Firstly, I hate stories where the woman refuses to tell the baby’s father about her pregnancy. Even a one night stand, it’s not on, unless the heroine has no way of tracing the father, and in a relationship that has gone on for a couple of months - it’s absolutely unacceptable. So first strike against Isla.
I really disliked Isla, the heroine, and her subsequent behaviour, once Rafe, the hero found out about the baby was just so ridiculously over the top and unbelievable that I wanted to slap her despite not believing in violence!
Her constant pity party (woe is me, I am not good enough, no one can love me, I am not worthy, I am bad and unlovable and he will hate me) was just too over the top and so utterly unbelievable.
The way she constantly argued, attacked, resisted and rejected him was just tiresome and frustrating.
I am totally fed up with stories about heroines who experience bad fostering and whose emotional wounds are caused by the lack of love in childhood. The reality is that a child who is unloved in the first five years of its life, rarely learns how to love. The psychological damage is far worse than anything a writer comes up with. For it to be used as a convenient but implausible would for the heroine is just horrid.
Sorry, the author writes well and there were the makings of a good story here but I was disappointed in the execution. I liked the hero and was impressed with how hard he tried to take on his responsibilities.
The heroine was simply in a pain in the butt. Her angst about the topless photos was just so stupid and totally insufficient for her fears. I half expected she’s been working as a prostitute for several years considering how fearful she was about the story coming out.
Sorry - not my cup of tea. I like stories that are more subtle, more nuanced and more emotionally satisfying!