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Caught Her Cheating
Tom Wallace finds a photo that changes his life.
109 pages, Kindle Edition
Published January 31, 2020
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February 20, 2022
sad
Please write a ending for this book-
The book you wrote with the connors after telling Helene how he felt was perfect. HEA not required- but give the poor bastard a chance to clear the air
Please write a ending for this book-
The book you wrote with the connors after telling Helene how he felt was perfect. HEA not required- but give the poor bastard a chance to clear the air
February 23, 2023
Great story terrible ending
You say you are new writer but as an expert.at nothing pertaining g to the English language .I would say you Dona great job accept for one thing .........the ending. Since he is in fact still a!ive and known the subject does things when he does remember or when his wife sails In the crap.will hot the old fan .......Nd what about his d daughters and then what do you as a writer with multil!e.threads ,very major threads hanging in the wind .you can't do an end of story page because you left way too much that HS not really ended. I would have to say if !l your ending vs are lime this I would not read another of your stories .she was caught cheating and no one filed for records and then he has been nudged to be dead. Reach along and you think that the recorded lady who is now determined to get her husband back and the boat surges ahead .........end of story....either write short story's and dont put as much descriptive dialog in include a decent end . n you a rent that good think want to take.the time and figure out what you did or did not have for an ending the we as readers have to guess wht happens . I gave you 4 stars o. The story line but you get a minus 5 for..scrappy ending
You say you are new writer but as an expert.at nothing pertaining g to the English language .I would say you Dona great job accept for one thing .........the ending. Since he is in fact still a!ive and known the subject does things when he does remember or when his wife sails In the crap.will hot the old fan .......Nd what about his d daughters and then what do you as a writer with multil!e.threads ,very major threads hanging in the wind .you can't do an end of story page because you left way too much that HS not really ended. I would have to say if !l your ending vs are lime this I would not read another of your stories .she was caught cheating and no one filed for records and then he has been nudged to be dead. Reach along and you think that the recorded lady who is now determined to get her husband back and the boat surges ahead .........end of story....either write short story's and dont put as much descriptive dialog in include a decent end . n you a rent that good think want to take.the time and figure out what you did or did not have for an ending the we as readers have to guess wht happens . I gave you 4 stars o. The story line but you get a minus 5 for..scrappy ending
September 10, 2022
Another one of those erotic books that lack 'erotism' there is none of it in here. Ths story despite what it try to tell present a good number of contradicting element, for example how 'the husband' notices the affair compared with the wife actual feelings in it. The character need a little more of polishing and maybe try to get teh story more grounded.
December 23, 2023
Yes I join the choir begging for an ending (or part 2) and yes, the bounce from one character to another with time passing was tough at times to follow BUT overall, a great story line. Good characters and enough twist and turns to keep you turning the pages. The title does not fit the book. Read it and see why...................
June 19, 2022
Unusual twist to this story, which is well written. Enjoyed the main characters ( Tom and Karen a couple married 23 years) and seeing how they truly feel about each other and what mistakes can cost them. Great ending with surprise.
July 21, 2020
Upset
Totally disgusted with the ending. No closure or HEA ending, too ma y questioning left unanswered. Reads like it should be a number 1 of a series
Totally disgusted with the ending. No closure or HEA ending, too ma y questioning left unanswered. Reads like it should be a number 1 of a series
July 10, 2023
unbelievable story
This is one of those stories where you are hoping for a ending that settles things. But it was a a fantastic story
This is one of those stories where you are hoping for a ending that settles things. But it was a a fantastic story
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