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Until September
“I was so young when it all began that the blame hardly feels like mine. …”
In the lull between the conservative ’50s and the turbulent ’60s, Kyle Ryan Quinn, an introspective, sentimental boy, leads a golden life. He’s rich, beautiful and smart, and he summers every year on the same island with the same group of friends. Haunted by the ghosts of a tragedy that took place in his youth, Kyle is more sensitive than his privileged peers. He understands loss, and secrets.
When he meets Jack Averill, a quiet, bookish boy, his fateful 18th summer on the island, Kyle attempts to integrate him into his tight-knit yet troubled circle while at the same time he’s pursued by another summer boy, and his best friend toys with the affections of an island girl. Amid mounting familial, sexual and peer pressures, all four young men make heartbreaking decisions that will steal their innocence, destroy lives and consume them forever.
Until September is not just another coming-out or coming-of-age story. It’s an authentically emotional tale of obsessive first love with vivid, relatable characters who will take your breath away and break your heart. If you like Brokeback Mountain and Call Me By Your Name, you’ll fall in love with Kyle as he navigates his own summer of love.
In the lull between the conservative ’50s and the turbulent ’60s, Kyle Ryan Quinn, an introspective, sentimental boy, leads a golden life. He’s rich, beautiful and smart, and he summers every year on the same island with the same group of friends. Haunted by the ghosts of a tragedy that took place in his youth, Kyle is more sensitive than his privileged peers. He understands loss, and secrets.
When he meets Jack Averill, a quiet, bookish boy, his fateful 18th summer on the island, Kyle attempts to integrate him into his tight-knit yet troubled circle while at the same time he’s pursued by another summer boy, and his best friend toys with the affections of an island girl. Amid mounting familial, sexual and peer pressures, all four young men make heartbreaking decisions that will steal their innocence, destroy lives and consume them forever.
Until September is not just another coming-out or coming-of-age story. It’s an authentically emotional tale of obsessive first love with vivid, relatable characters who will take your breath away and break your heart. If you like Brokeback Mountain and Call Me By Your Name, you’ll fall in love with Kyle as he navigates his own summer of love.
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Published July 8, 2019
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Harker Jones
5 books28 followersHarker Jones is the author of the best-selling, award-winning love story “Until September” and the acclaimed young-adult thriller “Never Have I Ever” and the celebrated children’s book “The Bird Who Was Afraid to Fly.” His short thrillers “Cole & Colette” and “One-Hit Wonder” have been accepted into more than 60 film festivals combined, garnering several awards. He was managing editor of “Out” magazine for seven years and is currently a theater critic for Broadway World. A published poet, he is a member of the Los Angeles Drama Critics Circle, the Dramatists Guild of America, the Horror Writers Association and Mensa. He loves cats and carbs and would like to be a pop star but would settle for being killed in a slasher movie.
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May 25, 2025
3⭐
Genre ~ LGBT romance ~MM
Publication date ~ July 8, 2019
Page Count ~ 453
POV ~ multiple 3rd
Featuring ~ YA, teenagers, coming of age, references to suicide, abortion, depression, homophobia, minimal steamage
Kyle summers with his 4 best friends ~ Trent, Carly, Claudia and Dana.
He sees Jack when they're all hanging out one day and is instantly obsessed with seeing and getting to know him. He eventually finds the courage to talk to him and he brings him into his friendship circle. There is just something about Jack that makes him want to spend every waking moment together. His friend group has been tight knit for years, though, and they don't let outsiders in easily, which leads to Kyle pulling away from them. Trent is used to them be being inseparable, so when his bff isn't around as much as he used to be he makes some bad choices that will drive a deeper wedge between them. I did feel bad for Trent because I could feel his disappointment in losing his friend and, also, his sadness that Kyle didn't feel like he could tell anyone he was gay.
Other characters of note are Kyle parents, Jack's parents and another boy, Trey.
It's broken up into 6 parts ~ May, June, July, August, September & Winter. Each section does not have numbered chapters in the general sense, but each 'chapter' is on the shorter side, which I appreciate, however it still felt a bit long. It was a bit repetitive as they really did the same things over and over again, such as going to the lagoon, hanging on the beach, playing volleyball, drinking and playing truth or dare.
Kyle has been depressed for years due to his brother's suicide. Jack slowly brings light back into his life until September comes and homophobia drives Jack out of town and the light dims again. Kyle is then on another obsessive mission trying to find him. I liked that Trent accompanied him on this adventure, and quite an adventure it was.
Overall, I liked it well enough and I felt the author did a nice job of depicting how first love is and how you feel you can't live without them, but in turn it was a little too obsessive for me. And I'm not just talking about Kyle/Jack as there's another bout of jealously going on with another character. I'm happy to say I was not expecting that ending, but it left me feeling rather sad.
*Thanks to the author for sending me a copy. I am voluntarily leaving my honest review*
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Genre ~ LGBT romance ~MM
Publication date ~ July 8, 2019
Page Count ~ 453
POV ~ multiple 3rd
Featuring ~ YA, teenagers, coming of age, references to suicide, abortion, depression, homophobia, minimal steamage
Kyle summers with his 4 best friends ~ Trent, Carly, Claudia and Dana.
He sees Jack when they're all hanging out one day and is instantly obsessed with seeing and getting to know him. He eventually finds the courage to talk to him and he brings him into his friendship circle. There is just something about Jack that makes him want to spend every waking moment together. His friend group has been tight knit for years, though, and they don't let outsiders in easily, which leads to Kyle pulling away from them. Trent is used to them be being inseparable, so when his bff isn't around as much as he used to be he makes some bad choices that will drive a deeper wedge between them. I did feel bad for Trent because I could feel his disappointment in losing his friend and, also, his sadness that Kyle didn't feel like he could tell anyone he was gay.
Other characters of note are Kyle parents, Jack's parents and another boy, Trey.
It's broken up into 6 parts ~ May, June, July, August, September & Winter. Each section does not have numbered chapters in the general sense, but each 'chapter' is on the shorter side, which I appreciate, however it still felt a bit long. It was a bit repetitive as they really did the same things over and over again, such as going to the lagoon, hanging on the beach, playing volleyball, drinking and playing truth or dare.
Kyle has been depressed for years due to his brother's suicide. Jack slowly brings light back into his life until September comes and homophobia drives Jack out of town and the light dims again. Kyle is then on another obsessive mission trying to find him. I liked that Trent accompanied him on this adventure, and quite an adventure it was.
Overall, I liked it well enough and I felt the author did a nice job of depicting how first love is and how you feel you can't live without them, but in turn it was a little too obsessive for me. And I'm not just talking about Kyle/Jack as there's another bout of jealously going on with another character. I'm happy to say I was not expecting that ending, but it left me feeling rather sad.
*Thanks to the author for sending me a copy. I am voluntarily leaving my honest review*
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July 12, 2024
What a beautiful, yet heartbreaking coming-of-age story.
Oh how I love these type of books! You feel the melancholy pouring out of the text since the first chapter. You know something devastating is going to happen, but you can't look away. The writing is beautiful, so poetic and sad. I was captivated and devoured the book in two days. I need more.
Kyle and Jack's story started like many others: two boys meet, fall in love and the rest is history. Yet, amid the 50s/60s, they have to hide their love or suffer the consequences.
I think the circle of friends that Kyle had and what happened to it showed a very common story of the carefree teenage years: people who thought they were going to remain the same forever change. You grow up, you choose your way in life. Sometimes, you leave your teenage summer friend behind. That's just life and this book painted a realistic, yet sad portrait of that fact.
I did feel like the time period could have been mentioned more; there were times when I felt a bit confused since it kind of felt like that it could have been 90s or so. Or maybe I'm just overthinking. Also, at times Kyle's language felt a bit too philosophical, didn't feel very teenager-ish.
I felt like my heart was slowly breaking towards the end. With every page, it became darker and darker. Until it was over and I just felt void. It ended not how I expected, however, very fitting & honestly I can't imagine it being any different.
Until September felt similar to Lie with me(P. Besson) or Call me by your name(A. Aciman). If you liked them, this book will be right up your alley.
Thanks to NetGalley for the book.
Oh how I love these type of books! You feel the melancholy pouring out of the text since the first chapter. You know something devastating is going to happen, but you can't look away. The writing is beautiful, so poetic and sad. I was captivated and devoured the book in two days. I need more.
Kyle and Jack's story started like many others: two boys meet, fall in love and the rest is history. Yet, amid the 50s/60s, they have to hide their love or suffer the consequences.
I think the circle of friends that Kyle had and what happened to it showed a very common story of the carefree teenage years: people who thought they were going to remain the same forever change. You grow up, you choose your way in life. Sometimes, you leave your teenage summer friend behind. That's just life and this book painted a realistic, yet sad portrait of that fact.
I did feel like the time period could have been mentioned more; there were times when I felt a bit confused since it kind of felt like that it could have been 90s or so. Or maybe I'm just overthinking. Also, at times Kyle's language felt a bit too philosophical, didn't feel very teenager-ish.
I felt like my heart was slowly breaking towards the end. With every page, it became darker and darker. Until it was over and I just felt void. It ended not how I expected, however, very fitting & honestly I can't imagine it being any different.
Until September felt similar to Lie with me(P. Besson) or Call me by your name(A. Aciman). If you liked them, this book will be right up your alley.
Thanks to NetGalley for the book.
September 9, 2022
I read this book because the author grew up in the small town I currently live in and he is coming to speak at our library. I have trouble categorizing this book and even deciding how to rate it. The beginning reads like a traditional first love romance with the added dimension they are a same-sex couple in the nebulous time between the late 50s and early 60s. It could be an emotional story about a group of friends except most of the friends' characters are not fleshed out enough for that. For the longest time I couldn't keep track of the girls in Kyle's friend group because not enough was said about them. Even quick descriptions of how they looked would have helped me form a picture and know who was who. It could be a great coming of age family drama but that storyline also seems to fall short. About two-thirds of the way through it becomes a road trip story with a lot of heartbreak which all felt a bit rushed. The story basically ends as a tragedy with the main character pining away for lost love. While I appreciate Jones's ambitious undertaking I think trying to put too much into the book diluted the storylines. There were anachronisms that pulled me out of the story, particularly in regards to Kyle's car. For the time period, I would not expect a convertible automobile to be an automatic and I also would not expect its teen occupants, who seem to care little for their well-being, to be wearing seatbelts. I do look forward to hearing the author speak and hearing any insights he gives about his writing process.
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December 28, 2023
3.5 Stars - Rounded down
The first 85% of Until September by Harker Jones is hauntingly beautiful.
As best I can tell Until September is the only novel Mr. Jones has published. With so much promise I hope he'll release another and that his new novel will be considerably more life-affirming.
The first 85% of Until September by Harker Jones is hauntingly beautiful.
As best I can tell Until September is the only novel Mr. Jones has published. With so much promise I hope he'll release another and that his new novel will be considerably more life-affirming.
April 24, 2023
Harker Jones’ Until September is the touching story of Kyle, set in the “in the lull between the conservative ’50s and the turbulent ’60”, that focuses on his last summer alongside his friends, just before life sets them apart for college – and for a number of other unfortunate reasons. A gay coming-of-age romance novel, it embraces a rather realistic love story that many other novels of its type tend to idealize. Until September comprises the raw, emotional aspects of relationships that ultimately change the life course of the protagonists and implicitly have an impact on those they are surrounded by.
Contouring the characters and their development throughout the novel is undeniably the author’s strong point, at least when it comes to this rather underappreciated novel. The way they are written into their circumstances and the interaction between them nearly “forces” the reader to sympathize with them, both when it comes to their despair and happiest experiences. The approach to the idea of teenage friendships is quite authentic and not sugar-coated, meaning that the emotional responses and their mental states are strongly reflected in the group’s dynamics. Although the novel began a bit slow, it certainly picked up and eventually became not one of those coming-of-age stories that keep the reader engaged through events and twists, but one of those that immerse the reader into the story precisely for its honest depiction of certain experiences – death, heartache, teenage pregnancy.
The only thing I would object to is the prolonged ending that perhaps wasn’t necessary as the central idea was perfectly introduced and the reader could easily deduce how things would turn out in the end. The storyline and writing style kept on reminding me of Call Me by Your Name and, if anything, Until September is probably the second novel of its type, after André Aciman’s, that truthfully and painfully portray what reality looked like for many teenagers, especially those born in a period that wasn’t very accommodating or welcoming for gay people. If you are looking for a pleasant but saddening read, for a novel about passion, grief, losing one’s self or heartbreak, Harker Jones’ book is for you. A big thank you to the author for sending me a copy of his book in exchange for an honest review.
Contouring the characters and their development throughout the novel is undeniably the author’s strong point, at least when it comes to this rather underappreciated novel. The way they are written into their circumstances and the interaction between them nearly “forces” the reader to sympathize with them, both when it comes to their despair and happiest experiences. The approach to the idea of teenage friendships is quite authentic and not sugar-coated, meaning that the emotional responses and their mental states are strongly reflected in the group’s dynamics. Although the novel began a bit slow, it certainly picked up and eventually became not one of those coming-of-age stories that keep the reader engaged through events and twists, but one of those that immerse the reader into the story precisely for its honest depiction of certain experiences – death, heartache, teenage pregnancy.
The only thing I would object to is the prolonged ending that perhaps wasn’t necessary as the central idea was perfectly introduced and the reader could easily deduce how things would turn out in the end. The storyline and writing style kept on reminding me of Call Me by Your Name and, if anything, Until September is probably the second novel of its type, after André Aciman’s, that truthfully and painfully portray what reality looked like for many teenagers, especially those born in a period that wasn’t very accommodating or welcoming for gay people. If you are looking for a pleasant but saddening read, for a novel about passion, grief, losing one’s self or heartbreak, Harker Jones’ book is for you. A big thank you to the author for sending me a copy of his book in exchange for an honest review.
February 19, 2025
On the surface, “Until Summer” follows Kyle on his final summer before he and his core group of very rich and privileged friends, leave their summer island homes behind for college. This is the last summer they can play their games and catch up and live carefree and wild lives together. Some more than others, like Trent who seems to make a sport out of making the local girls fall for him and then breaking their hearts and destroying their lives. There’s very much a “Dirty” Dancing” kind of vibe between the rich visitors that come every year, and the locals that wait upon them. Kyle is more sensitive than his friends, a closeted gay boy who isn’t looking for the same kind of sexual conquests as his friends, until The Boy appears and suddenly all of Kyle’s attention, his purpose for breathing and thinking, becomes Jack. When the author says this is a book about obsessive first love, he wasn’t kidding.
The story can really be boiled down to Kyle and Jack falling in love, sneaking around with one another, afraid of getting caught, and then being ripped away from one another, followed by Kyle relentlessly trying to find Jack again. That story is interesting, and heartbreaking all on its own. And “Until September” IS heartbreaking, and not just because of the whole teenage love aspect. There are some genuinely dark aspects in this book with mentions of suicide for several characters and Kyle’s pretty heavy depression. But the book also lags quite considerably as we’re slowly brought through the every day life of Kyle and Jack being teenage boys in love, and then a teenage boy with such an obsessive quest to find Jack again that you have to wonder why Kyle’s family didn’t get him real psychiatric help as Kyle becomes mad with hunting down Jack. The author has a knack for emotional writing, but Kyle’s constant waxing poetic means that there’s little room for character growth for any of the friends, making them all little more than set dressing. Which includes Trent whose decisions cost someone their life and did not get the page time that kind of topic really deserved.
It's hard to really reconcile the haunting narrative style and the beautiful prose with the slow pacing and the sudden shifts in POV at the end that ultimately led to a bit of an unsatisfying ending. Do not except a HEA in this story! Not that these kinds of books have to have one, but even when things were “golden” there’s a lot of underlining depression and anxiety that weighs even tender moments down. Ultimately, the mundane aspects of Kyle and Jack’s time together could have been paired down to give Trent and the rest of the friends more agency in the story, and the obsessive nature of Kyle’s yearning probably should have been a red flag to everyone over the years which diminished the “sweet” aspect of first love, hence why this book gets 3 stars. But the author does write beautifully and I think really captures the essence of a coming-out and coming-of-age story in a time period heavy with homophobia. Just know going into this contemporary gay romance that it can get very dark and heavy at times. And thanks to the author for providing an ebook for review!
The story can really be boiled down to Kyle and Jack falling in love, sneaking around with one another, afraid of getting caught, and then being ripped away from one another, followed by Kyle relentlessly trying to find Jack again. That story is interesting, and heartbreaking all on its own. And “Until September” IS heartbreaking, and not just because of the whole teenage love aspect. There are some genuinely dark aspects in this book with mentions of suicide for several characters and Kyle’s pretty heavy depression. But the book also lags quite considerably as we’re slowly brought through the every day life of Kyle and Jack being teenage boys in love, and then a teenage boy with such an obsessive quest to find Jack again that you have to wonder why Kyle’s family didn’t get him real psychiatric help as Kyle becomes mad with hunting down Jack. The author has a knack for emotional writing, but Kyle’s constant waxing poetic means that there’s little room for character growth for any of the friends, making them all little more than set dressing. Which includes Trent whose decisions cost someone their life and did not get the page time that kind of topic really deserved.
It's hard to really reconcile the haunting narrative style and the beautiful prose with the slow pacing and the sudden shifts in POV at the end that ultimately led to a bit of an unsatisfying ending. Do not except a HEA in this story! Not that these kinds of books have to have one, but even when things were “golden” there’s a lot of underlining depression and anxiety that weighs even tender moments down. Ultimately, the mundane aspects of Kyle and Jack’s time together could have been paired down to give Trent and the rest of the friends more agency in the story, and the obsessive nature of Kyle’s yearning probably should have been a red flag to everyone over the years which diminished the “sweet” aspect of first love, hence why this book gets 3 stars. But the author does write beautifully and I think really captures the essence of a coming-out and coming-of-age story in a time period heavy with homophobia. Just know going into this contemporary gay romance that it can get very dark and heavy at times. And thanks to the author for providing an ebook for review!
August 6, 2024
I fell headfirst into Until September and didn’t want to leave, despite the fact that it truly broke my heart at times. Harker Jones writes in such a way that I didn’t so much feel as if I was reading, more that I was a ghost in Kyle’s world, watching his life play out before me in vivid hues of sunlight.
Kyle has been blessed in life in some ways, he’s rich, beautiful and smart. Every summer, him and his family go to their second house on a beautiful island, where he spends long summer days with his friends. But Kyle is haunted by the ghosts of his past, and being sensitive, he struggles to always relate to those around him. Then comes the summer when Jack arrives in his life; and suddenly, everything changes.
For me personally, the writing was just captivating and I hung on every carefully chosen word. Jones has written such a powerful and painful exploration of feeling, and how everything we do and the way we move in the world creates impacts we’re not even aware of. I found the characters emotions very raw and relatable, especially as the novel gives the readers very honest depictions of passion, death, heartache and longing.
I think Jones makes some very smart choices, and doesn’t choose to slip into what would be easy clichés for a gratifying outcome. Although painful at times, the characters experiences feel weighted in reality, especially as we weren’t gifted with a predictable ending.
There was something ethereal about Kyle’s world, and I longed to be a teenager within it, as I lost myself in nostalgia of a very different time. Amongst the teenage angst and tension, I found real beauty and a truthful portrayal.
In all honesty, I’ve never before highlighted so many phrases on a first read of a book, but I just found it all so poetic. There will definitely also be a reread, if I ever recover!
Until September is a beautiful, heart wrenching novel. It seems unfair to just say, it’s a coming of age novel, I found it much, much more than that.
Thank you to NetGalley for providing this novel in exchange for an honest review.
Kyle has been blessed in life in some ways, he’s rich, beautiful and smart. Every summer, him and his family go to their second house on a beautiful island, where he spends long summer days with his friends. But Kyle is haunted by the ghosts of his past, and being sensitive, he struggles to always relate to those around him. Then comes the summer when Jack arrives in his life; and suddenly, everything changes.
For me personally, the writing was just captivating and I hung on every carefully chosen word. Jones has written such a powerful and painful exploration of feeling, and how everything we do and the way we move in the world creates impacts we’re not even aware of. I found the characters emotions very raw and relatable, especially as the novel gives the readers very honest depictions of passion, death, heartache and longing.
I think Jones makes some very smart choices, and doesn’t choose to slip into what would be easy clichés for a gratifying outcome. Although painful at times, the characters experiences feel weighted in reality, especially as we weren’t gifted with a predictable ending.
There was something ethereal about Kyle’s world, and I longed to be a teenager within it, as I lost myself in nostalgia of a very different time. Amongst the teenage angst and tension, I found real beauty and a truthful portrayal.
In all honesty, I’ve never before highlighted so many phrases on a first read of a book, but I just found it all so poetic. There will definitely also be a reread, if I ever recover!
Until September is a beautiful, heart wrenching novel. It seems unfair to just say, it’s a coming of age novel, I found it much, much more than that.
Thank you to NetGalley for providing this novel in exchange for an honest review.
August 6, 2024
2.5 stars, rounding down to 2. Not particularly compelling, I'm afraid to say. Did have some good parts, and I can see a fair amount of people liking this.
Many thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for a digital ARC of this book in exchange for my honest opinions.
Many thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for a digital ARC of this book in exchange for my honest opinions.
June 22, 2023
A bittersweet romance taking place in the summer, after all everything changes once September comes.
This was a wonderful novel taking place in the late 50’s where being homosexual was tantamount to a death sentence.
The romance between Kyle and Jack was realistic in its simplicity. The typical start, with the turbulent times, gave way to a lovely secret dalliance. I enjoyed the tale told from Kyle’s point of view. His reactions were truthful, if not a bit naive, to his age and the time he lived in.
The rest of the characters I had some issue with. I kept getting confused with the girls in Kyle’s friend group. Their names and faces ran together, and they seemed to be somewhat carbon copies of each other, with little changes to personality.
The author wrote a wonderful coming-of-age novel full of the very real problems all teenagers face.
The tale ends bittersweet, full of heartbreak. I appreciated the realistic ending that you don’t tend to get from romance novels.
I received an advanced readers copy of this novel from the author for free. I am leaving this honest review voluntarily.
This was a wonderful novel taking place in the late 50’s where being homosexual was tantamount to a death sentence.
The romance between Kyle and Jack was realistic in its simplicity. The typical start, with the turbulent times, gave way to a lovely secret dalliance. I enjoyed the tale told from Kyle’s point of view. His reactions were truthful, if not a bit naive, to his age and the time he lived in.
The rest of the characters I had some issue with. I kept getting confused with the girls in Kyle’s friend group. Their names and faces ran together, and they seemed to be somewhat carbon copies of each other, with little changes to personality.
The author wrote a wonderful coming-of-age novel full of the very real problems all teenagers face.
The tale ends bittersweet, full of heartbreak. I appreciated the realistic ending that you don’t tend to get from romance novels.
I received an advanced readers copy of this novel from the author for free. I am leaving this honest review voluntarily.
July 2, 2024
After reading Until September, I can’t help but feel like I am drowning within the depths of Kyle’s emotions. I found this book to be an achingly beautiful tale of love. I’m the type of person who feels comfortable sat in feelings of melancholy. There is a certain comfort the feeling brings, and though there is sadness there is also longing. And this book hit those feelings in all the right spots. Paired with the gorgeous prose, it may be one of the best books I’ve read in a while. While I’m not sure this is the sort of book I will find myself coming back to read in entirety (seeing as, I feel quite sullen after the fact), I know I will come back to many of the resonating lines. It is the sort of book I feel better for having read (and for having experienced it at all). The depth of human emotion I felt while reading, for me, is part of the joy of reading, even when those emotions are not necessarily the happiest. An absolutely heart achingly stunning book.
I received a free copy of Until September by Harker Jones via NetGalley. All thoughts and opinions are of my own, without influence.
I received a free copy of Until September by Harker Jones via NetGalley. All thoughts and opinions are of my own, without influence.
December 17, 2023
I finished this book a few days ago, but have been struggling to land on a rating. The writing is beautiful and ambitious. But man oh man is this story sad 😞 and to be honest its bleakness ultimately overwhelmed me and outweighed the great writing.
August 6, 2024
This is a great book if you're looking for good prose and lots of emotional damage. (This is really not a feel good book.) I didn't particularly like any of the characters, but their sadness did hurt.
December 15, 2023
4⭐️
This was a beautiful, sad, heartbreaking coming of age book. Some heavy topics in this book.
This was a beautiful, sad, heartbreaking coming of age book. Some heavy topics in this book.
December 5, 2019
I just finished this debut novel by Harker Jones and I’m an emotional mess.I’m not going to rehash the story line like some reviewers do so I’ll simply say that this is a story about love, tragedy and growing up and leave it at that. I both loved it and hated it. I was hoping for a different ending.
May 17, 2024
It’s been a while since I’ve read a coming of age story that didn’t involve magic. Yet there is something just as magical in beginning to understand oneself and the changes that life inevitably brings as there is in traversing realms and flying on dragons. Until September is a coming of age story by Harker Jones that explores the love between two boys and the consequences that growing up and falling in love can bring.
This story follows Kyle as he summers on the island during the last summer before going away to college. He and his four friends, Trent, Claudia, Carly and Dana, have been spending their summers together since they were children and they intend to spend this one together as well. But Jack, newly arrived to the island for the summer, draws Kyle’s attention in a way that could compromise his friendships and change everything, because he falls in love. Amidst the tensions in his friend group, the pressures of familial expectations, and the all-encompassing love, things will never be the same, no matter how hard one tries to pretend otherwise.
I was intrigued by this story in a way that I am not for most coming of age stories. I think the dynamics played out between the five friends, even before Kyle and Jack fall in love, was fascinating and also the perfect set-up for the events later in the summer. There are threads of tension between the friends already, and the author teases them out as the summer progresses, making something small suddenly looming and potentially fatal for the friends. Even without Jack and Kyle’s love story overlaying the piece, I think the relationships between the friends would have been enough to carry the story.
That brings us to the relationship. Kyle and Jack present as the epitome of overwhelming, star-crossed lovers. Their time together is both poetic and tragic, and the prose reflects that in the words spoken between them. I will say that Kyle’s love seemed more obsessive than healthy, but many first loves can present that way. It was the ending which made the love story feel more tainted, I think, than anything, because it had Kyle almost stuck there. Still, they were well suited and I think the story played upon their strengths and insecurities well, taking a summer romance an turning it into one of the great romantic tragedies.
Familial tensions also play a huge role in this book, as they do in almost everyone’s life as they grow up. Or older. I really enjoyed the family dynamic between Kyle and his parents, as well as the shadow of Kevin that seemed to cover every memory of the summer. The realisation that one’s parents aren’t what you thought, that their flaws and secrets are just as real as your own, is a difficult thing and I found the way that this book portrayed it poignant, yet sharp.
One thing that did bother me was the frequent mention of the Belle Epoque as “the pretty time.” While technically a possible translation of that phrase, Belle Epoque is more commonly and accurately translated as “beautiful age” or “beautiful era”, which I find actually fits the book better. Still, this is merely a pet peeve of a linguist and author, so not likely to be relevant to most people.
Overall, I would say that Until September was a masterfully written book with enough heart to fill the gaps left over from the memories of the past. I enjoyed it quite a bit, but I also found myself unsettled by the ending in the best way. A very good book.
This story follows Kyle as he summers on the island during the last summer before going away to college. He and his four friends, Trent, Claudia, Carly and Dana, have been spending their summers together since they were children and they intend to spend this one together as well. But Jack, newly arrived to the island for the summer, draws Kyle’s attention in a way that could compromise his friendships and change everything, because he falls in love. Amidst the tensions in his friend group, the pressures of familial expectations, and the all-encompassing love, things will never be the same, no matter how hard one tries to pretend otherwise.
I was intrigued by this story in a way that I am not for most coming of age stories. I think the dynamics played out between the five friends, even before Kyle and Jack fall in love, was fascinating and also the perfect set-up for the events later in the summer. There are threads of tension between the friends already, and the author teases them out as the summer progresses, making something small suddenly looming and potentially fatal for the friends. Even without Jack and Kyle’s love story overlaying the piece, I think the relationships between the friends would have been enough to carry the story.
That brings us to the relationship. Kyle and Jack present as the epitome of overwhelming, star-crossed lovers. Their time together is both poetic and tragic, and the prose reflects that in the words spoken between them. I will say that Kyle’s love seemed more obsessive than healthy, but many first loves can present that way. It was the ending which made the love story feel more tainted, I think, than anything, because it had Kyle almost stuck there. Still, they were well suited and I think the story played upon their strengths and insecurities well, taking a summer romance an turning it into one of the great romantic tragedies.
Familial tensions also play a huge role in this book, as they do in almost everyone’s life as they grow up. Or older. I really enjoyed the family dynamic between Kyle and his parents, as well as the shadow of Kevin that seemed to cover every memory of the summer. The realisation that one’s parents aren’t what you thought, that their flaws and secrets are just as real as your own, is a difficult thing and I found the way that this book portrayed it poignant, yet sharp.
One thing that did bother me was the frequent mention of the Belle Epoque as “the pretty time.” While technically a possible translation of that phrase, Belle Epoque is more commonly and accurately translated as “beautiful age” or “beautiful era”, which I find actually fits the book better. Still, this is merely a pet peeve of a linguist and author, so not likely to be relevant to most people.
Overall, I would say that Until September was a masterfully written book with enough heart to fill the gaps left over from the memories of the past. I enjoyed it quite a bit, but I also found myself unsettled by the ending in the best way. A very good book.
February 16, 2024
The summer started like all the summers before—Kyle Ryan Quinn and his island friends Trent, Claudia, Dana, and Carly—hanging out, soaking up the sun on the beach, and divulging their juiciest secrets. But the moment Jack Averill appeared on the island, it changed everything. A deep longing that he couldn’t quite articulate stirred within Kyle. He needed to get close to Jack and explore the feelings making his body buzz with desire. As the boys form an endearing, albeit complicated, relationship, it causes friction between the island friends. Trent becomes resentful of Kyle’s new friendship, and Claudia seems intent on making Jack feel unwelcome. Moreover, Trey, Kyle’s crush from the previous summer, wants to pick up where they left off.
Beyond his burgeoning romance with Jack and fretting over his friends’ growing hostility, Kyle deals with bouts of depression from his dark past. In this coming-of-age novel, Kyle must navigate the challenges of growing up—embracing his sexual identity, navigating friendships, and coming to terms with familial dysfunction.
No one said growing up would be easy.
Get ready to be immersed in this coming-out, coming-of-age novel! “Until September” by Harker Jones tugged at my heartstrings as the multidimensional characters leaped off the pages. It was brimming with introspection, angst, and excitement, making it relatable to younger readers and providing older readers with a dose of nostalgia. The author deftly highlights the emotional rollercoaster that seems to be a prerequisite of growing up.
The author painted a beautiful yet poignant picture of Kyle and Jack’s love story. The early stages of their relationship were fraught with an intense fear of rejection and a struggle to understand the sudden feelings of longing. This was skillfully illustrated by creating palpable tension, rife with scorching chemistry during their initial encounters. While I knew it couldn’t last forever, I adored watching their clandestine love unravel.
The author’s words were endearingly lyrical—it made my heart sing. Still, on the contrary, the young men learned being queer in the 60s was met with judgment and animosity, and they disagreed about coming out to their families, causing arguments. It was a cruel reminder of the sobering reality that many LGBTQ+ people are forced to face. No one should have to hide something as pure as their love for another.
While the spotlight shone brightly on Kyle and Jack’s relationship, the brotherhood between Trent and Kyle was also illuminated. Their endearing kinship was full of ups and downs, inside jokes, secrets, and dysfunction. Much like Kyle, Trent had many layers. Under his stoic exterior was a fragile person, desperate not to be replaced. Harker Jones excelled in creating a meaningful connection that was both moving and believable.
“Until September” is an artfully written novel encompassing everything it means to be young and, as achingly tragic as it could be, it will remind readers that pain and vulnerability are par for the course. It shapes the person we’ll become. Don’t miss out on this five-star read!
Beyond his burgeoning romance with Jack and fretting over his friends’ growing hostility, Kyle deals with bouts of depression from his dark past. In this coming-of-age novel, Kyle must navigate the challenges of growing up—embracing his sexual identity, navigating friendships, and coming to terms with familial dysfunction.
No one said growing up would be easy.
Get ready to be immersed in this coming-out, coming-of-age novel! “Until September” by Harker Jones tugged at my heartstrings as the multidimensional characters leaped off the pages. It was brimming with introspection, angst, and excitement, making it relatable to younger readers and providing older readers with a dose of nostalgia. The author deftly highlights the emotional rollercoaster that seems to be a prerequisite of growing up.
The author painted a beautiful yet poignant picture of Kyle and Jack’s love story. The early stages of their relationship were fraught with an intense fear of rejection and a struggle to understand the sudden feelings of longing. This was skillfully illustrated by creating palpable tension, rife with scorching chemistry during their initial encounters. While I knew it couldn’t last forever, I adored watching their clandestine love unravel.
The author’s words were endearingly lyrical—it made my heart sing. Still, on the contrary, the young men learned being queer in the 60s was met with judgment and animosity, and they disagreed about coming out to their families, causing arguments. It was a cruel reminder of the sobering reality that many LGBTQ+ people are forced to face. No one should have to hide something as pure as their love for another.
While the spotlight shone brightly on Kyle and Jack’s relationship, the brotherhood between Trent and Kyle was also illuminated. Their endearing kinship was full of ups and downs, inside jokes, secrets, and dysfunction. Much like Kyle, Trent had many layers. Under his stoic exterior was a fragile person, desperate not to be replaced. Harker Jones excelled in creating a meaningful connection that was both moving and believable.
“Until September” is an artfully written novel encompassing everything it means to be young and, as achingly tragic as it could be, it will remind readers that pain and vulnerability are par for the course. It shapes the person we’ll become. Don’t miss out on this five-star read!
October 14, 2023
"Until September" by Harker Jones is an evocative and powerful coming-of-age love story that delicately navigates the turbulent waters of the late '50s and early '60s, expertly capturing the essence of a bygone era while illuminating the timeless struggles of youth, love, and self-discovery. In this heartfelt exploration of first love and the complexities of friendship, Jones weaves a compelling narrative that will resonate deeply with readers.
Set against the backdrop of a society undergoing a profound transformation, the story introduces Kyle Ryan Quinn, a character who personifies the privilege and promise of his time. Yet beneath his surface of wealth, beauty, and intellect, Kyle carries the weight of past tragedy, rendering him more introspective and empathetic than his affluent friends. Jones skillfully crafts Kyle's character, imbuing him with depth and emotional complexity that make him instantly relatable to the reader.
The heart of this story lies in the poignant love that blossoms between Kyle and Jack Averill. Their passionate and fateful romance unfolds during Kyle's 18th summer on the island, a season that will change their lives forever. The delicate dance of their burgeoning relationship is portrayed with nuance and authenticity, capturing the heady and often turbulent emotions of first love. As Kyle navigates the complexities of wooing Jack and integrating him into his close-knit circle of friends, readers will find themselves engrossed in a profound and heartfelt exploration of love, desire, and self-acceptance.
Jones' storytelling prowess shines in the multifaceted characters who populate the narrative. The supporting cast, including the enigmatic Trey and the flirtatious Trent, are masterfully portrayed, each adding depth and complexity to the story. Their individual journeys and the conflicts that arise amidst their group of friends create a dynamic and emotionally charged backdrop for the central love story.
The title "Until September" serves as a poignant reminder of the fleeting nature of youth and the transience of summer love. Through Jones' lyrical prose, readers are transported to a world where familial, sexual, and peer pressures converge, and where the decisions made by these young men carry profound consequences. The narrative's exploration of loss, secrets, and the enduring impact of choices made in the heat of passion is both moving and thought-provoking.
"Until September" is not merely a love story; it is a beautifully rendered exploration of the human condition, the complexities of friendship, and the transformative power of love. Harker Jones' ability to capture the essence of a particular era while addressing universal themes of self-discovery, longing, and the irrevocable passage of time is a testament to the author's storytelling prowess. This novel will resonate with a wide audience, regardless of their own personal experiences, as it reminds us all of the enduring, timeless, and universal nature of love and the indelible marks it leaves on our hearts and souls.
Set against the backdrop of a society undergoing a profound transformation, the story introduces Kyle Ryan Quinn, a character who personifies the privilege and promise of his time. Yet beneath his surface of wealth, beauty, and intellect, Kyle carries the weight of past tragedy, rendering him more introspective and empathetic than his affluent friends. Jones skillfully crafts Kyle's character, imbuing him with depth and emotional complexity that make him instantly relatable to the reader.
The heart of this story lies in the poignant love that blossoms between Kyle and Jack Averill. Their passionate and fateful romance unfolds during Kyle's 18th summer on the island, a season that will change their lives forever. The delicate dance of their burgeoning relationship is portrayed with nuance and authenticity, capturing the heady and often turbulent emotions of first love. As Kyle navigates the complexities of wooing Jack and integrating him into his close-knit circle of friends, readers will find themselves engrossed in a profound and heartfelt exploration of love, desire, and self-acceptance.
Jones' storytelling prowess shines in the multifaceted characters who populate the narrative. The supporting cast, including the enigmatic Trey and the flirtatious Trent, are masterfully portrayed, each adding depth and complexity to the story. Their individual journeys and the conflicts that arise amidst their group of friends create a dynamic and emotionally charged backdrop for the central love story.
The title "Until September" serves as a poignant reminder of the fleeting nature of youth and the transience of summer love. Through Jones' lyrical prose, readers are transported to a world where familial, sexual, and peer pressures converge, and where the decisions made by these young men carry profound consequences. The narrative's exploration of loss, secrets, and the enduring impact of choices made in the heat of passion is both moving and thought-provoking.
"Until September" is not merely a love story; it is a beautifully rendered exploration of the human condition, the complexities of friendship, and the transformative power of love. Harker Jones' ability to capture the essence of a particular era while addressing universal themes of self-discovery, longing, and the irrevocable passage of time is a testament to the author's storytelling prowess. This novel will resonate with a wide audience, regardless of their own personal experiences, as it reminds us all of the enduring, timeless, and universal nature of love and the indelible marks it leaves on our hearts and souls.
November 5, 2023
I received this book for free. This does not impact my review in any shape or form.
Until September, by Harker Jones, is a novel about a young man who becomes infatuated with the idea of a stranger, an infatuation that later develops into obsession. The book is separated into 6 parts. May introduces Kyle, who see a mysterious boy reading on the beach and immediately becomes smitten with him. June sees the whirlwind romance that Kyle and the boy, Jack, share, as well as the troubles they run into when Kyle tries to integrate Jack into his close-knit group of friends. In July, Kyle starts to isolate himself from the group, as thoughts of being with Jack take over. August finds Kyle and Jack doing whatever they can to ensure their relationship is long lasting, from confronting their parents about their sexuality, to Kyle changing universities to be with Jack. In September, the couple’s plans fall apart, and in Winter, Kyle decides to remain haunted by Jack, unwilling and unable to move on without him.
This entire story reminds me of Lana Del Rey’s Summertime Sadness. With Trent and Kyle, it seemed they were both swept up in the romance and the fun. I like how, despite their completely opposite approaches to love, ultimately, it’s whether or not they choose to move forward with their lives that determine their fates. If anything, it seems they haunt one another; Kyle chasing one ghost while Trent chases another, if only for forgiveness. I can’t help but wonder if Trent places his best friend on a pedestal, if he believes that only Kyle knows what true love looks like. While it can’t explain the pain he put Veronica through, in this moment Trent reminds me of the golden child in a family full of addicts, doing whatever he possibly can to make sure that Kyle doesn’t leave him.
It’s easy to want our relationships to last forever. The honeymoon phase is so enticing; all the red flags become flags to us, and first love can be incredibly intoxicating. That said, Kyle and Jack were already up against a hill. Kyle comes from privilege, and while his parents may try to be accepting of his sexuality, Jack has no such luxury. And while Kyle tends to be more whimsical about his feelings, having no problem declaring his undying love for Jack, it appears Jack is more grounded. He doesn’t let the emotions get to him, doesn’t allow himself to be swayed. In a way, he’s kind of like Trent, although he’s always been more wiser than the boy who doesn’t think how his own recklessness may affect others.
I do feel that Trey’s story is unnecessary. Personally, I feel the man places to much importance on himself. Even so, this was a wonderful book that delves deeply into love’s volatility and the importance of maturity when dealing with something as complex as that. As such, I would give this book a 4.5 out of 5 stars.
Until September, by Harker Jones, is a novel about a young man who becomes infatuated with the idea of a stranger, an infatuation that later develops into obsession. The book is separated into 6 parts. May introduces Kyle, who see a mysterious boy reading on the beach and immediately becomes smitten with him. June sees the whirlwind romance that Kyle and the boy, Jack, share, as well as the troubles they run into when Kyle tries to integrate Jack into his close-knit group of friends. In July, Kyle starts to isolate himself from the group, as thoughts of being with Jack take over. August finds Kyle and Jack doing whatever they can to ensure their relationship is long lasting, from confronting their parents about their sexuality, to Kyle changing universities to be with Jack. In September, the couple’s plans fall apart, and in Winter, Kyle decides to remain haunted by Jack, unwilling and unable to move on without him.
This entire story reminds me of Lana Del Rey’s Summertime Sadness. With Trent and Kyle, it seemed they were both swept up in the romance and the fun. I like how, despite their completely opposite approaches to love, ultimately, it’s whether or not they choose to move forward with their lives that determine their fates. If anything, it seems they haunt one another; Kyle chasing one ghost while Trent chases another, if only for forgiveness. I can’t help but wonder if Trent places his best friend on a pedestal, if he believes that only Kyle knows what true love looks like. While it can’t explain the pain he put Veronica through, in this moment Trent reminds me of the golden child in a family full of addicts, doing whatever he possibly can to make sure that Kyle doesn’t leave him.
It’s easy to want our relationships to last forever. The honeymoon phase is so enticing; all the red flags become flags to us, and first love can be incredibly intoxicating. That said, Kyle and Jack were already up against a hill. Kyle comes from privilege, and while his parents may try to be accepting of his sexuality, Jack has no such luxury. And while Kyle tends to be more whimsical about his feelings, having no problem declaring his undying love for Jack, it appears Jack is more grounded. He doesn’t let the emotions get to him, doesn’t allow himself to be swayed. In a way, he’s kind of like Trent, although he’s always been more wiser than the boy who doesn’t think how his own recklessness may affect others.
I do feel that Trey’s story is unnecessary. Personally, I feel the man places to much importance on himself. Even so, this was a wonderful book that delves deeply into love’s volatility and the importance of maturity when dealing with something as complex as that. As such, I would give this book a 4.5 out of 5 stars.
April 17, 2023
What a beautiful book. This is the one word that I associate the most with this story - beautiful.
What could have been an annoying tale of beautiful people leading beautiful lives and spending their summers in beautiful backdrops - and I honestly expected that, when I first started reading past that alluring prologue - turned out to be what I'm sure will remain one of my favourite, most touching reads of this year. I loved the story with all its swoops and swirls and that constant sense of impending doom, which was done masterfully, right from that prologue, loved the writing both down-to-earth and poetic, loved the mood the author's prose weaves into the tale, loved the characters - mostly because I did not love most of them at all, and that was the best part of it. They all felt real, vivid, THERE. As if I could have come across them any given time, at any given summer place. I loved how bitchy and downright poisonous Claudia always sounded, because she was the smartest one who could see right through Kyle, I loved Dana for her quietness and barely there presence - and how she turned out to be the one who remains steadfast through all that happens - I loved Carly's aloofness and lack of depth, I loved Trent's spoiled personality and his tantrums and the way he acted so immature and childish but at the same time, capable of a loyalty that ran deep in his veins, I loved Trey's meanness and his bitterness and his obsession, I loved Jack's innocence and fears and how he becomes more and more real throughout the narrative, until we're confronted with Jack as he is and not as Kyle sees him, and I loved Kyle.
I loved his poignancy and his passion, his unflinching belief in a love that's supposed to be a summer fling and not meant to last, the pain of his past, the weight he carries and that others chose to place on him, the way he loses himself, the desperate acts, the search, the never giving up, and how his heart never changes, in the end.
I also loved that my own country features in the book at some point and the author wrote Porto instead of Oporto as most English speaking people do. Would have prefered to have seen a bit more attention put into the use of the Portuguese language when the priests speaks it to the boys - we don't say 'Si', that's Spanish, it's 'Sim' for us, and it's not 'O avós' because 'O' is a singular pronoun, and 'avós' is plural - it's said 'Os avós'. This is the only remark I have to make, and it's such a tiny one it made no difference at all in my love for this tale
I am really glad I came across this novel, for it was one of my best reads so far, and I will never forget it. These characters and their story will stay with me forever.
Thank you to Book Sirens and the author for providing me with an ARC.
What could have been an annoying tale of beautiful people leading beautiful lives and spending their summers in beautiful backdrops - and I honestly expected that, when I first started reading past that alluring prologue - turned out to be what I'm sure will remain one of my favourite, most touching reads of this year. I loved the story with all its swoops and swirls and that constant sense of impending doom, which was done masterfully, right from that prologue, loved the writing both down-to-earth and poetic, loved the mood the author's prose weaves into the tale, loved the characters - mostly because I did not love most of them at all, and that was the best part of it. They all felt real, vivid, THERE. As if I could have come across them any given time, at any given summer place. I loved how bitchy and downright poisonous Claudia always sounded, because she was the smartest one who could see right through Kyle, I loved Dana for her quietness and barely there presence - and how she turned out to be the one who remains steadfast through all that happens - I loved Carly's aloofness and lack of depth, I loved Trent's spoiled personality and his tantrums and the way he acted so immature and childish but at the same time, capable of a loyalty that ran deep in his veins, I loved Trey's meanness and his bitterness and his obsession, I loved Jack's innocence and fears and how he becomes more and more real throughout the narrative, until we're confronted with Jack as he is and not as Kyle sees him, and I loved Kyle.
I loved his poignancy and his passion, his unflinching belief in a love that's supposed to be a summer fling and not meant to last, the pain of his past, the weight he carries and that others chose to place on him, the way he loses himself, the desperate acts, the search, the never giving up, and how his heart never changes, in the end.
I also loved that my own country features in the book at some point and the author wrote Porto instead of Oporto as most English speaking people do. Would have prefered to have seen a bit more attention put into the use of the Portuguese language when the priests speaks it to the boys - we don't say 'Si', that's Spanish, it's 'Sim' for us, and it's not 'O avós' because 'O' is a singular pronoun, and 'avós' is plural - it's said 'Os avós'. This is the only remark I have to make, and it's such a tiny one it made no difference at all in my love for this tale
I am really glad I came across this novel, for it was one of my best reads so far, and I will never forget it. These characters and their story will stay with me forever.
Thank you to Book Sirens and the author for providing me with an ARC.
April 8, 2024
‘Until September’ is an appropriately-titled tale by American-based author and screenwriter, Harker Jones We meet privileged eighteen-year-old Kyle and his cohort in 1966 on a small unnamed island where the economy relies on fishing and ‘the summer people’ This tight-knit
platonic group of five spend every summer holiday together and discourage intrusion from anyone else so it’s disconcerting for the other four when Kyle tries to bring Jack, a gentle boy he spots on the beach, into their inner clique.
We see how the summer pans out with the parts broken down into months from May to September; each of these then subdivided by brief scenes. The story is told in the past tense mainly from the perspective of Kyle but occasionally from others. His foils are not over-intrusive but sufficiently prominent to add depth to the backdrop. Emotions run high as territorial jealousies surface and awkward conversations result from the changing dynamic; this summer will be a turning point for all of them. We learn of hinted-at past tragedy and loss with songs of the era being played or sung to cement the action in time and place.
This sensitively-written story is multi-layered and explores emotional and practical issues surrounding first love, with the added dimension of this being a same-sex couple in mid-60s America, when the world was only just beginning to adjust to this type of relationship and acceptance was far from certain.
Rich in symbolism, the wistful, sometimes whimsical, narrative style is reminiscent of Evelyn Waugh. The author uses evocative language and literary techniques in abundance to paint a vivid picture of surroundings and feelings which, for the most part, have the desired effect. Although at over 450 pages, I found some parts to be rather drawn out as Kyle and Jack negotiate their feelings and tentatively circle around one another. I was struck by the cover’s design; two people standing on a foundation of sand and congratulate Harker Jones on his choice, which is ever more poignant as Kyle and Jack’s relationship intensifies. The summer ends in an unexpected way with far-reaching consequences for all concerned.
Settling on a star rating was difficult because without doubt anyone reading this novel cannot fail to be touched by the power of the story and its melancholy overtones. However, it had few lighter elements to contrast with the darker pathos, so I was left with an overwhelming feeling of despondency. This certainly wasn’t a happy feel-good read but I cannot deny its impact or the sophistication of its writer. I award 5 stars.
platonic group of five spend every summer holiday together and discourage intrusion from anyone else so it’s disconcerting for the other four when Kyle tries to bring Jack, a gentle boy he spots on the beach, into their inner clique.
We see how the summer pans out with the parts broken down into months from May to September; each of these then subdivided by brief scenes. The story is told in the past tense mainly from the perspective of Kyle but occasionally from others. His foils are not over-intrusive but sufficiently prominent to add depth to the backdrop. Emotions run high as territorial jealousies surface and awkward conversations result from the changing dynamic; this summer will be a turning point for all of them. We learn of hinted-at past tragedy and loss with songs of the era being played or sung to cement the action in time and place.
This sensitively-written story is multi-layered and explores emotional and practical issues surrounding first love, with the added dimension of this being a same-sex couple in mid-60s America, when the world was only just beginning to adjust to this type of relationship and acceptance was far from certain.
Rich in symbolism, the wistful, sometimes whimsical, narrative style is reminiscent of Evelyn Waugh. The author uses evocative language and literary techniques in abundance to paint a vivid picture of surroundings and feelings which, for the most part, have the desired effect. Although at over 450 pages, I found some parts to be rather drawn out as Kyle and Jack negotiate their feelings and tentatively circle around one another. I was struck by the cover’s design; two people standing on a foundation of sand and congratulate Harker Jones on his choice, which is ever more poignant as Kyle and Jack’s relationship intensifies. The summer ends in an unexpected way with far-reaching consequences for all concerned.
Settling on a star rating was difficult because without doubt anyone reading this novel cannot fail to be touched by the power of the story and its melancholy overtones. However, it had few lighter elements to contrast with the darker pathos, so I was left with an overwhelming feeling of despondency. This certainly wasn’t a happy feel-good read but I cannot deny its impact or the sophistication of its writer. I award 5 stars.
March 31, 2023
Somewhere between 2.75-3 stars.
Thank you to Harker Jones, the author, for reaching out and offering me a copy of his book in exchange for an honest review. It always feels so nice when an author gets in touch, and I appreciate it every time!
Until September follows Kyle and his friends the summer before they're all set to go to college. It's seen as kind of their last summer together before life splits them up.
I thought the overall story idea and romance aspects of this book were touching. But I think this book lost me in its length and writing style. I feel Until September could have benefitted from heavy editing in paring down the story, or breaking it up into two books because of the amount of time it covered. The majority of the book was spent on one summer, and we were taken through all the mundane details of how Kyle and his love interest, Jack, and their friends spent their days. And then we were swiftly taken through a whirlwind one or two years. There were moments where the writing felt rushed when we needed more detail in order to breath and flesh out the characters to make them feel more rounded. Then there were other times where we had extensive dialogue that didn't build the characters or the world. Then others where we were rushed through scenes. It was a lot.
So while I applaud writers, particularly self-published authors, for writing a book and putting it out into the world, and I appreciate Harker Jones for reaching out to me with a very meaningful story, this just didn't meet the expectations I had for it in the way I had hoped.
That being said, if you don't pay attention to the things I picked up on and you're looking for a beach read, I would suggest this. There are quite a few triggers to be aware of. But I think this is available on Kindle Unlimited and is out in the world for readers to pick up now!
Thank you to Harker Jones, the author, for reaching out and offering me a copy of his book in exchange for an honest review. It always feels so nice when an author gets in touch, and I appreciate it every time!
Until September follows Kyle and his friends the summer before they're all set to go to college. It's seen as kind of their last summer together before life splits them up.
I thought the overall story idea and romance aspects of this book were touching. But I think this book lost me in its length and writing style. I feel Until September could have benefitted from heavy editing in paring down the story, or breaking it up into two books because of the amount of time it covered. The majority of the book was spent on one summer, and we were taken through all the mundane details of how Kyle and his love interest, Jack, and their friends spent their days. And then we were swiftly taken through a whirlwind one or two years. There were moments where the writing felt rushed when we needed more detail in order to breath and flesh out the characters to make them feel more rounded. Then there were other times where we had extensive dialogue that didn't build the characters or the world. Then others where we were rushed through scenes. It was a lot.
So while I applaud writers, particularly self-published authors, for writing a book and putting it out into the world, and I appreciate Harker Jones for reaching out to me with a very meaningful story, this just didn't meet the expectations I had for it in the way I had hoped.
That being said, if you don't pay attention to the things I picked up on and you're looking for a beach read, I would suggest this. There are quite a few triggers to be aware of. But I think this is available on Kindle Unlimited and is out in the world for readers to pick up now!
July 17, 2024
This entire story was an emotional rollercoaster; joy, pain, longing, love, emotional mess, internal battles, secrets, teenage fuck-ups, friendships, everything. I needed an hour-long emotional break after finishing this (which meant me trying to just distract myself with anything and everything until I felt emotionally stable).
Until September is a coming-of-age love story which will probably leave you an emotional mess, but you can't do anything but just be the moth and chase the flame because I knew I was going to get hurt, and I still couldn't stop myself from reading.
Here are some annotations from the story which I hope can convince you to read it because I REALLY WANT MORE PEOPLE TO KNOW THIS BOOK. IT'S CRIMINALLY UNDERRATED!
"If he doesn't want me, how much will I cry?"
“If I were talented I’d write epics and poems and love songs about you. I’d paint you and sculpt you. But I have nothing to offer but myself…and I don’t know if I’m enough.”
“My golden king. The angels smiled on me the day we met.”
“No, they smiled on me.” Kyle beamed like a fool.
“Must you always argue?”
“I’m clarifying.”
They laughed lustily.
I'll post a few more on my Insta review post. But the conclusion is, that this story is an incredibly beautiful work of art, and it'd be a shame to not appreciate it! You can find it on Netgalley! And no, I'm not being sponsored or shit, I wish I was because I would love to receive a paperback someday, but that day hasn't arrived yet. I just need people to appreciate something I loved so much!
P.S.: I was not satisfied with my previous review so I decided to rewrite the whole thing instead of editing.
Until September is a coming-of-age love story which will probably leave you an emotional mess, but you can't do anything but just be the moth and chase the flame because I knew I was going to get hurt, and I still couldn't stop myself from reading.
Here are some annotations from the story which I hope can convince you to read it because I REALLY WANT MORE PEOPLE TO KNOW THIS BOOK. IT'S CRIMINALLY UNDERRATED!
"If he doesn't want me, how much will I cry?"
“If I were talented I’d write epics and poems and love songs about you. I’d paint you and sculpt you. But I have nothing to offer but myself…and I don’t know if I’m enough.”
“My golden king. The angels smiled on me the day we met.”
“No, they smiled on me.” Kyle beamed like a fool.
“Must you always argue?”
“I’m clarifying.”
They laughed lustily.
I'll post a few more on my Insta review post. But the conclusion is, that this story is an incredibly beautiful work of art, and it'd be a shame to not appreciate it! You can find it on Netgalley! And no, I'm not being sponsored or shit, I wish I was because I would love to receive a paperback someday, but that day hasn't arrived yet. I just need people to appreciate something I loved so much!
P.S.: I was not satisfied with my previous review so I decided to rewrite the whole thing instead of editing.
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November 29, 2023I am destroyed, and that's a good thing?
I have read this book and I am destroyed. There is no way this book should have worked. Its a mess in so many ways and yet it works on every level.
The majority of this story is told from Kyle's point of view, occasionally letting us visit the PoV of the other characters, without warning, and confusingly. Yet... It works.
I have the urge to sit in a dark room and cry for Jack and Kyle, and Trent and Trey, and Dana, and for parents that destroy their children's lives over their own stupid expectations.
Kyle, a boy with everything and yet empty and lonely. Kyle, A man with nothing, and devoid of meaning and love. Kyle, the picture of so !any of us gay men who find ourselves destroyed by family, expectations, and society.
Can I help but look at Kyle and wonder if this is how so many of us end up?
Kyle and Jack are a masters study in why we should embrace the moment as if it might be our last. It just might be.
Kyle and Jack, they do everything right and yet nothing turns out right.
Are we to envy Kyle and his ability to love so deeply, or do we pity him his obsession that leads to a wasteland of a life?
Kyle is by no means perfect. He falls in love, and loves Jack well, but in the doing destroys all his other relationships - friends and parents alike.
This book deserves a place on my bookshelf among other great books, as a study in love and loss, and yet great and gripping writing.
DO NOT MISS READING THIS GAY CLASSIC.
I have read this book and I am destroyed. There is no way this book should have worked. Its a mess in so many ways and yet it works on every level.
The majority of this story is told from Kyle's point of view, occasionally letting us visit the PoV of the other characters, without warning, and confusingly. Yet... It works.
I have the urge to sit in a dark room and cry for Jack and Kyle, and Trent and Trey, and Dana, and for parents that destroy their children's lives over their own stupid expectations.
Kyle, a boy with everything and yet empty and lonely. Kyle, A man with nothing, and devoid of meaning and love. Kyle, the picture of so !any of us gay men who find ourselves destroyed by family, expectations, and society.
Can I help but look at Kyle and wonder if this is how so many of us end up?
Kyle and Jack are a masters study in why we should embrace the moment as if it might be our last. It just might be.
Kyle and Jack, they do everything right and yet nothing turns out right.
Are we to envy Kyle and his ability to love so deeply, or do we pity him his obsession that leads to a wasteland of a life?
Kyle is by no means perfect. He falls in love, and loves Jack well, but in the doing destroys all his other relationships - friends and parents alike.
This book deserves a place on my bookshelf among other great books, as a study in love and loss, and yet great and gripping writing.
DO NOT MISS READING THIS GAY CLASSIC.
October 6, 2023
I find that reading books that allow me to vicariously experience what it would be like to live in someone else’s shoes, specifically someone that is not like me, helps me to understand others better which should help make me a better person. I’ve never gone through the main struggle that Kyle, the protagonist of this book did. I imagine someone who has experienced that struggle would benefit from reading this, both understanding that others have the same struggle and also contrasting how much worse I imagine it would have been during the time this book takes place.
Curiously I did struggle to believe or accept one part of Kyle’s story. As the book’s description makes clear, Kyle comes from an extremely well-to-do family. That they have a “summer home” on a relatively remote island where they summer every year and that Kyle is able to afford some of the things he does in the last part of the book really drove that home and was one aspect that I sometimes struggled to suspend my disbelief. Looking back, I realize that it just shows that money helps, but doesn’t cure every issue. On balance this was an enjoyable and enlightening read.
**Originally written for "Books and Pals" book blog. May have received a free review copy. **
Curiously I did struggle to believe or accept one part of Kyle’s story. As the book’s description makes clear, Kyle comes from an extremely well-to-do family. That they have a “summer home” on a relatively remote island where they summer every year and that Kyle is able to afford some of the things he does in the last part of the book really drove that home and was one aspect that I sometimes struggled to suspend my disbelief. Looking back, I realize that it just shows that money helps, but doesn’t cure every issue. On balance this was an enjoyable and enlightening read.
**Originally written for "Books and Pals" book blog. May have received a free review copy. **
March 2, 2023
Not a happy-go-lucky love story for sure, and honestly, I think I prefer it this way. With a beautiful summer backdrop, this coming-of-age story doesn't shy away from the gritty parts of life.
During a milestone summer vacation, Kyle meets Jack. As he brings him into his group of friends on the island, the boys (and the rest of the group) face a number of trials — many of which will have a lifelong impact on their lives. Though a work of historical fiction, time doesn't seem to make much of a difference here as the heart of the story is its characters and their lives.
I enjoyed the writing style here. It was full of heart and I found myself connecting to the characters even though they weren't personally relatable to me (nor were all of them always likable). The plot got a bit busy toward the middle, but it smoothed out again by the end. As I said in the beginning, this isn't a fluffy romance. It has a realistic feel that is, for me, a refreshing break from too-good-to-be-true romances.
A huge thanks to the author for sending me a free digital copy of the book to read and review!
During a milestone summer vacation, Kyle meets Jack. As he brings him into his group of friends on the island, the boys (and the rest of the group) face a number of trials — many of which will have a lifelong impact on their lives. Though a work of historical fiction, time doesn't seem to make much of a difference here as the heart of the story is its characters and their lives.
I enjoyed the writing style here. It was full of heart and I found myself connecting to the characters even though they weren't personally relatable to me (nor were all of them always likable). The plot got a bit busy toward the middle, but it smoothed out again by the end. As I said in the beginning, this isn't a fluffy romance. It has a realistic feel that is, for me, a refreshing break from too-good-to-be-true romances.
A huge thanks to the author for sending me a free digital copy of the book to read and review!
April 8, 2023
4.8 out of 5 stars
Until September by Harker Jones is a stunning gay coming-of-age romance novel with fantastic character development.
I was so attached to the characters, and I really loved how well they were developed throughout. It was so interesting to read and explore the way they interacted with one another. The friendship group had a great dynamic and I loved reading about them as well as Kyle and Jack’s relationship.
It was incredibly well-written and so immersive. It was so beautiful and emotive and just such a joy to read.
When it began to get a little slow, Harker always made sure that there was a twist or something thrown into the mix regularly, which kept me gripped. It was great that it kept me involved in the story constantly. I honestly didn’t want it to end.
The only thing I wasn’t too keen on was the prologue and ending. I could see what was trying to be done, but in my opinion, it just didn’t really work for me. It just created confusion and honestly, I don’t really think it was needed – I think it would’ve been brilliant and so much better without.
Overall, I absolutely adored this book.
Thank you Harker for my copy.
Until September by Harker Jones is a stunning gay coming-of-age romance novel with fantastic character development.
I was so attached to the characters, and I really loved how well they were developed throughout. It was so interesting to read and explore the way they interacted with one another. The friendship group had a great dynamic and I loved reading about them as well as Kyle and Jack’s relationship.
It was incredibly well-written and so immersive. It was so beautiful and emotive and just such a joy to read.
When it began to get a little slow, Harker always made sure that there was a twist or something thrown into the mix regularly, which kept me gripped. It was great that it kept me involved in the story constantly. I honestly didn’t want it to end.
The only thing I wasn’t too keen on was the prologue and ending. I could see what was trying to be done, but in my opinion, it just didn’t really work for me. It just created confusion and honestly, I don’t really think it was needed – I think it would’ve been brilliant and so much better without.
Overall, I absolutely adored this book.
Thank you Harker for my copy.
July 9, 2024
𝗔𝗥𝗖 𝗥𝗘𝗩𝗜𝗘𝗪
𝐔𝐧𝐭𝐢𝐥 𝐒𝐞𝐩𝐭𝐞𝐦𝐛𝐞𝐫
𝐇𝐚𝐫𝐤𝐞𝐫 𝐉𝐨𝐧𝐞𝐬
𝐏𝐮𝐛: 𝐉𝐮𝐥𝐲 𝟗, 𝟐𝟎𝟐𝟒
𝐁𝐨𝐨𝐤𝐬𝐆𝐨𝐒𝐨𝐜𝐢𝐚𝐥
This sensitively written but powerful book had me totally immersed from the first page. The author painted a poignant picture of coming out and coming of age in the 60s. The love story between Kyle and Jack and the judgment and animosity they faced being queer during this time in history was simply heartbreaking. I cried for the boys, for the men whose lives were destroyed by society and expectations.
Harker Jones writes masterfully. His prose was lyrical, hauntingly sad, and yet beautiful to read.
He paints pictures with his words, bringing you into his world, wrapping you in his feelings and melancholy. It's enchanting.
His characters were relatable for that time period, but I found I could connect easily to them and feel their emotions , love , joy, and pain.
The storyline was broken up into months, starting in May and finishing in September with an epilogue titled Winter.
It's definitely a captivating story meant to sit and ponder over long after the last page is turned and deserving of a 5 star rating. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
𝐔𝐧𝐭𝐢𝐥 𝐒𝐞𝐩𝐭𝐞𝐦𝐛𝐞𝐫
𝐇𝐚𝐫𝐤𝐞𝐫 𝐉𝐨𝐧𝐞𝐬
𝐏𝐮𝐛: 𝐉𝐮𝐥𝐲 𝟗, 𝟐𝟎𝟐𝟒
𝐁𝐨𝐨𝐤𝐬𝐆𝐨𝐒𝐨𝐜𝐢𝐚𝐥
This sensitively written but powerful book had me totally immersed from the first page. The author painted a poignant picture of coming out and coming of age in the 60s. The love story between Kyle and Jack and the judgment and animosity they faced being queer during this time in history was simply heartbreaking. I cried for the boys, for the men whose lives were destroyed by society and expectations.
Harker Jones writes masterfully. His prose was lyrical, hauntingly sad, and yet beautiful to read.
He paints pictures with his words, bringing you into his world, wrapping you in his feelings and melancholy. It's enchanting.
His characters were relatable for that time period, but I found I could connect easily to them and feel their emotions , love , joy, and pain.
The storyline was broken up into months, starting in May and finishing in September with an epilogue titled Winter.
It's definitely a captivating story meant to sit and ponder over long after the last page is turned and deserving of a 5 star rating. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
March 12, 2021
Sweet and sad
This was without a doubt a true coming of age story. Filled with happy, joyful, and bitter sweet memories of childhood. I enjoyed this book to a certain point, and understand not everything is a happy ending. It is actually a good down to earth honest book. It does have some real truth, although we don’t wish to hear these things. Finally something that it’s not all unicorns and rainbows. It is very nostalgic. But I am happy that the one person who created schemes, and lied. After seeing how much pain he caused, and devastation to the one he supposedly loved. I was glad to see that he paid himself both emotionally and in someway physically. Goes to show that karma really does exist. Love is like a fart, if you push it, then it turns into crap. For those people that enjoy meddling and others relationships, you need to read this book and pay close attention to the character Tray. Stop trying to come between true love, because you will end up destroying the one you claim to love. You will cause more pain and emotional heartache amongst genuine happiness.
This was without a doubt a true coming of age story. Filled with happy, joyful, and bitter sweet memories of childhood. I enjoyed this book to a certain point, and understand not everything is a happy ending. It is actually a good down to earth honest book. It does have some real truth, although we don’t wish to hear these things. Finally something that it’s not all unicorns and rainbows. It is very nostalgic. But I am happy that the one person who created schemes, and lied. After seeing how much pain he caused, and devastation to the one he supposedly loved. I was glad to see that he paid himself both emotionally and in someway physically. Goes to show that karma really does exist. Love is like a fart, if you push it, then it turns into crap. For those people that enjoy meddling and others relationships, you need to read this book and pay close attention to the character Tray. Stop trying to come between true love, because you will end up destroying the one you claim to love. You will cause more pain and emotional heartache amongst genuine happiness.
April 9, 2023
Set in the 1960's, this book tells the story of first love between two teenagers, Kyle and Jack. It also focuses on a small circle of five friends whose families summer on an island. They all rich, white, private school kids who are headed off to schools like Princeton at the end of the summer. One of the group of five, Kyle, falls in love with a new kid, Jack, which causes all sorts of problems for the group--and ultimately Kyle.
The book is well-written but is beyond bleak and depressing--suicides, violence, self-harm, homophobia, betrayals, obsession, and eventually madness. It starts out as an exploration of first love and then becomes something very different--kind of a bait and switch. Just not a good fit for me. Not sure who I would recommend this one to. I would look forward to reading more from this writer but this one did not work for me.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
The book is well-written but is beyond bleak and depressing--suicides, violence, self-harm, homophobia, betrayals, obsession, and eventually madness. It starts out as an exploration of first love and then becomes something very different--kind of a bait and switch. Just not a good fit for me. Not sure who I would recommend this one to. I would look forward to reading more from this writer but this one did not work for me.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
March 30, 2023
'Until September' must be the most enjoyable novel that I've read in quite a while. The central characters, Kyle Ryan Quinn and Jack Averill are deliciously engaging and skillfully drawn. For me it was a journey, a pair of boys becoming men in a world that wasn't understanding. When the pair of them reveal their sexuality and relationship, friendships and family units are tested. Set in an America at a time that was less accommodating to homosexuality, the mood of that era is skillfully captured. I can happily recommend 'Until September' to anyone who is interested in an honest piece of storytelling. Whenever I review a new book, I award four stars for a good book, while five stars I reserve for something that has something extra.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.
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