I received this book in exchange for an honest review.
Magic is women’s work, while fighting is men’s – those are the ideals that govern eighteen-year old Salo’s life. But he’s never been very good at conforming to his tribe’s ideals, and despite the tribe not having a fully developed mystic of its own which often leads to difficulties, the jabbed words and hostile glances make Salo feel as if he’s a pariah within his own society. Despite it being sacrilege, Salo continues to hone his craft, his only friends a mystic in training and a boy named Monti. When their village is attacked under an enchantress, resulting in the death of many, Salo has to come to terms with his shortcomings and his passivity, and decide once and for all if he’s going to take action.
Scarlet Odyssey is an epic in every sense of the word. Almost 600-pages of tightly woven plot, world-building that keeps expanding with every chapter, a wide cast of characters and an intricate magic system, this African-inspired fantasy has something in it for everyone. Had I not been in The Mother of All Slumps, I would have devoured this in a couple of days.
Rwizi writes seemingly effortlessly, making an otherwise complex story quite easy to digest, one that is propelled forward by its characters. The book follows several different perspective characters in different areas of this world. Even so, it’s obvious that Salo is our main focus, and he is given the most attention and the most time to grow. His conflict is informed by both a past trauma that he has repressed, one that you slowly piece together as the story goes along, as well as the internalized and external marginalization he faces for practicing magic in a society where men basically exist to be physical fighters. There is no romance in this book, but Salo is also queer and has feelings for a renowned general in his tribe’s army, feelings that he feels are unrequited. I thought Salo was a very easy-to-love character, despite his flaws. He felt incredibly real, and his development followed a logical, gradual path that only makes you enjoy him more.
On the flip side, we have Ilapara who was my favorite character. She is a female sell-sword of sorts, selling her skills and services far from her home tribe. Although she is also a character going against the grain of societal gender roles, she doesn’t grapple with them quite like Salo does, which I thought was interesting commentary on toxic masculinity where traditionally “female” roles are seen as inferior and emasculating. Ilapara is fierce and funny and strong-willed, even though she grapples with doing the right thing despite being such a survivalist… and I loved her to death. I wish we’d gotten to see more of her.
Aside from Ilapara, this book is full of complex, well-developed female characters who all have POV chapters. Primarily of these, there is Kelafelo, a woman whose family and village was destroyed by a warlord’s army, and so she embarks on a quest of revenge. There’s Isa, a princess whose family is wiped out and is then forced to step into the shoes of a ruler, and there’s the Maidservant, an extremely powerful mystic working for a warlord who commands her to destroy towns and villages.
I thought Isa’s character was the weakest, as was her storyline. I found it confusing at times, and I think I would have to re-read in order to grasp her role in the larger story, but I was very attached to all the other characters, even the ones who were introduced much later in the story (I’m looking at you, Tuk!)
The one place I struggled was the magic system and the world-building. And this is probably going to be just me, let me preface. Both of these elements were well thought-out and you could tell that Rwizi spent so much time and passion developing them. But I have never been a reader particularly interested in the machinations of magic in a fantasy, and this book is heavy on the magic. It’s an interesting, intricate, unique system that I could appreciate 100%, but because it was so complex, a lot of time is spent detailing it, so I found myself distracted sometimes and lost the other times. In the sequel, I hope this is dialed back, because it did disrupt the flow for me. However, I know many other fantasy readers love this focus on magic systems, so again, this was subjective.
As for the world-building… I just needed a map to supplement my experience! That’s it! Unfortunately, my ARC didn’t have one but the finished copy does, so that should enhance other people’s experience.
Conversations about how the world and its magic would apply outside the gender binary can also be had, but I think there’s enough room for Rwizi to explore more of these nuances in the future books.
Overall, I think this is such an incredible, solid debut that completely took me by surprise with how invested I immediately became. I cannot recommend this book enough, and I sincerely hope that anyone reading this will look into it, and give it the chance it so deserves. Can’t wait to get my hands on the sequel!
Content Warnings: Graphic depictions of violence, death of children, torture, slavery.