Review written: February 10, 2020
Star Rating: ★★★★☆
Heat Rating: ☀☀☀☼☼
An Advanced Reader Copy (ARC) of this book was received free from the author in an ARC contest. I was not compensated for my review, and I was not required to write a positive review. The opinion expressed here is my own.
Fragmented Loyalty is the first book in the new Class Alpha spin –off series from the main HORNET series. I have loved this series so hard. I love how well the two series tie in together, but I will say Burrows has left herself a hard task for her next HORNET book since it will take place after Fragmented Loyalty and it may be difficult to separate out the plotlines of the two series. In other words, it may be a tough ask to be able to read the next book without reading this one first. To me, that’s no hardship, but others may have a harder time with it.
This is a dual first person POV from both Harvard’s and Sami’s views. It’s a POV I’ve read often and enjoy. In this case, I felt like it ended up giving away too many secrets too early and ruined some of the suspense. On the flip side, I felt like it created additional intimacy. Harvard emoting was quite something. Despite how often additional characters appeared, it also created a general feeling that they were almost invisible, so strongly did this book create a sense of isolation for Harvard and Sami.
That’s not a bad thing. Both Eric and Samira do feel deeply isolated from their teams. Their relationship is partly built on that fact. They more easily come together because they need each other and complement each other emotionally and in their interests where they have less in common with their teams.
Harvard was not a character I felt deeply about previously, but I loved seeing his backstory and getting a better sense of why he felt isolated from his team (his own fault) and why he felt like he wasn’t puling his weight. I liked seeing him interact with Sami but also with his teammates who were in the book, even though it felt like Harvard and Sami were cocooned in their own world. Harvard was nuanced and layered and his character had already progressed through an arc and then had an additional arc in Fragmented Loyalty. I especially liked how his past influenced his present and how he reacted to that.
Sami was better drawn than Harvard, I think and I felt her more keenly. Both she and Eric share a geek culture ethos that draws them together and I thoroughly enjoyed that aspect of the book. Her motivations, reactions, and feelings are fairly transparent. While I fundamentally disagreed with some of her choices (What was she thinking?!), I still understood why she made them. Her backstory was heartbreaking. But what struck me most about Sami was her desire to do right and her need to be accepted as she was.
Given the trajectory of the HORNET series, this was a departure from the main storyline into a deeply personal story even as it affected all the HORNET guys and their new trainees. It moved along rapidly and I loved how it incorporated new technologies and a great understanding of the tech world, especially the military tech world. It wasn’t non-stop action with no chance to breathe or understand. It was a struggle to overcome the stuff thrown at them, deal with their own emotions and pasts, and still keep themselves and their loved ones safe. I especially liked how it took a new tone, setting it apart from HORNET itself but still deeply embedded in that world.
Despite the fact that I guessed some of it before the reveals, it was a tense plot that maintained an edge all the way through. I already couldn’t wait for the next books in the HORNET series, but I am now also invested in the stories of several trainees. An absolute win for Burrows!
This review is ©February 2020 by Monique N. and has been crossposted to Amazon.com.