i don't know much about writing erotica but i'm assuming the aim is to create a clear and vivid picture in the reader's head.. but when the writer writes lines like "his bush plane was filled to the gills with several rubbers" it is very ambiguous as to what we are meant to imagine. its straight out of lovecraft.
but, it is interesting how all the men of whiskey mountain have names like walker, beam, jameson and daniels. its great world building, yet the author misses an opportunity to name the female characters after things like prosecco, cruiser and shandy. and how come the characters are always licking their lips? maybe it's a whiskey mountain thing, but in my real life i very rarely ever see people licking their lips unless they are eating a delicious ice cream or spag bog. and even then, they'll usually wipe their mouth with the back of their hand
and i was hoping this book would be set in the ozarks or appalachia, but somehow its set in alaska, which makes me worry about the shirtless man on the cover catching a cold, and maybe this is why he needs several layers of latex protection to avoid frostbite.
men of whiskey mountain may titilate the clowns living in bizarro world or lala land, but i am a normal person