Here's the problem that I have with this story. While I love a Hero who is protective & loyal to his family, if he is not that way with heroine, then the author loses me. And unfortunately this is what happens here. I got halfway through and realized that Hero's actions towards heroine (even if he justified it because he was hurt of what he perceived of heroine & because he was trying to defend his sister) did not redeem him in my eyes.
For one, HE never apologized for his actions of betraying her the way he did. Yes, he confessed his actions but I don't remember him saying "I'm sorry". Instead, he turned his wrongdoings around and told heroine it was her fault for agreeing to the subterfuge that her team forced her into! (aka fake engagement with co-star). What about HIS actions? Why did heroine continue to have amnesia every time he betrayed & used her?
Nothing makes me angrier then when a hero betrays a heroine in a story (whether it is cheating or something else) and the heroine is somehow at fault and he gets a pass!
Whether one agrees or not, the fact was that HE was the one that seeked revenge without having all his facts and without asking heroine for explanation!
HE made unfair assumptions based on what he saw & believed, rather then fight to get answers.
HE chose family over a woman he had feelings for!
HE chose to continue the revenge (aka photos) even after heroine told him the truth and could have easily contacted Kit right away and told her not to send them or even confess to heroine what was about to happen!
And it was HEROINE who pursued him each time. Would he have even bothered if she didn't reach out or made the first move?
Ugh! I hate self righteous characters who place the blame on others and don't accept their actions!
PS: I realize people who haven't read this may not make much sense, so in a nutshell - Hero's sister is dating heroine's co-star. Hero & heroine meet and it's an instant attraction but it takes a year before they start anything.
Heroine who is an actress is asked by her studio to pretend to be engaged to her co-star (Hero's sister BF) for publicity. She thinks that her costar has talked it out with his GF & she was on board with the fake relationship but it turns out he lied to her and dumped the sister. Heartbroken, the sister, Hero & a friend of theirs seek revenge on Heroine & the BF by having Hero seduce heroine and take a photo to humiliate them.
When the truth comes out the night Hero is seeking his revenge by seducing heroine, she kicks him out before they have sex. Then the next day, the photo is given to the ex BF and he publishes it and it makes heroine look like a cheating whore & a man stealer.
Is Hero repentant or concerned that he may have damaged her career or her life? Not really. He goes on interview to defend his SISTER and denies that anything more then a kiss happened with heroine and that he even knows her!
Heroine on the other hand, in her interview is very complementary towards him!
Then they both decide to go on vacation somewhere to get away from the press and it is heroine who invites herself on his vacation after just learning he was going to seduce her to get revenge on his sister!
And it is during this time that asshole Hero decides to confess the rest of it (the pic leaked) that she is once again hurt that he used her. But he turns it around by saying that had she not got herself in the lie in the first place, his sister wouldn't have been hurt!!
Ummm...hello? Why didn't he or his sister reach out to her and ASK her if it was the truth or not? Why should heroine have been blamed anyway is besides the point because she wasn't in a relationship with Hero then and SHE didn't cheat on his sister! The revenge didn't make sense. It would have made sense if it was directed at the ex-BF and not at heroine. They destroyed her reputation and career and he wasn't sorry or regretful at all. And that's when I was out. DNF.