I, probably like many others who review & rate books on here and other sites, often am thinking 'how many stars' while I'm reading. More often then not, books I read tend to 'lose ground' as I proceed through the story. So many authors have a good idea, but can never quite pull it off.
All the while I was reading Swartwood's second effort in the Man of Wax series I kept waffling between 2 maybe 3 stars. The book is too long, some of the conversation is downright laughable, I couldn't quite believe that this Ben was the same character as the Ben from the first book, a few of the relationships (Ben and Maya especially) just don't ring true, nothing about this has even the slightest hint of reality, etc.
Despite all this I kept turning (or should I say clicking) through the book and couldn't put it down. While the first 100 pages could have been edited down to half that amount the last third of the book sizzles. We learn a bit more about the conspiracy and the mastermind behind the 'games' and we are left with a cliff hanger that is sure to bring us back to read the concluding book in the trilogy. So to that end the book is successful. Just don't let any of my literary friends, even the ones that know I enjoy pulp, know that I have found this series to be kind of a sinful pleasure.