I found it dull & repetitive. If the repeated paragraphs were cut out it would have read as a short story. The story was very flat and didn’t have much substance. All children were all unrealistically sickly sweet, and had the same ‘voice’. It read like the one person talking to themselves.
The main character is a martyr and never steps wrong.
The romance doesn’t begin until the last few chapters and is slapped together.
I do think this would appeal to some people but it’s not for me.