I love reverse harems but this was NOT IT. There was no connection to other the guys ( just Ty) only physical and their interactions just seemed like gross hook ups because she didn’t know one thing about any of them . It would of been so much better if her relationship would have just been with Tyson. This is coming a gal that has binge read all the reverse harem books. There has to be an emotional attachment also or it just doesn’t work.
Another thing that drove me nuts was at the beginning of one of Redemption Quinn was eating a ton of food and and Lily mentioned it. She went on to explain she had a fast metabolism and took advantage of it. But then further in the book she thought that she wished she had Liv’s metabolism because she herself had to watch what she ate. Um.... WHAT?
I found the text, this was so confusing to me ....
“I hadn’t noticed that about her–I was never around when she was eating. But for her figure and athleticism, she might be on a strict diet or some crap like that. Not me. Thankfully, I had a crazy metabolism–food literally disappeared inside me once it hit my stomach. I was grateful for that, and I abused it, too.” ( Quinn Pg 161)
Ihad never, not before last night, seen Liv eat that much. It was as if she had developed some kind of tapeworm overnight. She used to be a picky eater before, constantly obsessed with her weight. Now, she was just chugging on food. I wished I could eat like that. I didn’t have a fast metabolism, so I had to be deliberate about what and how much I ate. “I wish I could do that,” I said to her as we sat by the pool the Sunday evening. Mia and Bella were over, and we were having cocktail drinks and sandwiches. “Me, too,” Bella said and tossed her wavy blonde hair over her shoulder. ( Quinn Pg 254)
Also, not sure if the author is from another country but in America football games are just that GAMES not MATCHES. When they have a practice game against another team it’s called a SCRIMMAGE not a practice match. I’m reading another series of hers and she also calls basketball games matches. Sorry but I’ve around athletics my whole life I can’t not mention this because it drove me freekin CRAZY! Just do a little research about sports if you’re going to incorporate them in your books:)