hard at his day job and trains hard pursuing his MMA career. He is getting to know his son again and moving forward with his life. This is when he meets Nina. Nina had a bit of a run in with some drunks and her brother, a MMA fighter, is teaching her some moves at Cap City gym. Nina is an amazing heroine and the two of them together are dynamite. I loved every page of their romance and the strength they had for each another.

This was a fantastic start to what I hope to be a great new series. Again kudos to Ms. Fanetti and this wonderful book!

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223 reviews3 followers
March 7, 2020
Wow.... at first I was mad and upset and now I’m still upset and crying as write this, but I’m overwhelmed. Susan, I don’t even have words. Thank you for telling this story, this is something I will never forget. You wrote it beautifully, it was deeply personal and gripping. I won’t say more because as a fan, my words will offer little comfort or really justice for the effort and quality of this work. I will just leave it here, I’m moved.
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41 reviews3 followers
May 30, 2024
What really made a tremendous impact on me in this one was author's note at the end. I almost didn't read it. And when I did, I was speechless. It's heartbreaking in so many ways.
Anyway, this is a great book. But be prepared for your heart to be heavy and to be shattered in more ways than one.
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546 reviews162 followers
March 11, 2020
Holy shite.

I'm not giving this story 5 stars because it's perfect. I'm giving them because it deserves every bloody one.

It's been a long, loooong time since I was affected by a book to this degree, if indeed I ever have been.

I'm not familiar with Ms. Fanetti's work beyond this book and I am unsure if I'll read anything else of hers simply because her other books don't really look like my thing. But that in no way diminishes this book, or the credit she should receive - by anyone brave enough to read it - for writing it.

This book is a work of fiction, but it was inspired by actual events. The main characters are created by Ms. Fanetti, but some of how they experienced and handled certain events was drawn from the real thing. To me, this is not a romance, but rather a love story. I think the themes of parental and familial love overpower the romance - as they absolutely should have done here. There is some romance and a bit of steam, but this story is so much deeper than anyone can prepare themselves for.

There are no alpha males here, no billionaires or virginal, clueless heroines. These characters are fashioned after everyday, average folks. They live regular, blue-collar type lives for the most part, but Thor is definitely the more complex. Seems fitting as 'Thunder' is basically his story.

Unlike many reviewers before me, I absolutely do NOT recommend going into this book blind if you are trigger sensitive. However, I will try to be as ambiguous as possible in my warnings. I will not fully disclose the crux of this novel except to say that if you are a parent - particularly a mother - tread carefully.

I am not a crying type. In fact, it's been years since I experienced a flood of tears even slightly close to what this book pulled from me. Not just once, but multiple times. This story is stunning and the twist is like a kick in the gut. And the disturbing thing is that it can actually happen - HAS actually happened, in fact.
What a fucking world we live in, eh?

But as I read through, I experienced devastation, confusion, grief, rage and hatred. I couldn't fathom the actions of the character that was basically the fuse to the powder keg. And moving on deeper there was even more grief, and empathy, sadness, helplessness. I ran the gauntlet of emotion in this book, and I can't say I liked it much - but I wouldn't have missed it.

I don't say things like this lightly, and I rarely find anything that warrants such high praise in a review, but this book is one of those rare experiences that has staying power. I will never, ever forget this story or how it made me feel. As a mother, it was as inexplicable as it was heartwrenching, and Thor, Nina, David and the rest of their 'family' and their story will be a bittersweet memory for me.

I might not ever read another book by Ms. Fanetti, but I will say this - she is one HELL of a writer and an incredibly brave soul to have expressed herself in this way. This book deserves far more recognition than it will likely receive. So, if you're game to go into a story that will literally wring your insides, I highly, highly recommend this book. It needs to be read and talked about.

In particular, be sure to read the author's note. If the story doesn't suitably inspire you, I think Ms. Fanetti's sheer guts and devotion very likely will.
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335 reviews
May 28, 2020
WARNING: SPOILERS AHEAD

“Always try your hardest, and you’ll never disappoint yourself”


This was painfully gut wrenching and tear jerking story. My heart has never felt this heavy and my eyes are swollen from crying. It was a beautiful story nonetheless.

Firstly I have to say, I have the utmost respect for Susan Fanetti for being so brave to write such an emotional story. My heart goes out to her and her husband, I can’t even imagine the painful loss they’ve been through. It’s a loss no parent should ever have to go through.
This world is filled with people who are good, bad and even downright awful. It hurts so much when you realise how a person can be this awful to commit such a horrendous act.

This is a story about a father named Thorin, an ex-con and a MMA fighter who’s trying so hard to earn the best living in order to provide for his teenage son, David. David is in his mother’s custody who is an absolute toxic excuse of a woman.
Thor is such a tragic hero. Caught in a wrong place and wrong time, he was locked away in prison, thus losing the years while his son was still an infant. He’s a fighter in every way and I loved witnessing the unconditional love he has for his son who sees him as a hero too. His ex was a piece of work and my heart broke for Thor and David because of the ugly custody battle.
And then enters Nina; she was kind, thoughtful and strong - all the qualities I love in a heroine. She meets Thor through her brother who is his close friend and she’s absolutely enamoured.
I loved watching their relationship bloom from friends to lovers, especially for Thor who finally found his person other than David to call his own. I even loved Nina’s bond with David. It’s the family David utmostly deserved.

Just when everything began to look bright and hopeful, something devastating takes place...

Through that last half onward, I spent crying my eyes out with a heavy heartache. I can’t even explain the pain I felt... it’s something I don’t want to feel again.
The hardest is always trying to rise above the pain and the journey for Thor and Nina from there is beautifully heartbreaking. Sometimes In the darkness, we tend forget that there are people who help us guide back into the light and we are grateful that people like them is why we believe that despite the bad, goodness lives among us all. It was a beautiful and bittersweet ending.

What hurts me the most is that this is a true story. I have heard shocking incidents like this in several news and it haunts me so much. And for Ms. Fanetti to write about it just shows how brave and strong she is really is. Her Author’s note had me crying so hard and I pray to all parents who suffered a loss that you are so brave and your children are proud to feel your love. Cherish the good always❤️
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340 reviews3 followers
March 31, 2020
Susan Fanetti has written a heartbreakingly gorgeous story about redemption and survival through the power of love. My heart ached while reading Thunder.

Thor’s life was anything but easy but he just kept taking the punches, trying again and again, to get back on his feet and be a father to his teenage son, David, in a very difficult situation. David was simply beautiful and his relationship with Thor was my favorite part of Thunder. The way Thor loved his son moved me to tears; their talks were so pure and full of trust. Susan Fanetti brought their bond to life for me and I felt honored to have read it. I loved them and what happens shattered me.

The love story between Nina and Thor is what kept the shattered pieces close enough to put my heart back together. Nina is the glue! She’s a force of strength and happiness in otherwise bleak circumstances for Thor. David is Thor’s world and Nina is the light! Together they are absolutely incredible! Their love jumped off the pages, their chemistry electric!

I have read all of Susan’s books and I’ve honestly loved them all but Thunder will stay with me always. It’s left an impact and I am in awe of this brave woman!
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1,185 reviews
March 18, 2020
This one ripped my heart to shreds and very gently placed it back in place hoping it will eventually heal itself back together. I loved this story in all it's heartbreaking glory and I cannot wait for the next book ;)
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737 reviews86 followers
March 15, 2020
This one gutted me. Susan Fanetti continues to amaze me with her words.
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1,109 reviews249 followers
March 15, 2020
3.5 stars. A gripping story. It's clear from the warning at the beginning that something bad will happen, followed by a HEA. I chose not to read the final author comments ahead of time, but waited till I had finished the book. Not sure whether it would have been better to read the end notes ahead of time or not??

I'm not a fan of boxing or MMA fighting etc, but I trusted in Ms Fanetti's writing skills and decided to read this anyway. I did like the characters, although there was so much angst that it was a little hard to read at times. I liked the way the story was resolved. But overall, not my fav Fanetti book.

After reading the author's end note, I was shocked to find that this came from the author's own life. Must have been so hard to write...... but hopefully, cathartic as well. Total respect for the writer, and my humble sympathy on the terrible events she and her family have lived through and no doubt will always feel.

I will read the next book in the series, if there are more. Rafi and Mila, perhaps? (Eek, do I have the names right?) I liked the read, but can't say I 'enjoyed' it. It's not that kind of book. But the HEA was satisfying.
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792 reviews769 followers
April 12, 2020
I had trouble with this one and almost stopped twice. I’m glad I kept reading because it turned into a wonderful
Book.
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75 reviews
March 7, 2020
Heartbreaking, but filled with so much love. And so cleverly written you feel Thor's gentle spirit, despite him being a fighter, in every sentence.

And I cannot emphasise enough do not read the author's note until the end. You will thank me, I promise.
Profile Image for Charlene.
893 reviews68 followers
March 22, 2020
Wow...that was tough to read. I can't imagine having lived through it. I'm glad the author was able to tell the story in her way, in her own time. My heart goes out to her and her family.

Thank you for sharing this with your readers. As always, your work is incredible.

5 ★
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1,456 reviews24 followers
April 20, 2020
This book had all the feels! I had to pick the right time and headspace to take on this book. I didn’t read the note from the author until after I had read the epilogue. Glad I didn't read it beforehand.

I need to take a moment before I write my review.

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