A dull broken record ending on the same note as it started.
Premise is high school misunderstanding between two almost lovers causes a decade+ separation. He thinks she’s turning him down because he’s poor and she’s rich, which causes him to spread a nasty rumor about her. He leaves for football. She stays to marry her HS boyfriend. He comes back to town 12 years later a pro athlete buying his mom a house. Rich girl is the contractor, and she’s no longer rich nor married. Role reversal. Love-hate childish bickering. Insert him screwing her over multiple times, 10,000 apologies, and a HEA.
Yeah, the crux of the entire story is less than 50 pages. The rest is repetitive inner dialogue, arguments, and apologies. A side of ex and football injury. Tons of fluff like BFF phone calls to rehash every damn thing you’ve just read. It’s boring. It has no heart. There’s not a laugh or cry in sight. The story is a flatline that never speeds up.
MCs have zero chemistry. None. Sex scene finally comes in the final leg of the book, and it’s a disappointing fizzle of insert P in P.
MMC is not likable. He always does, thinks, says the wrong thing. Weak apologies. No different than the ex she complains about. Meanwhile, the FMC just goes on and on about how hot he is while bemoaning how people can’t see past her being so gorgeous. Using her when there is less than a few chapters left in the book… well that just sealed his book BF status as DUD and confirms she has been and will always be a chihuahua- all bark and no bite.
The first 80% may have been boring as hell, but the final 20% was the opposite of my notion of romance.
This is listed as a comedy. I’d love for anyone to share a paragraph, scene, or line they actually laughed over?!?! Anyone?!?
Again, he betrays her, uses her toward the END of the book. And, it’s all solved within pages via ILY and sorry. Felt like the entire ending was just pasted on as an afterthought. Snap your fingers and watch her turn to mush and him do a180 from everything he has said the entire other 95% of the book.
I guess the hardest part for me is that I saw so much potential in this book. The rich girl giving it all away to find her own path. The poor kid crossing the socioeconomic tracks. <<< Flip sides of the same coin working together to create something special. Sadly, it remained a CONCEPT, not a plot or story. Neither changed a damn thing about themselves or he would have NEVER used her, and she wouldn’t keep excusing it.
Anyhoo, my search for the four leaf clover (ie a 5 star book) continues onward. This isn’t it.