A GODS EYE VIEW.
"In God We Trust. All others we monitor". - Unofficial creed of the American NSA.
"“We worried for decades about WMDs – Weapons of Mass Destruction. Now it is time to worry about a new kind of WMDs – Weapons of Mass Disruption.”
― John Mariotti
" Amazing. We've managed to perfect the apple--a genetically modified version that never goes brown. And yet, we still haven't upgraded human beings. The human race has stalled out, Harold. And from what I've seen, most of it is rotten to the core."- Samantha Groves.
Computers. They've come along way from the days when they took up entire rooms in university laboratories. Out with the floppy disks and in with the one terabyte hard drives. Gone are the pocket calculators and in are the smartphones and tablet computers. Unlike political systems however which claim to be perfect and absolute upon their ascendance, computer technology hasn't reached its own "end of civilization" moment where there are no more worlds left to conquer. Because in this decade, multiple companies and countries have begun exploring the final frontier, artificial intelligence. Most people when they think of artificial intelligence don't really grasp its implications. But once perfected, AI will radically change the world. Whether it be processing surveillance data faster than the PRISIM project could ever hope to perform or managing the logistics to pre - empt a continental wide famine, having a computer that is just as smart as a human, if not more so, is not a question of how, but when. As of now, only Google, Facebook and the People's Republic Of China have given the question serious thought.
The implications of AI are the focus on The Benevolent Deception by Adrian L. Bailey. Bailey is an indie published writer who hails from Australia. He has significant experience in engineering and as such has a great appreciation for technology. As such, his first novel, a conspiracy/geopolitical thriller with a slight science fiction injection, focuses on a scenario where a world changing piece of technology gets perfected, and the repercussions that would follow if it were not used correctly. Many men and women have sought to change the world, but have never really succeeded. So now to the review. What would happen if changing the world became computerized?
The novel begins in the Niger River State of southern Nigeria. A group of mercenaries protecting one of the vital oil pipelines is attacked by southern separatists. Dodging molotov cocktails, we are introduced to the protagonist, Simon Ashcroft, a former intelligence officer turned private military contractor. He kills several of the men attacking him and his subordinates and subdues some survivors. Across the world on another continent, a USSS agent by the name of Peri Keser watches in horror as Air Force One is reported shot down over Southern Afghanistan. She is then witness to a strange occurrence in Bagram airbase with the power going out. A few minutes later, the power reboots and to the surprise of her and the Bagram commanders, their radar shows Air Force One still in the air, en - route to Berlin. Shortly after this shocking discovery, Peri goes to the crash site of "Air Force One", and after confirming her boss is dead, sees a broadcast from Air Force. The broadcast is live and shows the POTUS unhurt and delivering a speech. The speech is of his new policy proposal to destroy all non - state actors that threaten the USA, from the Middle East to South America. We then cut to Columbia where a journalist who is about to be shot by FARC suddenly is rescued by a large unit of US ARMY RANGERS. Suddenly finding himself going along with them to a drug factory raid in the Minaflores region, he is then nearly killed when a predator drone opens fire on the Rangers it's supposed to be protecting. All these plot threads come together in a rapid fire barrage of intriguing plot twists and chilling violence where soon, only one question remains. When the whole world is about to be changed permanently, how many bodies will the new world order be built on?
In terms of plot, the Benevolent Deception is a gem. What Mr Bailey has done is part of a recent trend in spy/military fiction, namely to mix it with elements of other genres. In this case, Mr Bailey takes a plot that for all intents and purposes is a conventional geopolitical epic, and throws a big, computerized curveball into the mix in the form of a mysterious campaign of cyberwarfare and information manipulation. This gives Bailey's first thriller an atmosphere that unsettles, with the echo of a cyber Lovecraft or electronic Alice In Wonderland. The story harks back to the grand tradition of the old speculative fiction novels that were the forerunner to contemporary technothrillers. The author took a contemporary backdrop and cleverly distorted it in dynamic and interesting ways, freeing himself from the shackles that can hold back most 21st century thriller fiction. Instead of just merely being run and gun, Bailey successfully makes the reader think, about the pitfalls of the modern, tech heavy world that has sprung up around us.
Action and setting? Despite not having a military background, Bailey knows how to craft scenes of fast paced, thrilling violence. He has also traveled across the world in his pre - writing days and thus has the knowledge to accurately recreate the settings his characters find themselves in. He even manages to get the little details right, from the hyenas and environment of Kenya to the sands of the NSA facility in Nevada. From the violent opening in Nigeria to a brutal manhunt through the Kenyan jungles, a run through a rain of bullets on the grounds of the NSA data farm and a explosive, stunning finale on the east coast of India, The Benevolent Deception goes above and beyond the normal level of action in most thrillers, with enough mayhem for several good sized blockbuster films.
Research? The Benevolent Deception has an outstanding level of technical detail. The author has pulled out all the stops in this book and done his homework on everything, from modern cyberwarfare and the behavior of proper artificial intelligence, to the equipment of military units and the lovingly detailed settings. He joins a select group of indie thriller writers who ensure the technical details in their work are airtight. A major standout in the novel is his portrayal of media framing and information warfare. A primary plot element, the opposition use the distortion of information to shape a particular narrative they wish the world to follow and put targets on the backs of people they wish to be killed. In this year, with all the fuss about fake news leading to events such as Comet Ping Pong shooting incident in Washington DC, the book's look at what happens when the true power of information warfare and propaganda is unleashed is somewhat chilling.
Now to the characters. For brevity's sake, I'll focus on three. Simon Ashcroft, Casey Irvine and the American President. First Ashcroft. A former ASIS officer turned soldier of fortune, Ashcroft is introduced working for a PMC in the Niger Delta, a region which is home to one of Nigeria's feared separatist groups. Initially pulled into a situation where he's playing fireman for his boss, doing a final last minute job before some R&R, Ashcroft soon finds himself attempting to avoid getting out of his depth. A consummate professional who is having a very bad day, Simon is a very likable, funny and dare I say it, charismatic protagonist. A badass and savvy operator, yes, but also one with the right amount of humanity and a bit of an enigmatic streak to him. Out of the cast, he downright dominated all the scenes he was in.
Next, Casey Irvine. An American tourist on Safari in Kenya, Casey's life goes down the tubes when a bunch of heavily armed poachers begin opening up on her camp and her fellow tourists (a particularly chilling chapter and Bailey accurately portrays the RPG7 and Kalashnikov tooting poachers of modern Africa dead on). Saved by Ashcroft, she is forced to come with him for her own survival, despite her fears around a man whom she believes is a mere killer. While a little whinny at times, Irvine is a decent depiction of a real life person's behavior in the sort of situation she finds herself in, and over the course of the story, she begins to grow a spine and become more assertive as a person, culminating in a tense scene where she mostly keeps her cool despite a greedy, slightly homicidal military officer sticking a gun in her face.
Finally, we have, "The American President". This guy is a very fun character. A mysterious, enigmatic wild card who will keep readers guessing about what he really wants. Having survived getting blown out of the skies of South West Asia, the President decides to stop with the grand American tradition of kicking the can down the road and begin solving the world's problems, one bullet and predator drone strike at a time. A hero? A villain? Or something in between? "The American President", will keep you on your toes as the bodies begin to fall, with each new policy pronouncement he makes.
As for the constructive criticism? Well, some of the other members of the cast need just a tad more development, namely the USSS Agent Keser and an ally she makes at the NSA. A bit more fleshing out would do them some good for the sequel. I also noticed about two grammatical errors. Nothing serious and 99% of people who are going to be reading this book will probably go past them, but just one extra scan over the final manuscript can help reduce the chances of that one error slipping in. But overall, Bailey covers most, if not all the bases in his first novel, particularly in developing a fascinating fictional setting and establishing the main players with aplomb.
So, my verdict is this. Wishing that the spy/technothriller genre could be shaken up? Like science fiction, but hate Aliens, UFO's and jetpacks? The Benevolent Deception is the novel that fills the void. A genre bending tour de force, the novel resurrects the age old tradition of speculative thrillers in grand style and explores the next big thing in computers and cyberwarfare with succinct, deft skill. Featuring a surreal, paranoia inducing plot that brings to mind a 21st century version of Alice In Wonderland, but with guns and cruise missiles, and a cast of characters who are brought to the edge of madness by the machinations of an electronic God and forced to do whatever it takes to survive, Aiden L Bailey has written the start of a unique, fresh thriller novel series that is going to be on its way to achieve complete, global domination of the online thriller novel market. As Ashcroft and company end the novel, their past lives taken from them, the benevolent conflict is about to begin. Faced with a choice to steal what was lost back from a divine power, battle lines will be drawn and they will most certainly return to decide what change will the world face.
HIGHLY RECOMMENDED.