This was a very well written book, I just didn't connect with the characters for the longest time. I felt that the writer did more telling than showing. Even when it was supposed to be Zane telling Ellis about his past, it was Ellis "telling" the reader, rather than Zane telling Ellis. It also felt a bit rushed. Within 4 months, Ellis goes from being a single dad, vowing to never get married again, to in love and getting married again. Zane was quite sweet, although he felt a bit too good to be true. Perfect boyfriend, perfect stand in parent, perfect everything. The custody issues with the ex came as no surprise, and I didn't think that the stuff from Zane's past cropping back up really added to the story at all. It felt like it was just stuck in as an afterthought, a way to stick a bit more drama into things, and then was over and forgotten in a flash. Everything would have been exactly the same if that bit had been totally left out of the story. Really, a disappointing story, considering how much I've loved other books by this author.
Oh and I almost forgot! Unprotected sex! Unprotected sex was had in this book. They barely knew each other at this point, but both took the other's word on "I'm clean", of course, because the condoms Zane had wouldn't fit Ellis's apparently large dick. With all the socially conscious, health conscious, everything has to be just so for my kid Ellis, it just didn't make sense that he would risk his health that way.