Dear John,
Finished Slaves to darkness this evening. What a wonderful addition to the HH series. Enjoyed it massively. 5 out of 5. Compliments to you for such an entertaining novel at this stage of our journey. Some thoughts. Mild spoilers ahead.
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First of all, the novel was entertaining all the time, all chapters. That's quite a feat for a novel, in my opinion, for most books slow down during the journey, at least now and then. This book didn't, in my opinion. Every time a new chapter started, I was kind of sad that the old one ended, wanting to know how the story of the former chapter would continu. But, when just a few lines or pages into a new chapter, I was again fully immersed into the story.
So, we come to the obvious question: which of the three storylines was the best? Layak, Maloghurst or Argonis. Difficult to say, very difficult. The Layak one was a strong one for sure, but the others were great too.
What were highlights for me in this novel? Well, I loved the Orcus part a lot, the scenes in the webway, the meeting with Fulgrim and all the stuff there. But surely also the scenes at Deluge, the one with Kharn for example, the one with Angron and Perturabo off course too. Loved the scene with Horus in the warp, or dream or whatever or wherever it was, him fighting and fighting , on and on, not wishing to submit. The Ullanor scenes were also very nice, some real emotion there, sometimes gave me the chills. These scenes combined the past (both within the series but also as an reading experience for us readers) with the now and upcoming future (siege of terra and Horus ultimate fate). The conversations between Horus and Mal, about making choices, about lies, about being nobody's slave, good stuff, bringing a bit the old HH feeling with it (Horus rising, the first part of False gods .... seems like another era almost).
The HH series are at it's best (I think) when we come along scenes in which very human things happen to very inhuman / trans - human characters. Love, brotherhood, betrayal, jealousy, honor and so on. Then the HH series are at it's hight, but also very relatable: although happening in a pure fictional world, they adres situations which can happen to you or me in everyday life. Scenes like the Aximand - Torgaddon confrontation in galaxy in flames, or Fulgrim - Ferrus in book V. This book had such of scenes too, so good stuff.
It is also a bit of 'game of thrones in space' (which is a big compliment I think), with so much back stabbing, family issues and so on. Loyalties shift, the unexpected happens, old grudges come to the fore and so on. And even with the ending (the traitors gather), there is still much more going on than just a coming together of traitors.
When considering characters, I think Lorgar and Perturabo stole the show. They were very well handled, in my opinion. Big appearances, as primarchs should be, continuing the developments made by other books and authors and still adding to them. The last scene with Lorgar was too very good, and surprising also. Very curious to see what road he will be on after this book ...
Did I miss something in this book? Well, perhaps I would have liked to see a bit more how GREAT the absence of Horus was felt in the XVI legion. We see bits about it with Aximand and Mal, but this could have had a bit more light in my opinion. To FEEL the absence of Horus even more. And near the end, we see the traitors gather. Well, I would like to see a bit more in detail: more exactly which ships, which companies and commanders and so on. And a bit more on numbers. Here and there we get a bit about numbers, but we still don't know exactly how great the forces of Horus are that are going to attack the sol system. Perturabo knows them, I would like to see a bit more of them too, also to get even more the idea of that MASSIVE scale that the siege of terra shall have. Perhaps with a new series dedicated to the siege, we get more on this. I know some fans want more 'numbers' too .....
Well, as I said, very good stuff, every chapter and every storyline keeps entertaining, not slowing down for even a bit, not a part where I didn't get through the story in a good way. A very very good addition to the series, making the hype for Titan Death, the Death guard novel and the siege even bigger. Big compliments and keep up this good work ! Cheers !