My #1 issue with this sequel is that I think there are a lot of detours that we didn't necessarily need to take. It felt like there were moments added that took us away from the main storyline- some were useful for character or relationship development, but others I couldn't see the sense in. To me, it felt like they were putting off our arrival at the ending, and I would have much preferred the ending be extended a few chapters rather than some of the side trips because I think that would have more directly benefitted the story.
The end twist was something that I guessed pretty much the moment the background knowledge was given to us. Do I find that a big detractor? Not really. A lot of these RH books have FMCs that are special in some extra way- usually, that lends itself to why they need a harem and/or need certain types of men in their harem. So, the twist wasn't really ruined, but I am thinking that it's pretty predictable for the subgenre.
As far as the relationships go, the dynamics are fine- it's not my most aw-worthy group, nor is it the most cringe-worthy. I think there needs to be more about Maya getting caught up to the rest of the world. There are some good moments where she starts to think about herself as a person and who she is independent from the guys, but those are rare, and I'm really hoping book three extends on them.
Overall, I'm reading the series on KU, so it's not the end of the world to me that I wasn't WOW-ed, but purchasers may have a different feeling on it. For me, I might not have been riveted to every page, but there were enough interesting moments that I'd get book three on KU when it comes out. A lot of the detractors that I see in this book are ones I've seen in other books by this author, so I think it might be a difference between her style and my preferences, and that might be something I just have to reconcile with.