My favorite character was Hit, who is one of the main characters that always messes up no matter what he is doing. I thought he was very funny and his silly mistakes made me laugh.
I was surprised when the main characters did a turf war in a grocery store. When the turf war was over, they won a lot of money but all of the product the paint landed on would have to be replaced so all the money they made was actually lost.
I think the way the story ended was a nice ending and I would not change it. I would not be surprised if the next book began where this one ended and continued the turf war story.