Since this is a Silhouette Desire book, there are not glaring edit mistakes.
The book was ok. It was an average contemporary romance. Here's the get down. This is the first in a line of books about one very wealthy publishing family and their quest for love. The first book involves the eldest son of the eldest son, Gannon. Gannon is one of the editors at Pulse. He had an affair with Erika over a year ago. Gannon broke it off because there were rumors about the two of them. Gannon now has to get Erika to return to Pulse from the HomeStyle to help his father win the competition for CEO. Gannon is able to get her to return. They become involved again only to break-up again when rumors start again. Oh yeah, Erika only returns because she wants his sperm to have a child. Erika returns to HomeStyle after the break-up, Gannon realizes he needs her in his life and asks her to marry him. She accepts.
There was not much sex present. I would rate the few sex scences 2.5 chili peppers.
I made the mistake of reading the second book first and then this one. I really enjoyed the second one much better.
I did not like Gannon much at all. He was cold, all about business, and it only seemed that he like sex for the physical gratification side of it-no emotion. And by the end of the book, I really didn't see a big change in him realizing he didn't want to live a life without Erika.
I did like like that Gannon was not afraid of challenge and went after what he wanted.
I was not sure how Gannon became so rich. Was it only family money or what? In the second book Tag is wealthy, but it did not seem to be the billionaire level.
The reader is lead to believe that Erika was very upset and heartbroke over the break-up. I accepted that. But in a year she changed from a female who would challenge Gannon to one who would? I did not buy that. I think she needed more time to develop these traits.
What made Erika think Gannon would change once they started an affair again? He had no reason to. He was not going to give her his sperm. He only agreed to get her to return. Again, he had not changed.
And the fact that Erika did not follow up on the contract, but trusted him. She was so focused and professional, it follows that she would have pressured Gannon more about the contract. He was just stringing Erika along.
I did not get a good sense of the two of them together alone. Conversations the had were about office issues and Gannon attempting to woo her into bed.
There was noting wrong with his book, but it really didn't blow up my skirt. I would recommend reading this book first if you are going to read the series.