I found this story fairly interesting, except for the part about Mary's stalker, that seemed like fluff to add pages to the book. But, it was difficult to read through all of the subject-verb agreement mistakes, misplaced modifiers, and the grammar mistakes. Sometimes you could accept the grammar as an uneducated character's grammar, but then when the same mistakes were made outside the quotes, it makes you wonder if Mr. Russell does not know the proper uses of lie, lay, and lain; and lay, laid, and laid. I would have to blame a lot of this on his staff, especially his proof reader(s). Where do they find them? Hey, I'll work cheap, just contact me. It always slays me in these stories that the crime is solved, but not because of good police work, but by pure happenstance. This time a person arrested for a DUI relates something he overheard in a bar that leads to the arrest and conviction; nothing but luck on the part of the sheriff's department, not good detective work.