They gave me two times the fun. And now I have one big little problem.
The Haywood Boys are famous celebrities. And they both wanted to hook up with me. At the same time. We knew it would be a night of double pleasure. And it sure was- beyond my wildest fantasies. But we didn't know what consequences would result. I can't believe I'm having their baby. And I don't even know which one is the dad. This could ruin their careers, and mine. But both of them seem intent on helping me raise this child.
Will this result in double the heartache? Or double the happy ever after?
Full length standalone ménage novel. No cheating. No cliffhangers. No M/M action. Just two guys pleasing one leading lady and one big- and very hot- happily ever after for all of them.
This has some of the worst dialogue I have ever read! It's like bad porno dialogue bad! And, there's needs to be some serious editing because there are tons of mistakes. Overall, it's the worst MMF romance I've ever read.
Reading this was like reading the instructions on a recipe. Wrong names were used. Sex scenes were confused.. I stuck through the entire thing hoping it got better, but it didn't. Two stars just because it is a favored genre.
Take Two by Mia Masters and Ryan Ramsay is an enjoyable MMF book with several spelling, grammatical, and continuity errors ( such as Clifton and Blake get their names mixed/interchanged at times & sometimes Leana is Leia & Clifton is NOT biologically related to Blake, but then the authors forgot and say they have the same mother named Isabel - which would make the two men having s*x with each other incest ) but it was worth reading anyway. I have read a few Mia Masters MMF & MMFM books in the past and at times I found her writing needed more; more character development, more background on the characters, more interesting s*x, just MORE.
This edition I read that she worked on with Ryan Ramsay is so much better than I expected. I understood and cared about the characters. I could feel the relationship between the characters developing and maturing, since “party boy man wh0res” don’t change overnight.
I really liked Mallory’s mother, she is a sweet mom.
When Mallory got the paternity test results from Omega Genetics, I was sooo happy I cheered!
I would give this book 4 1/2 stars due to the many errors I mentioned above that needed to be corrected in the version I read.
I hope Mia Masters and Ryan Ramsay write more MMF books together.
An one night threesome leads to an interesting situation. Mallory discovers she's pregnant and contacts Blake who takes a prenatal pregnancy test. Blake and Clifton have never forgotten Mallory and are eager to see her again. Clifton helps Mallory deal with some of the fallout while Blake acts as a buffer. When the results come back, they are unusual. Together Blake, Clifton and Mallory deal with it and come up with a solution. With Mallory's urging, Blake and Clifton explore their own attraction and are even happier. The three have a commitment ceremony and are very happy with their new family with their twins.
I will start off by stating I love reverse harem stories. So this story with 3 actors intrigued me. Sorry to say the writing was overly detailed, meaning explaining minute details like how the chef made her tea from boiling it to giving it to her. Wow to much. Then there is the many, and I mean many grammar and spelling errors. Not to mention mixing up the 2 MMC names quite a lot. I probably will not read another one of this author's books for awhile, until she improves on her overall writing and editing.
One Life Changing Decision: By Korkoi - It is a beautifully written storyline, about three people living stagnant public lives, who are inadvertently brought together. Their new circumstance leads them to discover a life they always wanted, but didn’t have the confidence to acknowledge. This story is one that you need to read in one sitting, as you will not be able to put it down once you start.
I received a copy of this ARC and I am voluntarily leaving a review.
The author definitely needed someone to proof read the story as I found numerous mistakes where she wrote the wrong characters name. It seems she could not keep her male lovers name straight in her head. Or she she told a plot point to one of her lovers and on the next page received the news she already mentioned. Disappointing
I didnt mind the story so much but there was a few things I didn't care about in the story and one of them was that the writer would get the guys name wrong when meaning to say the other. You would have to read to know what I ment. Even tho somethings I didn't care about the FMC I loved how she was very strong and confident. Not shy one bit.
Take Two is book one in the series Take Them by authors Mia Masters & R. Ramsay. Well this was interesting and a bit gritty which I found delightful. There were so typos and some name changes that confused me at times. But nothing worth making me stop reading or wanting more. Enjoy!!
A good storyline, well written, it is steamy, I loved the characters, it is MFM. It kept my interest all the way through. It is a fast read. I voluntarily reviewed an advance reader copy of this book and gave my honest opinion.
Wow I didn't want to put the book down. I can't wait to read her other books. I would recommend them. My favorite character is Blake. But I loved how she couldn't chose just one of them.
Love the story. Only reason I am not giving a 5⭐ review is that this book needs to be revised and re-edited. There were many instances where the were names reversed on the male main characters.
Three way sex can be exciting but, when the names and verbs hop around making no sense it can be terrible. Really good story and hot sex in spite of the difficulty reading.
Couldn't even finish the book. The writing was really bad, and 13 year old could have done this better. The characters were very shallow, especially the two boys. Their fighting over Mallory reminded me of the behavior of 3 year old children.
I thought the story was boring and didn’t have a lot of substance. It was sex sex sex, no real emotions with Mallory other than her being horney all the time! Blah blah blah
For the love of everything... hire a top-notch editor. Proofread your work. Spellcheck does not catch wrong pronouns, homonyms, etc. Proof. Read. Dammit!
I loved this wonderful and steamy story of two men and one woman who start out just having incredible sex together, fall in love, and have an amazing family together❣️👌🏼
Mallory had one unforgettable night with Blake and Clifton Haywood and while it was enjoyable it had circumstances that will affect all three. Both Blake and Clifton can't help but think about Mallory and both would like a repeat performance. Blake just feels like he has managed to finally get Mallory out of his thoughts when she contacts him to advise that she is pregnant and asks him to take a paternity test. Readers will love how the author weaves the tale of two men and one woman with all falling in love and supporting each other and I highly recommend this book.
Good story.......BUT, overall quality of writing wasn't :( The flow was choppy and the intimacy scenes were cut and dry. Now passion or steam. You get a happy ending only because after 50%, I skipped to the end to find out. By the way, who would drive a vehicle and allow your pregnant partner have sex with the other partner, and allow her to be out of the seatbelt? Really??? This definitely needs work.
This was not just some erotic book it was an all out unexpected love story just with three people instead of two. What they thought was a one time three way left the fellas craving and left her pregnant. They realized they maybe in love while she feared they'd be upset to learn she was pregnant. A true family affair when their news has to be shared with family and due to the celebrity status of all involved dealing with the media.
Who would have seen that coming? Not me. But I guess I should have. How can someone get so lucky to have two of Hollywood's hottest men, the Haywood brothers fall for you at the same time? Blake is the movie star while his brother Clayton is the star of a TV show. Mallory is an up and coming star and together they make a hell of a family.
Maybe I am burned out on this trope. I've read other stories by different author's that actually have a storyline. This is sex anyway, how where it could be done. Minimal story was waiting for DNA. For her to walk out of the hospital after giving birth? Sorry, and if they shared before, why was that not a thought in the back of their mind beforehand?
When you party & take the necessary measures you don't expect to end up expecting. Mallory went to after party for the awards and slept with the Haywood brothers. But then she finds out she pregnant. She tells Blake first and then Clifton. She has the test done with Blake and wait for the results. But surprises.
Just too much sex involved. Yes there is a story, but it's all about the very graphic descriptions of the seeds that was too much for me. I know other people read it for that, but I want more story and less descriptive sexual relations. I still like to read those reverse harem stories as they have great stories with a lot less sex.
It was not hot. There was no story as the threesome had already happened before it starts and then they get together again only because Mellory is pregnant. They don't talk about their feelings .... it's just sex and that not even hot one.
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