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The Bewitching Of Camille
Three hundred years ago, witches terrorized the world. Three times as powerful as any other demon, no one could stop their devastation. Absorbing that much power so quickly was thought to be too much for any 'woman' to endure. Many believed it drove them insane and subsequently; turned them evil. Out of desperation, the Council of Warlocks engaged in a secret war against their wives and daughters in an attempt to save themselves and the world from extinction.
Reluctantly, they formed an unlikely alliance with, The Vampires and The Lycans, then for thirty years, together they fought a secret war to rid the world of evil. They spared only the adolescent witches (younglings) who were then isolated; never again would they see another of their kind. The girls were raised and educated as 'humans' and when of age, they were bought and sold as breeding stock to propagate the race, then discreetly destroyed before turning twenty-one, the year in which it was believed they achieved their full power. This became every warlock’s individual, “responsibility“ and for the last 258 years, they have all, dutifully carried it out - until now.
With New Orleans as its backdrop, “The Bewitching of Camille“ tells a tragic story of a young mother who must battle tremendous odds to save her daughter from a father who must find the strength in his heart to destroy them both.
Reluctantly, they formed an unlikely alliance with, The Vampires and The Lycans, then for thirty years, together they fought a secret war to rid the world of evil. They spared only the adolescent witches (younglings) who were then isolated; never again would they see another of their kind. The girls were raised and educated as 'humans' and when of age, they were bought and sold as breeding stock to propagate the race, then discreetly destroyed before turning twenty-one, the year in which it was believed they achieved their full power. This became every warlock’s individual, “responsibility“ and for the last 258 years, they have all, dutifully carried it out - until now.
With New Orleans as its backdrop, “The Bewitching of Camille“ tells a tragic story of a young mother who must battle tremendous odds to save her daughter from a father who must find the strength in his heart to destroy them both.
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February 18, 2020
A terrific supernatural adventure somewhat akin to Beautiful Creatures, but with a style and voice all its own, and not necessarily YA, IMO. It tells the tale of a "young witch who must battle tremendous odds to save her daughter," and has "the voodoo culture of New Orleans as its backdrop." This book really delivered for me. If you want to try something different and very cool, you need to check this out.
September 24, 2019
Sometimes a girl wants to read something yummy. The Bewitching of Camille, masterfully written by D.A. Barney is a Pu Pu Platter! The assortment of paranormal romance, adventure, fantasy, mystery, and wolves, perfectly satiated my hunger for a fictional, page-turner with emotional substance. Yes, I teared up. Yes, I was invested in all of the characters. I wrestled with liking the characters that I hated because Barney insists on character depth. The book is fluid. The obvious subsequent step is to turn this baby into an epic Wiccan television series!
December 11, 2019
In a world of vampires, werewolves, and warlocks, witches rise in strength above them all. For that reason, the Council of Warlocks was established 200+ years ago to ensure that all witches be eliminated before their 21st birthday, when their power peaks and they lose their minds to the immense force, turning them into something evil. But Camille, a powerful witch descended from one of The Five Great Ones - Esmerelda, won’t give into such a fate so easily.
Witches, tarot cards, dark magic, and New Orleans - what’s not to love? At first, I was a little worried about the sensitivity of this book. Women becoming manic and unable to control power therefor being prevented from its very use is a very real, historical, and current delusion/issue. Also, responding to the many with the actions of a few touches various groups of people in this current day and age with its prejudice fingers. It’s a sensitive time and I was pleased to see this topic handled and addressed well within this fantasy world. And of course, with the issues being relevant and being a woman, I enjoyed seeing how this justice played out in such a magically epic way. This world is a fascinating experience in what feels like relatable conflicts, making it all the more alluring!
We begin each chapter with a select line from the coming pages which I loved because it posed a question before the chapter even began. This book was fast-paced, never plateaued, and kept me enthralled. The characters were complex, interesting and I found myself rooting for each and every character at some point throughout the story which was fun because normally you only ever root for one or two. I loved the environments, especially the bar in Harlem, and the dark magic that weaved itself around the plot. The story about Loucifer was a badass side plot and I’m glad we were given those tidbits of background. It’s been a while since I’ve read a fantasy book - I read a lot of vampire books (where my vampire people at?) but tend to avoid the mashup fantasy genre for no other reason than I get scared of the corniness. But this book was fun!
A few notes: I do wish Julien and Camilles’ relationship was built up more. We were introduced to its intensity midway through and I feel like I lost a lot of that romantic cheering because of that. I think the author could’ve spent less time explaining or telling actions and more time showing and expanding on emotions - when allegedly very important and loved characters died, I didn’t feel that pain because the death seemed so quick and unimportant. I would’ve loved to see those impactful moments frozen and dissected so I could really feel what the other characters were going through as their friends and family died right before them. I think in general, it can be trusted that a reader will pick up on a characters' behavior and attitudes based on the subtle actions the author provides so a lot of the explanation about characters was unnecessary because the author already did a good job at distinguishing their personalities. And finally, the scenes leading up to the ending were a little chaotic. There was a lot going on and I lost track of people’s motives even though the action scenes were very vibrant and enjoyable. BUT, I will say, the true ending was perfect. It’s definitely a cliffhanger and did an excellent job at keeping me on my toes for the next book. I’m excited to see what this author has in the works and look forward to this universe’s expansion.
(P.S. Can we please have a Tirin and Dane spin-off?)
Witches, tarot cards, dark magic, and New Orleans - what’s not to love? At first, I was a little worried about the sensitivity of this book. Women becoming manic and unable to control power therefor being prevented from its very use is a very real, historical, and current delusion/issue. Also, responding to the many with the actions of a few touches various groups of people in this current day and age with its prejudice fingers. It’s a sensitive time and I was pleased to see this topic handled and addressed well within this fantasy world. And of course, with the issues being relevant and being a woman, I enjoyed seeing how this justice played out in such a magically epic way. This world is a fascinating experience in what feels like relatable conflicts, making it all the more alluring!
We begin each chapter with a select line from the coming pages which I loved because it posed a question before the chapter even began. This book was fast-paced, never plateaued, and kept me enthralled. The characters were complex, interesting and I found myself rooting for each and every character at some point throughout the story which was fun because normally you only ever root for one or two. I loved the environments, especially the bar in Harlem, and the dark magic that weaved itself around the plot. The story about Loucifer was a badass side plot and I’m glad we were given those tidbits of background. It’s been a while since I’ve read a fantasy book - I read a lot of vampire books (where my vampire people at?) but tend to avoid the mashup fantasy genre for no other reason than I get scared of the corniness. But this book was fun!
A few notes: I do wish Julien and Camilles’ relationship was built up more. We were introduced to its intensity midway through and I feel like I lost a lot of that romantic cheering because of that. I think the author could’ve spent less time explaining or telling actions and more time showing and expanding on emotions - when allegedly very important and loved characters died, I didn’t feel that pain because the death seemed so quick and unimportant. I would’ve loved to see those impactful moments frozen and dissected so I could really feel what the other characters were going through as their friends and family died right before them. I think in general, it can be trusted that a reader will pick up on a characters' behavior and attitudes based on the subtle actions the author provides so a lot of the explanation about characters was unnecessary because the author already did a good job at distinguishing their personalities. And finally, the scenes leading up to the ending were a little chaotic. There was a lot going on and I lost track of people’s motives even though the action scenes were very vibrant and enjoyable. BUT, I will say, the true ending was perfect. It’s definitely a cliffhanger and did an excellent job at keeping me on my toes for the next book. I’m excited to see what this author has in the works and look forward to this universe’s expansion.
(P.S. Can we please have a Tirin and Dane spin-off?)
December 10, 2020
The Bewitching Of Camille by D.A. Barney:
"If you destroy all the bees 'cuz of a few stings, then the world is deprived of honey."
Thanks to the author for approaching me for the review and sending me an e-copy.
This book is my first in Supernatural genre. I am probably the only person who hasn't read or watched Twilight, but my non-readers friends have. When I read the synopsis of this book, the only thing I could think about was this book's connection to the Salem Witch Trials. Read on for the official description.
Three hundred years ago, witches terrorized the world. Three times as powerful as any other demon, no one could stop their devastation. Absorbing that much power so quickly was thought to be too much for any woman to endure. Many believed it drove them insane and subsequently; turned them to evil. Out of desperation, the Council of Warlocks engaged in a secret war against their wives and daughters in an attempt to save themselves and the world from extinction. Reluctantly, they formed an unlikely alliance with the Vampires and the Lycans. Then, for thirty years, together they fought a secret war to get rid of the world of evil. They spared only the adolescent witches (younglings) who were then isolated; never again would they see another of their kind. The girls were raised and educated as humans and when of age, they were bought and sold as breeding stock to propagate the race, then discreetly destroyed before turning twenty-one, the year in which it was believed they achieved their full power. This became every warlock’s individual, “responsibility“ and for the last 258 years, they have all have dutifully carried it out - until now.
With the voodoo culture of New Orleans as a backdrop, this book tells a tragic story of a young mother who must battle tremendous odds to save her daughter from a father who must find the strength in his heart to destroy them both.
This is going to be short since I haven't read any book similar to this. The book lives up to the person's expectations aroused by the description, and in many ways, so much more. I enjoyed reading this book so much! It is everything a good book is: fast-paced, entertaining, binge-worthy, thought-provoking and utterly 'bewitching'. *wink wink* I loved how every character is beautifully and intricately developed: you absolutely cannot hate anyone in this book except Barret Gerrard and Cecil. I hate them with every fibre of my being! Honourable mention: Tirin who has taken the mantle of being my favourite character in this book. Barney is a magical story-teller who beautifully hypnotises the reader. He had me engrossed in this tale with the very first chapter!
It broke my heart when I found out this is a series because I am so on the edge to know what happened next. I am not a patient reader as you all know. I absolutely cannot wait to read the second one in this series!
Rating: 4.5/5
Recommended: Whether you are into Vampires, Lycans, Witches and Warlocks or not, you should give this one a read!
"If you destroy all the bees 'cuz of a few stings, then the world is deprived of honey."
Thanks to the author for approaching me for the review and sending me an e-copy.
This book is my first in Supernatural genre. I am probably the only person who hasn't read or watched Twilight, but my non-readers friends have. When I read the synopsis of this book, the only thing I could think about was this book's connection to the Salem Witch Trials. Read on for the official description.
Three hundred years ago, witches terrorized the world. Three times as powerful as any other demon, no one could stop their devastation. Absorbing that much power so quickly was thought to be too much for any woman to endure. Many believed it drove them insane and subsequently; turned them to evil. Out of desperation, the Council of Warlocks engaged in a secret war against their wives and daughters in an attempt to save themselves and the world from extinction. Reluctantly, they formed an unlikely alliance with the Vampires and the Lycans. Then, for thirty years, together they fought a secret war to get rid of the world of evil. They spared only the adolescent witches (younglings) who were then isolated; never again would they see another of their kind. The girls were raised and educated as humans and when of age, they were bought and sold as breeding stock to propagate the race, then discreetly destroyed before turning twenty-one, the year in which it was believed they achieved their full power. This became every warlock’s individual, “responsibility“ and for the last 258 years, they have all have dutifully carried it out - until now.
With the voodoo culture of New Orleans as a backdrop, this book tells a tragic story of a young mother who must battle tremendous odds to save her daughter from a father who must find the strength in his heart to destroy them both.
This is going to be short since I haven't read any book similar to this. The book lives up to the person's expectations aroused by the description, and in many ways, so much more. I enjoyed reading this book so much! It is everything a good book is: fast-paced, entertaining, binge-worthy, thought-provoking and utterly 'bewitching'. *wink wink* I loved how every character is beautifully and intricately developed: you absolutely cannot hate anyone in this book except Barret Gerrard and Cecil. I hate them with every fibre of my being! Honourable mention: Tirin who has taken the mantle of being my favourite character in this book. Barney is a magical story-teller who beautifully hypnotises the reader. He had me engrossed in this tale with the very first chapter!
It broke my heart when I found out this is a series because I am so on the edge to know what happened next. I am not a patient reader as you all know. I absolutely cannot wait to read the second one in this series!
Rating: 4.5/5
Recommended: Whether you are into Vampires, Lycans, Witches and Warlocks or not, you should give this one a read!
November 1, 2019
I read this book... and then I read it again, and I read it again. I cannot stop thinking about the characters and the world created by D.A. Barney. I literally sometimes think I know them, which is weird, but it's a testament to the level of detail and care that were taken in creating this story of supernatural creatures with all too human flaws. The backdrop of New Orleans also infuses a smoldering sense of weight and atavistic savagery into the mix that cannot be ignored. Normally, when I read a book, I come away knowing the identity of my favorite character, but there are so many brilliant characters here, from Camille to JD to Tirin to Rayna to.... just too many to pick one.
I expect I'll be reading this again, very soon!
I expect I'll be reading this again, very soon!
December 31, 2019
Excellently written story
This is by far the most interesting, can't put down, book I have read in a long time. I truly hope the author writes another one soon.
This is by far the most interesting, can't put down, book I have read in a long time. I truly hope the author writes another one soon.
December 22, 2020
I’m sorry. I can heal the injury, but I can’t take away the pain.
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Three hundred years ago, witches terrorized the world. Three times as powerful as any other demon, no one could stop their devastation. Absorbing that much power so quickly was thought to be too much for any woman to endure. Many believed it drove them insane and subsequently; turned them to evil. Out of desperation, the Council of Warlocks engaged in a secret war against their wives and daughters in an attempt to save themselves and the world from extinction.
Reluctantly, they formed an unlikely alliance with, The Vampires and The Lycans then, for thirty years, together they fought a secret war to rid the world of evil. They spared only the adolescent witches (younglings) who were then isolated; never again would they see another of their kind. The girls were raised and educated as humans and when of age, they were bought and sold as breeding stock to propagate the race, then discreetly destroyed before turning twenty-one, the year in which it was believed they achieved their full power. This became every warlock’s individual, “responsibility“ and for the last 258 years, they have all, dutifully carried it out - until now.
With the voodoo culture of New Orleans as a backdrop, “The Bewitching of Camille“ tells a tragic story of a young mother who must battle tremendous odds to save her daughter from a father who must find the strength in his heart to destroy them both.
🦄🦄🦄
The Bewitching of Camille is a supernatural fantasy novel by D.A. Barney and the first book.
This book left me begging for more with its intense plot andxwell written characters. Even though I don't consider myself a huge fan of the supernatural, the author's writing style is one to watch out for. There's this no nonsense, all great content approach when it comes to the content and from the very beginning, everything is explained to us with such intrigue that it becomes next to impossible to stop reading.
The main character, Camille, starts her story off as just a teenager, but her character development and growth was impeccable as we watch her protect the ones she loves. But, you also fall in love with other characters as well, as the author makes sure that every character has a reason for being there and everyone develops a personality, be it good or evil.
This was such an adventurous yet emotional journey because of what the story truly holds and by the end of it, I was in pieces.
Vampires, witches, etc may seem like child's play or a things only meant for younger audiences because of the stereotypes, but this book exceeds all expectations.
It has a little bit of everything for everyone and overall just becomes the perfect book to read.
This was also one book that I hope to see transformed into a TV series or movie!!
🦄🦄🦄
Rated 10/10
Melina L.
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Three hundred years ago, witches terrorized the world. Three times as powerful as any other demon, no one could stop their devastation. Absorbing that much power so quickly was thought to be too much for any woman to endure. Many believed it drove them insane and subsequently; turned them to evil. Out of desperation, the Council of Warlocks engaged in a secret war against their wives and daughters in an attempt to save themselves and the world from extinction.
Reluctantly, they formed an unlikely alliance with, The Vampires and The Lycans then, for thirty years, together they fought a secret war to rid the world of evil. They spared only the adolescent witches (younglings) who were then isolated; never again would they see another of their kind. The girls were raised and educated as humans and when of age, they were bought and sold as breeding stock to propagate the race, then discreetly destroyed before turning twenty-one, the year in which it was believed they achieved their full power. This became every warlock’s individual, “responsibility“ and for the last 258 years, they have all, dutifully carried it out - until now.
With the voodoo culture of New Orleans as a backdrop, “The Bewitching of Camille“ tells a tragic story of a young mother who must battle tremendous odds to save her daughter from a father who must find the strength in his heart to destroy them both.
🦄🦄🦄
The Bewitching of Camille is a supernatural fantasy novel by D.A. Barney and the first book.
This book left me begging for more with its intense plot andxwell written characters. Even though I don't consider myself a huge fan of the supernatural, the author's writing style is one to watch out for. There's this no nonsense, all great content approach when it comes to the content and from the very beginning, everything is explained to us with such intrigue that it becomes next to impossible to stop reading.
The main character, Camille, starts her story off as just a teenager, but her character development and growth was impeccable as we watch her protect the ones she loves. But, you also fall in love with other characters as well, as the author makes sure that every character has a reason for being there and everyone develops a personality, be it good or evil.
This was such an adventurous yet emotional journey because of what the story truly holds and by the end of it, I was in pieces.
Vampires, witches, etc may seem like child's play or a things only meant for younger audiences because of the stereotypes, but this book exceeds all expectations.
It has a little bit of everything for everyone and overall just becomes the perfect book to read.
This was also one book that I hope to see transformed into a TV series or movie!!
🦄🦄🦄
Rated 10/10
Melina L.
July 3, 2025
⚫️D. A. Barney's The Bewitching of Camille is an exhilarating start to The Wiccan Chronicles Trilogy, taking readers on a darkly enchanting journey where magic intertwines with destiny, danger, and survival. This YA fantasy beautifully blends a gothic atmosphere, romantic tension, and supernatural lore, setting the stage for what promises to be a captivating trilogy.
⚫️Camille St. Croix is a complex heroine, grappling with her legacy, chased by prophecy, and drawn to forces she barely understands. As she unravels the mysteries of her lineage and her forbidden powers, Camille becomes the reluctant centerpiece in a centuries-old conflict involving witches, warlocks, vampires, and lycans. Her struggle transcends mere magic; it’s deeply emotional and existential, with stakes that could alter her fate and that of her bloodline.
⚫️Barney's writing immerses you in the eerie beauty of Louisiana's bayous and the shadowy mansions of England. The world-building is rich with gothic elements, and the supernatural conflicts ranging from blood feuds to dark sorcery are laced with heart-pounding suspense and romantic tension. The forbidden love that simmers throughout is passionate, sensual, and just dangerous enough to keep you flipping the pages.
⚫️The themes of female empowerment, ancestral trauma, and sacrifice are handled with depth, giving the fantasy a strong emotional foundation. Camille’s journey from confusion to clarity, from fear to fierce resolve makes her both relatable and inspiring.
⚫️While a few secondary characters could use a bit more development, and the pacing in the middle may slow down to build suspense, the conclusion is definitely rewarding. With plenty of twists, betrayals, and secrets, The Bewitching of Camille will leave you eagerly anticipating Book II.
⚫️A mesmerizing, atmospheric, and enchanting read. The Bewitching of Camille lingers in your mind long after you turn the last page. Perfect for readers who crave a blend of magic and emotion.
Happy reading ❤️✨
January 12, 2021
I have a special heart for books consist of Blood oozing out after the darkest woods and deepest secrets.
It's a story of a witch mother 'Camille" safeguarding her daughter and figuring to fight against her husband "Julien" & war council.
Written by "D.A. Barney" Is an outstanding script writer and won eleven different awards in competitions and film festivals around the world.
Recently he finished a television series project named "Phantom X".
Book is pleasant read with nearly 339 pages. My experience within the story is body chilling. More is lesser here & the side you will choose for the story will change your perspective.
Script is well written about the blood sucking vampires, an alpha wolf and the leads giving to which story taking a major rotation are "Witches".
To put more horrific twilight experience, you will picture the great deep dark forest filled with monsters & their acts.
Witchcraft is shown at greater length, at the beginning my body hair raised while reading and story grabbed me like a Cuscuta.
Book isn't a general vamp-witch story piled with sole purpose that is to make you feel haunted only. This has another great venture as it will move you from horror to love and from there to somewhere else.
You will love to see how "council of warlock" five old men the more accurately vampires governing the network they have of millions of people to conquer and safeguard their interest.
The sole purpose they have is to kill each and every single witch before she is turning its twenty-one years of age.
The council have done it for past 258 years, they spare the younglings and let them live, give them time to be active like other humans until they get to reach a certain age before they get purged.
Read and see how powerful and horrendous wild witches become when they reach their twenty one. It's filled with much suspense and magic.
It's a book I of The Wiccan trilogy, " The Midnight man" is the II book.
It's a story of a witch mother 'Camille" safeguarding her daughter and figuring to fight against her husband "Julien" & war council.
Written by "D.A. Barney" Is an outstanding script writer and won eleven different awards in competitions and film festivals around the world.
Recently he finished a television series project named "Phantom X".
Book is pleasant read with nearly 339 pages. My experience within the story is body chilling. More is lesser here & the side you will choose for the story will change your perspective.
Script is well written about the blood sucking vampires, an alpha wolf and the leads giving to which story taking a major rotation are "Witches".
To put more horrific twilight experience, you will picture the great deep dark forest filled with monsters & their acts.
Witchcraft is shown at greater length, at the beginning my body hair raised while reading and story grabbed me like a Cuscuta.
Book isn't a general vamp-witch story piled with sole purpose that is to make you feel haunted only. This has another great venture as it will move you from horror to love and from there to somewhere else.
You will love to see how "council of warlock" five old men the more accurately vampires governing the network they have of millions of people to conquer and safeguard their interest.
The sole purpose they have is to kill each and every single witch before she is turning its twenty-one years of age.
The council have done it for past 258 years, they spare the younglings and let them live, give them time to be active like other humans until they get to reach a certain age before they get purged.
Read and see how powerful and horrendous wild witches become when they reach their twenty one. It's filled with much suspense and magic.
It's a book I of The Wiccan trilogy, " The Midnight man" is the II book.
June 22, 2025
🌟 Book Review: The Bewitching of Camille
🖋️ By D. A. Barney
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
🧙♀️ Witches once ruled the world — powerful, chaotic, and feared beyond measure.
⚔️ Three centuries ago, the Warlocks, desperate to save humanity, waged a brutal war against their own wives and daughters.
🧛♂️🧍♂️ They joined forces with Vampires and Lycans, fighting in the shadows for thirty bloody years.
👧 Only the youngest witches — the younglings — were spared… but their fate was far from merciful.
🏷️ Raised as humans, sold as breeders, and killed before turning 21 — when their true power would awaken.
🫢 For 258 years, this horrific tradition continued — without question.
💔 Until one woman said “enough.”
👩👧 The Bewitching of Camille follows a young mother caught in a nightmare — fighting to save her daughter from the man who must destroy them both: her lover, her daughter’s father.
🌒 Set in the haunting, mystical city of New Orleans, this dark fantasy drips with betrayal, heartbreak, and a mother’s fierce love.
🔥 A powerful, tragic tale that asks: Can love survive prophecy? Can fate be rewritten?
📖 D. A. Barney delivers a bold, unforgettable story for fans of witchy lore, supernatural politics, and heartbreaking choices.
✨ Add this to your dark fantasy TBR now — it will haunt you long after the final page.
#BookReview #TheBewitchingOfCamille #DABarney #DarkFantasy #WitchBooks #FantasyReads #MagicAndMothers #Bookstagram
🖋️ By D. A. Barney
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
🧙♀️ Witches once ruled the world — powerful, chaotic, and feared beyond measure.
⚔️ Three centuries ago, the Warlocks, desperate to save humanity, waged a brutal war against their own wives and daughters.
🧛♂️🧍♂️ They joined forces with Vampires and Lycans, fighting in the shadows for thirty bloody years.
👧 Only the youngest witches — the younglings — were spared… but their fate was far from merciful.
🏷️ Raised as humans, sold as breeders, and killed before turning 21 — when their true power would awaken.
🫢 For 258 years, this horrific tradition continued — without question.
💔 Until one woman said “enough.”
👩👧 The Bewitching of Camille follows a young mother caught in a nightmare — fighting to save her daughter from the man who must destroy them both: her lover, her daughter’s father.
🌒 Set in the haunting, mystical city of New Orleans, this dark fantasy drips with betrayal, heartbreak, and a mother’s fierce love.
🔥 A powerful, tragic tale that asks: Can love survive prophecy? Can fate be rewritten?
📖 D. A. Barney delivers a bold, unforgettable story for fans of witchy lore, supernatural politics, and heartbreaking choices.
✨ Add this to your dark fantasy TBR now — it will haunt you long after the final page.
#BookReview #TheBewitchingOfCamille #DABarney #DarkFantasy #WitchBooks #FantasyReads #MagicAndMothers #Bookstagram
June 28, 2025
🌑 Book Review: The Bewitching of Camille by D. A. Barney 🌑
✨ “Witches once ruled the world...” but what happens when the world fights back?
📖 The Bewitching of Camille is a dark, immersive fantasy set in the eerie streets of New Orleans, where history bleeds into prophecy — and one woman must battle the past to protect her future.
💔 What I Loved:
🔮 Witchy Worldbuilding – A hauntingly rich lore where witches, warlocks, vampires, and lycans clash in a centuries-long war. It's brutal, tragic, and completely addictive.
🩸 High Stakes & Dark History – For 258 years, young witches have been silenced before reaching their full power. Camille dares to defy the cycle — even if it means facing the man she once loved.
👩👧 Fierce Motherhood – Camille’s love for her daughter is the blazing heart of this story. Her strength and sacrifice are both heartbreaking and empowering.
💀 Love vs. Fate – Can love survive when destiny is this cruel? The emotional tension is gripping, especially when betrayal comes from the closest place.
🌒 New Orleans Vibes – The setting is lush, gothic, and dripping with atmosphere — perfect for fans of witchcraft and southern magic.
📚 If you enjoy stories with witches, ancient betrayals, dark romance, and impossible choices, The Bewitching of Camille will cast a spell on you.
⭐ Rating: 4.5/5 – Unforgettable, emotional, and powerful. This tale will linger in your bones.
✨ “Witches once ruled the world...” but what happens when the world fights back?
📖 The Bewitching of Camille is a dark, immersive fantasy set in the eerie streets of New Orleans, where history bleeds into prophecy — and one woman must battle the past to protect her future.
💔 What I Loved:
🔮 Witchy Worldbuilding – A hauntingly rich lore where witches, warlocks, vampires, and lycans clash in a centuries-long war. It's brutal, tragic, and completely addictive.
🩸 High Stakes & Dark History – For 258 years, young witches have been silenced before reaching their full power. Camille dares to defy the cycle — even if it means facing the man she once loved.
👩👧 Fierce Motherhood – Camille’s love for her daughter is the blazing heart of this story. Her strength and sacrifice are both heartbreaking and empowering.
💀 Love vs. Fate – Can love survive when destiny is this cruel? The emotional tension is gripping, especially when betrayal comes from the closest place.
🌒 New Orleans Vibes – The setting is lush, gothic, and dripping with atmosphere — perfect for fans of witchcraft and southern magic.
📚 If you enjoy stories with witches, ancient betrayals, dark romance, and impossible choices, The Bewitching of Camille will cast a spell on you.
⭐ Rating: 4.5/5 – Unforgettable, emotional, and powerful. This tale will linger in your bones.
June 30, 2025
This spectacular book sweeps us into a richly shadowed world of ancient magic and unsettling destiny. Camille St. Croix, at the center of it all, is a young woman with a power rooted deeply in her blood, a power that’s as feared as it is necessary. From the mist-covered wilds of England to the sultry, haunted edges of Louisiana, she is drawn into a dark undercurrent of supernatural conflict. Vampires, witches, lycans, and warlocks clash around her, while a chilling prophecy about her own daughter begins to unravel everything she thought she understood. As Camille tries to hold onto her identity, she also has to reckon with love that challenges fate and danger that feels far too personal.
My first motivation to pick this book was the eerily haunting cover. It's absolutely fantastic. This story didn't just pull me into its world. Rather it held me there, tense and wondering. D. A. Barney writes with a sharpness that cuts through the fantasy, grounding the magic in real emotions. The worldbuilding is lush and eerie, and the story is indulging. The storyline is dangerous, classy, and addictive.
The non-linear structure works surprisingly well and I only have praise for this book, despite its length. I'm more than a hundred percent sure that I'll be returning to read the second installment of the Wiccan Chronicles trilogy.
My first motivation to pick this book was the eerily haunting cover. It's absolutely fantastic. This story didn't just pull me into its world. Rather it held me there, tense and wondering. D. A. Barney writes with a sharpness that cuts through the fantasy, grounding the magic in real emotions. The worldbuilding is lush and eerie, and the story is indulging. The storyline is dangerous, classy, and addictive.
The non-linear structure works surprisingly well and I only have praise for this book, despite its length. I'm more than a hundred percent sure that I'll be returning to read the second installment of the Wiccan Chronicles trilogy.
March 19, 2021
🌸Supernatural things really don't attract me but this book turned out to be my favourite and now i definitely want to read more books from this genre.
🌸Set in the dark culture of New Orleans, this book will introduce us with a world of witches and warlocks where hundreds of years of tradition have resulted in some horrifying rituals. According to their culture, Witches are killed young to ensure that they do not reach their full potential. The Bewitching of Camille tells a tragic story of a young witch who must battle tremendous odds to save her daughter from the young warlock who will be forced to destroy them both. With so many twists and turns, action and suspense, this story will kept ne interested till the end.
🌸From the moment I began to read this book it captured my attention and I honestly couldn't put it down. Every character is amazing and played their role really well. The chapters are short but engaging as at the end of every chapter, you will be excited to start the next one without taking a break to find out what would happen next. Commendable work done by D.A. Barney, characterization and world building is fantastic. I am really looking forward to read more of his work.
🌸Set in the dark culture of New Orleans, this book will introduce us with a world of witches and warlocks where hundreds of years of tradition have resulted in some horrifying rituals. According to their culture, Witches are killed young to ensure that they do not reach their full potential. The Bewitching of Camille tells a tragic story of a young witch who must battle tremendous odds to save her daughter from the young warlock who will be forced to destroy them both. With so many twists and turns, action and suspense, this story will kept ne interested till the end.
🌸From the moment I began to read this book it captured my attention and I honestly couldn't put it down. Every character is amazing and played their role really well. The chapters are short but engaging as at the end of every chapter, you will be excited to start the next one without taking a break to find out what would happen next. Commendable work done by D.A. Barney, characterization and world building is fantastic. I am really looking forward to read more of his work.
October 25, 2025
D.A. Barney's The Bewitching of Camille is a triumphant entry into the dark fantasy genre, distinguished by its thick, intoxicating gothic atmosphere. The world-building is instantly captivating, leaning heavily into a foreboding, New Orleans-style voodoo aesthetic that makes the supernatural elements feel visceral and ancient. Every street, every century-old mystery, is described with a descriptive narrative that truly immerses the reader, making you feel the chilling air and the lurking presence of vampires, lycans, and warlocks.
At the center of this darkness is Camille, a fierce, powerful witch whose stakes couldn't be higher: she is pregnant and fighting for her and her unborn child's life. Her relentless adversary is a warlock determined to uphold centuries of tradition by wiping out rogue witches before they can reach full, unpredictable power. This creates a deeply emotional and tense "Mama Bear vs. Oppression" conflict that fuels the book’s constant action. This is a cinematic, fast-moving thrill-ride that does more than just entertain—it locks you into its shadowy world, keeping you guessing about the next explosive turn. If you love deep lore and dark settings, check this out.
At the center of this darkness is Camille, a fierce, powerful witch whose stakes couldn't be higher: she is pregnant and fighting for her and her unborn child's life. Her relentless adversary is a warlock determined to uphold centuries of tradition by wiping out rogue witches before they can reach full, unpredictable power. This creates a deeply emotional and tense "Mama Bear vs. Oppression" conflict that fuels the book’s constant action. This is a cinematic, fast-moving thrill-ride that does more than just entertain—it locks you into its shadowy world, keeping you guessing about the next explosive turn. If you love deep lore and dark settings, check this out.
June 24, 2025
The Bewitching of Camille isn’t just a fantasy. It’s fierce, emotional, and full of soul. Camille isn’t some flawless heroine. She’s layered, raw, and real. You feel her pain, her fear, her strength, and you root for her every step of the way. Watching her discover her power while carrying so much grief and responsibility was honestly inspiring.
The setting adds so much depth. A magical 1800s New Orleans, full of danger and secrets, felt vivid and alive. The writing pulled me in completely. There were moments I had to pause just to breathe, and others where I wanted to underline entire paragraphs.
This story doesn’t sugarcoat anything. It talks about heavy things,oppression, violence, survival..but never in a performative way. It’s handled with care and truth. And through all of it, Camille’s quiet fire never goes out.
By the end, I didn’t just love the book. I felt changed by it. If you like powerful women, dark magic, and stories that leave a mark on your heart, please give this one a chance.
5/5 stars
Camille will stay with me for a long, long time.
The setting adds so much depth. A magical 1800s New Orleans, full of danger and secrets, felt vivid and alive. The writing pulled me in completely. There were moments I had to pause just to breathe, and others where I wanted to underline entire paragraphs.
This story doesn’t sugarcoat anything. It talks about heavy things,oppression, violence, survival..but never in a performative way. It’s handled with care and truth. And through all of it, Camille’s quiet fire never goes out.
By the end, I didn’t just love the book. I felt changed by it. If you like powerful women, dark magic, and stories that leave a mark on your heart, please give this one a chance.
5/5 stars
Camille will stay with me for a long, long time.
February 6, 2021
Truly an interesting read, honestly I didn’t expect a lot from this but it did surprise me the story follows in history Three hundred years ago the Council of Warlocks engaged in a secret war against witches they hoped would save this world from extinction. Sparing only younglings, witches were separated, cultivated and treated like, ‘humans’. When of age, they were secretly bought and sold as breeding stock to propagate the race, then discreetly destroyed before turning twenty-one; the age they achieved their full power. It is believed absorbing that much power causes insanity in women and subsequently; turns them evil. This became every warlock’s responsibility and for three centuries, they quietly carried it out... until now. With the voodoo culture of New Orleans as its backdrop, “The Bewitching of Camille“ tells a tragic story of a young witch who must battle tremendous odds to save her daughter from the young warlock who will be forced to destroy them both.
October 25, 2025
From the very first page, The Bewitching of Camille immerses you into a dark, brooding world of witchcraft, warlocks and ancient vendettas. Set against the moody backdrop of New Orleans voodoo culture and centuries-old magical warfare, the story hooks with its stakes and atmosphere. Camille is more than just a heroine: she is layered, determined, vulnerable and fierce. Barney creates a lore-rich universe where witches are hunted, sold, destroyed if they live past 21, and the author manages to make this brutal premise feel emotionally grounded and suspenseful. The dialogue, the pacing and the unfolding secrets kept me turning pages. If I had one minor quibble, it’s that some secondary relationships could have used more depth, but the emotional core—Camille fighting for her daughter in impossible circumstances—shines so brightly that everything else falls into place. A gripping supernatural fantasy with heart.
November 1, 2025
The Bewitching of Camille is a masterclass in pacing, establishing a level of intensity from the very first page that makes it nearly impossible to put down. Author Barney’s descriptive narrative immediately plunges the reader into a dark, gothic world humming with supernatural activity, effectively creating a cinematic reading experience. The constant movement and action genuinely make you feel like you are watching a movie, complete with high-stakes chases and tense confrontations.
The emotional anchor of the book is Camille, a pregnant witch fighting against an oppressive warlock. This maternal struggle for survival against a backdrop of centuries-old, deadly traditions is highly effective, guaranteeing you will care deeply about the heroine and her fate. The world is rich with supernatural lore, including lycans, vampires, and deep voodoo influences, all contributing to the foreboding atmosphere. .
The emotional anchor of the book is Camille, a pregnant witch fighting against an oppressive warlock. This maternal struggle for survival against a backdrop of centuries-old, deadly traditions is highly effective, guaranteeing you will care deeply about the heroine and her fate. The world is rich with supernatural lore, including lycans, vampires, and deep voodoo influences, all contributing to the foreboding atmosphere. .
November 1, 2025
In a genre often crowded with tropes, 'The Bewitching of Camille' is a brilliant, original breath of fresh air. Mr. Barney has constructed a world where the stakes are viscerally human, despite the magical setting.
The central theme here is the systemic oppression justified by the fear of female power which is handled with a deft, compelling touch that doesn't feel preachy even for once. It simmers beneath the surface of every interaction, giving the narrative a profound weight.
Camille is a heroine for the ages...resilient, intelligent and fiercely protective. Her dynamic with Julien is heartbreakingly complex. You feel the agony of his conflict as keenly as you feel her desperation.
The prose is sharp and evocative, that paints scenes of both breathtaking magic and intimate tenderness with equal skill.
For readers who crave fantasy with emotional depth and intellectual heft, this book is a must read.
It’s a powerful, polished and profoundly moving novel.
The central theme here is the systemic oppression justified by the fear of female power which is handled with a deft, compelling touch that doesn't feel preachy even for once. It simmers beneath the surface of every interaction, giving the narrative a profound weight.
Camille is a heroine for the ages...resilient, intelligent and fiercely protective. Her dynamic with Julien is heartbreakingly complex. You feel the agony of his conflict as keenly as you feel her desperation.
The prose is sharp and evocative, that paints scenes of both breathtaking magic and intimate tenderness with equal skill.
For readers who crave fantasy with emotional depth and intellectual heft, this book is a must read.
It’s a powerful, polished and profoundly moving novel.
November 2, 2025
What makes a story truly compelling???...
For me, it's the moral gray areas, the choices that have no right answers and characters who are flawedly and beautifully human.
'The Bewitching of Camille' delivers this in spades. 'Julien' is not a villain, he is a man trapped by the brutal ideology of his world and his internal struggle is as gripping as any physical battle. 'Camille' is not a mere victim, she is a strategist, a warrior and a mother whose power is as much in her compassion as it is in her magic.
Author Barney forces the reader to confront difficult questions about duty, belief and what we are willing to sacrifice for love.
The plot is a tightly wound coil of suspense that springs forward with relentless pace, but it’s the philosophical and emotional depth that will keep you thinking long after the final page.
This is one intelligent adult fantasy at its very best!!
For me, it's the moral gray areas, the choices that have no right answers and characters who are flawedly and beautifully human.
'The Bewitching of Camille' delivers this in spades. 'Julien' is not a villain, he is a man trapped by the brutal ideology of his world and his internal struggle is as gripping as any physical battle. 'Camille' is not a mere victim, she is a strategist, a warrior and a mother whose power is as much in her compassion as it is in her magic.
Author Barney forces the reader to confront difficult questions about duty, belief and what we are willing to sacrifice for love.
The plot is a tightly wound coil of suspense that springs forward with relentless pace, but it’s the philosophical and emotional depth that will keep you thinking long after the final page.
This is one intelligent adult fantasy at its very best!!
November 2, 2025
"The Bewitching of Camille" with high expectations given the buzz, I am super thrilled to report...it not only met them but soared right past🙌🏻
This is a masterclass in pacing and tension.
The Author, "Mr. D.A. Barney", has very expertly layered moments of quiet, heart wrenching emotions with scenes of explosive action and magic✨
The suspense is relentless, built on a foundation of genuine character investment. You're made to care♥️ deeply about what happens to this family, which makes every threat feel terrifyingly real🤞.
The Author’s ability to interweave contemporary themes of power, control and resistance into a rich paranormal narrative is nothing short of superb💯on💯.
It’s a book that entertains you while making you think which is a rare and valuable combination.
Mr. Barney crafted a world I was reluctant to leave and the characters...they're definitely going to stay with me for-ever🤞
This is a masterclass in pacing and tension.
The Author, "Mr. D.A. Barney", has very expertly layered moments of quiet, heart wrenching emotions with scenes of explosive action and magic✨
The suspense is relentless, built on a foundation of genuine character investment. You're made to care♥️ deeply about what happens to this family, which makes every threat feel terrifyingly real🤞.
The Author’s ability to interweave contemporary themes of power, control and resistance into a rich paranormal narrative is nothing short of superb💯on💯.
It’s a book that entertains you while making you think which is a rare and valuable combination.
Mr. Barney crafted a world I was reluctant to leave and the characters...they're definitely going to stay with me for-ever🤞
November 18, 2025
I read this back in July 2025 and I don’t know where my review went. So I’m posting it again.
absolutely ʟᴏᴠᴇ this book! Witches, warlocks, vampires, lycans (maybe even a voodoo priest 👀 ) all wrapped up in a dark, gothic atmosphere that really leans into New Orleans–style voodoo vibes and centuries-old mysteries.
Barney’s descriptive narrative immerses you into this dark, foreboding world, keeping you locked in and guessing what will happen next. With a fierce FMC and constant action, I truly felt like I was watching a movie.
Camille is a pregnant witch fighting for her life (and her unborn child) against a ruthless warlock determined to wipe out rogue witches before they grow too powerful. It’s a tense, emotional clash - Mama bear vs. the oppressive traditions of centuries and I genuinely cared about her and her daughter throughout this story.
If you’re into dark fantasy with a gothic twist, a badass FMC and supernatural lore that sticks with you, check this out. It’s a fun, fast‑moving, emotional paranormal thrill and I can’t wait to see where Book 2 heads next!
absolutely ʟᴏᴠᴇ this book! Witches, warlocks, vampires, lycans (maybe even a voodoo priest 👀 ) all wrapped up in a dark, gothic atmosphere that really leans into New Orleans–style voodoo vibes and centuries-old mysteries.
Barney’s descriptive narrative immerses you into this dark, foreboding world, keeping you locked in and guessing what will happen next. With a fierce FMC and constant action, I truly felt like I was watching a movie.
Camille is a pregnant witch fighting for her life (and her unborn child) against a ruthless warlock determined to wipe out rogue witches before they grow too powerful. It’s a tense, emotional clash - Mama bear vs. the oppressive traditions of centuries and I genuinely cared about her and her daughter throughout this story.
If you’re into dark fantasy with a gothic twist, a badass FMC and supernatural lore that sticks with you, check this out. It’s a fun, fast‑moving, emotional paranormal thrill and I can’t wait to see where Book 2 heads next!
October 22, 2025
This book takes readers into a dark and magical world full of mystery and destiny. Camille St. Croix, the main character, has a rare power running through her blood — a gift that is both feared and needed. From the foggy lands of England to the haunted corners of Louisiana, she faces vampires, witches, and warlocks, all while trying to uncover the truth about a prophecy that could change her life forever.
I first picked this book because of its haunting cover, and it completely lived up to it. The story pulled me in and kept me hooked. D. A. Barney’s writing feels sharp and emotional, and the worldbuilding is rich and beautifully done. The story is dark, magical, and full of tension. Even though it’s a long book, I enjoyed every part of it and can’t wait to read the next one in The Wiccan Chronicles series.
I first picked this book because of its haunting cover, and it completely lived up to it. The story pulled me in and kept me hooked. D. A. Barney’s writing feels sharp and emotional, and the worldbuilding is rich and beautifully done. The story is dark, magical, and full of tension. Even though it’s a long book, I enjoyed every part of it and can’t wait to read the next one in The Wiccan Chronicles series.
October 27, 2025
D. A. Barney’s The Bewitching of Camille made me laugh, cry and shiver in equal measure. I loved how the supernatural elements didn’t overshadow the human story: at its core it’s a woman trying to protect her daughter and reclaim her power in a world that would rather destroy her. The mythology—witches being hunted before their 21st birthday, alliances of warlocks with vampires and lycans—felt fresh and brutal, not cosy. The atmosphere is dripping with menace and magic, the characters vivid and multi-dimensional. While the pacing sometimes dips as the lore is unpacked, it always recovers with a surge of peril and emotional confrontation. If you’re drawn to occult fantasy, strong female leads and settings that draw as much from heartbreak as from horror, this book is more than worth your time.
November 1, 2025
There are books you enjoy, and then there are books that sink their hooks into you and just...refuse to let go!
D.A. Barney's "The Bewitching of Camille" is firmly in the latter category🤞
As a reviewer, I read countless novels a year, and it takes something truly special to make me cancel my evening plans to keep reading. This book did just that. The genius here isn't just in the high concept premise...a warlock bound by duty to destroy his own family, but in the exquisite execution.
Barney explores the terrifying, all consuming nature of a mother's love with utter raw honesty that is both...brutal and beautiful🤞.
The magical system feels fresh and dangerous, and the political intrigue of the "Warlock Council" adds a layer of sophisticated tension.
This isn't just a fantasy honestly, it's a masterful exploration of love as both...a salvation and a weapon.
D.A. Barney's "The Bewitching of Camille" is firmly in the latter category🤞
As a reviewer, I read countless novels a year, and it takes something truly special to make me cancel my evening plans to keep reading. This book did just that. The genius here isn't just in the high concept premise...a warlock bound by duty to destroy his own family, but in the exquisite execution.
Barney explores the terrifying, all consuming nature of a mother's love with utter raw honesty that is both...brutal and beautiful🤞.
The magical system feels fresh and dangerous, and the political intrigue of the "Warlock Council" adds a layer of sophisticated tension.
This isn't just a fantasy honestly, it's a masterful exploration of love as both...a salvation and a weapon.
November 1, 2025
There’s something deliciously gothic about Eternal Vengeance. The haunted town of Triora, long-forgotten truths, and the specter of a love doomed before it began—Dubey revels in shadow.
Elle wanders not just through history but through graves of identity, memory, and heartbreak. Love here is neither pure nor safe; it’s a ghost. And Elle? She’s chasing it anyway.
If Elle had a nickel for every supernatural secret in her family tree, she’d have enough to buy a one-way ticket out of Triora. But of course, destiny doesn’t take bribes.
In Eternal Vengeance, Dubey gleefully throws her heroine into a cauldron of emotional drama, ancient curses, and way-too-handsome love interests. It’s like a myth met a soap opera—and we’re here for every dramatic gasp.
Elle wanders not just through history but through graves of identity, memory, and heartbreak. Love here is neither pure nor safe; it’s a ghost. And Elle? She’s chasing it anyway.
If Elle had a nickel for every supernatural secret in her family tree, she’d have enough to buy a one-way ticket out of Triora. But of course, destiny doesn’t take bribes.
In Eternal Vengeance, Dubey gleefully throws her heroine into a cauldron of emotional drama, ancient curses, and way-too-handsome love interests. It’s like a myth met a soap opera—and we’re here for every dramatic gasp.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
November 1, 2025
From the very first page, the atmosphere of The Bewitching of Camille is palpable, a heady mix of dark magic, whispered secrets and desperate love.
The world building is impeccable, woven seamlessly into the narrative without a hint of tedious exposition.
You learn the rules of this night world organically through the characters' fears and actions.
The relationship between Camille and Julien is one of the most compelling I've encountered in all these years of reading. It’s a raw nerve, a constant push and pull between undeniable passion and an impossible destiny.
The supporting cast is equally well drawn, each with motivations that feel authentic and consequential to the plot.
This is a sprawling, character driven epic that manages to be both, intimate and grandiose!
The world building is impeccable, woven seamlessly into the narrative without a hint of tedious exposition.
You learn the rules of this night world organically through the characters' fears and actions.
The relationship between Camille and Julien is one of the most compelling I've encountered in all these years of reading. It’s a raw nerve, a constant push and pull between undeniable passion and an impossible destiny.
The supporting cast is equally well drawn, each with motivations that feel authentic and consequential to the plot.
This is a sprawling, character driven epic that manages to be both, intimate and grandiose!
September 27, 2020
I really wanted to like this book, but I absolutely couldn’t. Between the inconsistent characterization, poor adaptation of voodoo as a very real culture, underdeveloped characters and disappearing plot lines, transphobic and racist language*, and the few female characters seen solely through for use, convenience, power grabs, and objects of desire by the male characters... I finished this book on principle alone.
*for one example: the text compares the massacres to slavery and one of the characters argues that it’s not the same, that they’re murdering women with power and strength “for their own good”. seriously?!?
*for one example: the text compares the massacres to slavery and one of the characters argues that it’s not the same, that they’re murdering women with power and strength “for their own good”. seriously?!?
May 17, 2025
I loved it. I was actively shooing away my kids to finish this one. The timeline jumps did have me flipping back and forth to figure out how much time had passed, but the time spans were perfect for furthering the story. The inner struggle the characters have makes the fantasy world relatable, who doesn't have an inner evil or potential for bad?
There were a few different moments when I'm sure I was sitting there with my jaw dropped. I cant wait to read more!
If you like a story with bits of history, and a setting in the South, this is the one for you. The free copy I recieved had absolutely no impact on my review, these are my own thoughts and reactions.
There were a few different moments when I'm sure I was sitting there with my jaw dropped. I cant wait to read more!
If you like a story with bits of history, and a setting in the South, this is the one for you. The free copy I recieved had absolutely no impact on my review, these are my own thoughts and reactions.
July 5, 2025
I just finished this as a free ARC and I am leaving this review voluntarily. I am torn on my thoughts/feelings. The story base itself I really enjoyed and thought it was unique. I also enjoyed some of the characters, however, I wish we learned more backstory for the side characters. This may come out in future books.
Flow of the book felt like it was written as a draft. The POV seemed to jump around mid paragraph which was confusing at times.
Overall I did enjoy and like the idea of the book. I even had tears in my eyes at one point reading Dani’s POV. I just think the book needed more detail and an overall better flow from scene to scene so it wasn’t so “jumpy”.
Flow of the book felt like it was written as a draft. The POV seemed to jump around mid paragraph which was confusing at times.
Overall I did enjoy and like the idea of the book. I even had tears in my eyes at one point reading Dani’s POV. I just think the book needed more detail and an overall better flow from scene to scene so it wasn’t so “jumpy”.
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