Well written but...
I didn't find the characters likable or easy to connect with. No doubt, Ms. Lucas can write , but her tale didn't draw me in like I expected from all the other reviews.
It's hard for me to put my finger on it exactly, but the characters felt a little, erm, phony? Unbelievable. I also read the word "girl" used too much. I really despise reading books from male authors when they sling around the word "girl." It's disrespectful to women. Using the term for grown women is just another way to diminish the intelligence of women. You don't see the term "boy" used for grown men in real life or in novels, yet no one blinks at the term "girl." Everyone is just so used to it... most think nothing of it. But I suspect it's one of many ways men continue to keep the upper hand in equality. Not a big one, very subtle, but what is the first thing that comes to your mind when you think about it? Girls? It's one thing for women to call each other girls, but when men do it, it just sounds gross. I'll stop here with my tirade on the use of that term that far too many male authors use and this female author.
But then I guess I shouldn't expect too much from an author who uses a glamored cartoon caricature of her face on Amazon. It looks like something an 18 year old would use.
I also found the misspelling of trooper irritating. The explanation of the word "Amen" given by one of the immortal characters being derived from the Egyptian god Amun is just silly. There is enough debate out there to shed doubt, but I side with the Hebrews and believe it's a coincidence that the word looks like Amun. I know the author was trying to give the immortals a feel of authenticity - maybe next time, use something that can be proven, such as the material used in George Washington's teeth. Now housewives all over America probably believe it.
I'll be passing on Ms. Lucas's other books, including the sequel to this one. Reading the included sample chapter of the next set of books assured me I would not. I didn't like Kian's sister enough to care what happened to her.
And for those of you reading this review and thinking I'm just some sad unhappy bitter spinster...read my other book reviews. I assure you I love to read dystopian, other-worldy, time-travel, sci-fi kinda books, and hate it when there are too many writing mistakes. That's why I gave this book a 2 and not a 1 star.
The concept was interesting, and the writing skill good - I just wasn't expecting to read a book with smoking glamorized, near-rape fantasies acted out, and men with penises so big they popped out at the top/waist of the pants.
I'm guessing this book is like the uber popular "50 Shades of Gray." Started as fan fic on the Internet and became popular with so many women disappointed with what they married.