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Falling Heart
The red string of fate that connects the two soul mates was broken by him, not me, never me.
The fate that was decided by the moon goddess..he tried to change it ,not me.
Why then, was I punished..?
Zairiya grew up believing herself a curse and an outcast to the people she belonged to.She was banished by her pack as she entered this world.Mother Nature took pity on her and granted her only wish, Aeran as her mate, but even that was a cruel joke played on her by the fate.She loved and loved from the very core of her being ,she gave everything for that love,for Aeran, crossing all boundaries to acquire the unattainable love of her mate.
But maybe that was not enough.
Then something disastrous happened and her very soul blackened, turning all that love to hatred so cruel that nothing mattered to her anymore.
Finally she gave in and lost herself forever.
...
Let me tell you a story of love, a story of betrayal, a story of death, a story of Zairi and Aeran.
The fate that was decided by the moon goddess..he tried to change it ,not me.
Why then, was I punished..?
Zairiya grew up believing herself a curse and an outcast to the people she belonged to.She was banished by her pack as she entered this world.Mother Nature took pity on her and granted her only wish, Aeran as her mate, but even that was a cruel joke played on her by the fate.She loved and loved from the very core of her being ,she gave everything for that love,for Aeran, crossing all boundaries to acquire the unattainable love of her mate.
But maybe that was not enough.
Then something disastrous happened and her very soul blackened, turning all that love to hatred so cruel that nothing mattered to her anymore.
Finally she gave in and lost herself forever.
...
Let me tell you a story of love, a story of betrayal, a story of death, a story of Zairi and Aeran.
309 pages, ebook
Published January 20, 2020
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December 23, 2022
So, not for the faint of heart this one.
It’s a paranormal and a very complex one and has many triggers, mostly physical and emotional abuse, cheating, aaaannnnd cliffhanger because it’s the first of a series, but since I lllllllloved it so very very much I think I’ll read the other installments without cussing as my usual because the book ended like that.
The book is much more than a paranormal story.
It’s a perfect example of so many psychological themes that I rejoiced it all the time.
The plot is about a girl, the daughter of a witch who was banned from the pack she belonged even if she’s a good witch and not an evil one.
The girl is innocent and nice and has a crush on the alpha of the pack who hates and rejected both her and her mother. Werewolves pack that is.
The alpha is in love with another she wolf and rejects our heroine, but his granny asks him - more forces him though- to marry the girl without explaining why she wants this.
He marries her but doesn’t recognize her at all and both he and his nasty girlfriend and basically everyone in the pack except granny start abusing the girl both physically and emotionally with refined and utter cruelty to a girl whose only sin was to try to please an old woman’s wishes.
Here we have the perfect demo of how individuals can commit atrocities when they belong to a group because they start to think and act as a group more than individuals, the so called group thinking, with all its biases and prejudices that bring them to behave like monsters.
And the heroine is the typical rejected member that only want to be accepted and loved and ends losing everything that matters because she can’t stop this madness and is too inside it to realize that it’s a losing game.
Beautiful and well done.
The pack turn into a band of criminals that behave with inhumane cruelty and without an ounce of respect to a girl who has been always seen as an outsider, an enemy.
Why? They don’t know. Because the group don’t think and don’t analyze their actions and beliefs, they simply act.
It’s a brute force in all its beastly display.
Eventually the girl turns into something else, because this is a paranormal and it’s allowed to dream that she can in the end serve instant karma to everyone who damaged and hurt her, and then some.
So it turns out she’s the most powerful witch of all and now that the pack took everything from her she wants revenge.
And she delivers it, oh how she does!
Nobody is exempt, not even dear granny with her hypocritical attitude of goody two shoes person, the one who belongs to the evil pack who exiled the witch and the child and now she would like to have it her way because she knows the child now young woman could mean the end of their wolfie community. She makes them pay, starting from the idiot so called hero that, when he understands he has lost her and that she’s his true mate, the only one who can really make him happy, he becomes suddenly all loving and smitten.
Too little too late, coward: she forgives no one.
But there is so much more her and for once I don’t want to spoil too much.
There’s a strange and peculiar character that we are not able to identify but it seems he’s so very interconnected to our heroine and is a very powerful and interesting one.
No more.
Anyway there are many things I liked:
- the heroine is vengeful and doesn’t forgive the hero nor any other who hurt her.
- she doesn’t want to take him back in the end, even if he doesn’t lose hope.
- it is original, with some Dracula vibes that are really Bram stoker and not vampire diaries at all.
- the group dynamics are very well done and very interesting.
Some things it didn’t appreciate
- the editing isn’t very good, there are mistakes that could have been avoided but this is self publishing for you.
- the hero. He’s a worthless beta, not alpha at all. He abuses the heroine just because he can, he’s cruel and abusive and then he would like to be forgiven. It’s all about him.
- there’s a moment in the book where the relationship of the hero with ow is ending, and I have the impression that the author tried to make it a real love story. The heroine seems to be moved by the true love of ow for the hero, and the hero thinks that he will always remember ow with affection and she will always be his favorite person. I hated this part. This is the same woman who hurt the heroine physically and emotionally, who lied telling the hero she had hurt her, who had sex with the hero while he was married to the heroine. No, sorry, no soft feelings for her at all.
Eventually we don’t know what will be of the pack and of the hero in the end of this book, but I think that, with a view to a reasonable solution, this pack need to be destroyed, and the hero, who’s their direct representative, must be sacrificed first.
In fact, as it happens when some societies and social groups are too corrupted and evil, every kind of redemption becomes impossible and the only choice possible is to complete change the entire system. There come revolutions of people.
In the end I don’t know if this book is for everyone, but in the gray and monotonous world that is now the present romance, I appreciated it very much.
It’s a paranormal and a very complex one and has many triggers, mostly physical and emotional abuse, cheating, aaaannnnd cliffhanger because it’s the first of a series, but since I lllllllloved it so very very much I think I’ll read the other installments without cussing as my usual because the book ended like that.
The book is much more than a paranormal story.
It’s a perfect example of so many psychological themes that I rejoiced it all the time.
The plot is about a girl, the daughter of a witch who was banned from the pack she belonged even if she’s a good witch and not an evil one.
The girl is innocent and nice and has a crush on the alpha of the pack who hates and rejected both her and her mother. Werewolves pack that is.
The alpha is in love with another she wolf and rejects our heroine, but his granny asks him - more forces him though- to marry the girl without explaining why she wants this.
He marries her but doesn’t recognize her at all and both he and his nasty girlfriend and basically everyone in the pack except granny start abusing the girl both physically and emotionally with refined and utter cruelty to a girl whose only sin was to try to please an old woman’s wishes.
Here we have the perfect demo of how individuals can commit atrocities when they belong to a group because they start to think and act as a group more than individuals, the so called group thinking, with all its biases and prejudices that bring them to behave like monsters.
And the heroine is the typical rejected member that only want to be accepted and loved and ends losing everything that matters because she can’t stop this madness and is too inside it to realize that it’s a losing game.
Beautiful and well done.
The pack turn into a band of criminals that behave with inhumane cruelty and without an ounce of respect to a girl who has been always seen as an outsider, an enemy.
Why? They don’t know. Because the group don’t think and don’t analyze their actions and beliefs, they simply act.
It’s a brute force in all its beastly display.
Eventually the girl turns into something else, because this is a paranormal and it’s allowed to dream that she can in the end serve instant karma to everyone who damaged and hurt her, and then some.
So it turns out she’s the most powerful witch of all and now that the pack took everything from her she wants revenge.
And she delivers it, oh how she does!
Nobody is exempt, not even dear granny with her hypocritical attitude of goody two shoes person, the one who belongs to the evil pack who exiled the witch and the child and now she would like to have it her way because she knows the child now young woman could mean the end of their wolfie community. She makes them pay, starting from the idiot so called hero that, when he understands he has lost her and that she’s his true mate, the only one who can really make him happy, he becomes suddenly all loving and smitten.
Too little too late, coward: she forgives no one.
But there is so much more her and for once I don’t want to spoil too much.
There’s a strange and peculiar character that we are not able to identify but it seems he’s so very interconnected to our heroine and is a very powerful and interesting one.
No more.
Anyway there are many things I liked:
- the heroine is vengeful and doesn’t forgive the hero nor any other who hurt her.
- she doesn’t want to take him back in the end, even if he doesn’t lose hope.
- it is original, with some Dracula vibes that are really Bram stoker and not vampire diaries at all.
- the group dynamics are very well done and very interesting.
Some things it didn’t appreciate
- the editing isn’t very good, there are mistakes that could have been avoided but this is self publishing for you.
- the hero. He’s a worthless beta, not alpha at all. He abuses the heroine just because he can, he’s cruel and abusive and then he would like to be forgiven. It’s all about him.
- there’s a moment in the book where the relationship of the hero with ow is ending, and I have the impression that the author tried to make it a real love story. The heroine seems to be moved by the true love of ow for the hero, and the hero thinks that he will always remember ow with affection and she will always be his favorite person. I hated this part. This is the same woman who hurt the heroine physically and emotionally, who lied telling the hero she had hurt her, who had sex with the hero while he was married to the heroine. No, sorry, no soft feelings for her at all.
Eventually we don’t know what will be of the pack and of the hero in the end of this book, but I think that, with a view to a reasonable solution, this pack need to be destroyed, and the hero, who’s their direct representative, must be sacrificed first.
In fact, as it happens when some societies and social groups are too corrupted and evil, every kind of redemption becomes impossible and the only choice possible is to complete change the entire system. There come revolutions of people.
In the end I don’t know if this book is for everyone, but in the gray and monotonous world that is now the present romance, I appreciated it very much.
August 30, 2020
Totally engrossed. Ending sucked! What happens next?????
November 12, 2022
This book was probably one of my favorite books ever. It grabbed me from start to finish. I hated Aeran throughout most of the book. I still strongly disliked him when the book was finished, but I disliked him less as the book went on. I don’t think he can do anything to make me believe that he deserves Zairi again. Her character went through so much and came out so strong. She took so much until she reached her limit. And then she made everyone pay. The growth that she went through to become so powerful was incredible. It’s weird, but I find myself rooting for the mysterious stranger that we don’t know about yet. AI don’t know where this story is going to go, but I will be reading every single story to get to the conclusion. am currently waiting to finish book 2 when it is completed.
April 5, 2023
Fantastic!!! Great heroine. Edge of seat reading!!! But too many unanswered questions. Gotta read sequel immediately!!!
September 5, 2020
Loved this! Story just finished with a huge cliffhanger as well as a bunch of unanswered questions so am really hoping that this is just the first book about these two. Main characters were both engaging and their story made it very difficult to put down. By the end I really wanted them to have a HEA.
September 13, 2020
Well Kaaya Kaavvii, I pray you have a part 2 to this book. The entire book was amazing, and then out of nowhere the ending sucked. Bad. Please for the love of God, dont leave me hanging like this. I cant ....I need details. INEED MORE!!!!
November 30, 2020
Loved, loved, loved! This book! BUT im hoping the ending is written this way because you plan on releasing Book 2 which will be telling the story of her past with the other guy, then Zairi either having to choose which lover to stay with or making it work with both guys? Oh and Ravine ending up happily ever after with Zero of course 🤭 or Ravine back with Aeron and Zairi with silver haired lover. (All the possibilities are endless) just please I beseech you to let us know that you are working on book 2!?
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September 20, 2020
I was really enjoying the book. In the beginning I was annoyed they were making her so weak and loving an abusive person. It was filled with emotion. It kept me intrigued. However ended was to abrupt and did not flow with the rest of the book. Hopefully, a sequel happens to bring closure to the story that existed through the rest of the book.
July 24, 2022
This book, 1 year ago i would just read books from apps like Wattpad, readict, inkitt, etc. I cry with sad books. And i cried with every chapter of this book, i even stayed up till 7 A.M to finish it. I cried so much for our main character, the things that happened to her were so unfair and if i was her i would have given up. It was an emotional rollercoaster in my opinion.
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August 23, 2020
Just...ugh! I was thoroughly engrossed in this book! I had some serious extreme emotions when reading this but the one emotion missing most of the time was happiness. There was hardly any and as engrossed as I was it brought me down with it. I would absolutely read a sequel though.
August 8, 2020
This book completely sucked me in!! Wow, I was not expecting that. I want more!!
This is a lovers to enemies book on steroids!
This is a lovers to enemies book on steroids!
September 29, 2020
I didn’t read this on kindle but a free reading app. There were grammar mistakes, but this story made me forget them as it pulled me in. I hope there will be a second book.
November 1, 2020
I enjoyed all of the story except the cliff hanger ending. What happens next?
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June 25, 2021
Could not put this book down. The ending of this was unexpected and it just left you hanging. If that was the purpose, well done author.
October 6, 2020
Loved it. One of the best I have read in awhile. The main characters were fleshed out and loveable. Some of it was a bit whiney and drawn out too much, but not too bad. Did not like the cliffhanger.
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