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When Angels Fail: When Angels Fail: Tales of the Macabre
A collection of horror where disaster is painted in reds and blacks throughout the stories. Blood and sex blur the lines between victim and violator. In each, Hell takes its shapes in many different forms. These men shall witness the failing of angels.
Follow a priest as he lays into the bosom of temptation, a husband on the road of a breakdown, an artist cutting the canvas open, and a captain gripping the barrel of hope.
Fourteen tales where hope is lost among the depths of horror.
Follow a priest as he lays into the bosom of temptation, a husband on the road of a breakdown, an artist cutting the canvas open, and a captain gripping the barrel of hope.
Fourteen tales where hope is lost among the depths of horror.
- GenresHorror
129 pages, Paperback
First published January 9, 2013
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About the author
Michael Benavidez
9 books82 followersMichael Benavidez is an independent author that is currently relishing in the horror community, although there are ideas bumping up in his noggin to explore other genres.
He is also currently a staff writer for the online horror magazine Morbidly Beautiful, writing a monthly column called You've Got Read on You, where he reviews some of the latest horror indie releases.
A child of the Rio Grande Valley, Texas he has also spent most of of his years maturing in middle of nowhere Minnesota. Back in the ass end of Texas, Michael has found a niche in writing from the heart horror, exploring such things as traumas and other things he has dealt with his whole life.
While a doofus on the surface, Michael hopes to help, encourage, and create conversations about these important topics.
He is also currently a staff writer for the online horror magazine Morbidly Beautiful, writing a monthly column called You've Got Read on You, where he reviews some of the latest horror indie releases.
A child of the Rio Grande Valley, Texas he has also spent most of of his years maturing in middle of nowhere Minnesota. Back in the ass end of Texas, Michael has found a niche in writing from the heart horror, exploring such things as traumas and other things he has dealt with his whole life.
While a doofus on the surface, Michael hopes to help, encourage, and create conversations about these important topics.
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September 6, 2020
This reminded me of Clive Barker's work so much, so I wholeheartedly recommend it if you are a fan of gory and poetic horror.
May 2, 2014
“How much longer can he hold onto the brush when it should be a blade in its place?”
A collection of short stories, all tackling various aspects of sin and horror, with a consistent theme of angels in various incarnations and often in the most brutal way. That's the deeeper meaning in When Angels Fail by Michael Benavidez. On the surface, the characters are ordinary people who present everything that allows for sympathy. Michael writes in a way that allows the reader to feel the priest's pain, cheer for the warrior, squirm for the artist, and ache for the captain.
This collection is one of those diamonds in the rough a reader can find in the sea of self-publishing. You might have to brush off the blemishes, but you will find a gem in the stories. It's very adult, but in a way that simply respects the reader's maturity, and provides insights into the way humanity views life through the eyes of the darkest angels.
You will be given a bloody blade instead of a brush. How you paint the pictures is up to you.
A collection of short stories, all tackling various aspects of sin and horror, with a consistent theme of angels in various incarnations and often in the most brutal way. That's the deeeper meaning in When Angels Fail by Michael Benavidez. On the surface, the characters are ordinary people who present everything that allows for sympathy. Michael writes in a way that allows the reader to feel the priest's pain, cheer for the warrior, squirm for the artist, and ache for the captain.
This collection is one of those diamonds in the rough a reader can find in the sea of self-publishing. You might have to brush off the blemishes, but you will find a gem in the stories. It's very adult, but in a way that simply respects the reader's maturity, and provides insights into the way humanity views life through the eyes of the darkest angels.
You will be given a bloody blade instead of a brush. How you paint the pictures is up to you.
August 12, 2016
3.5 stars
When Angels Fail has moments of absolute brilliance. Benavidez can conjure up imagery that invokes the spirit of Poe and authors like Laird Barron (not dead). The pages of his series of short stories are filled with surreal, Dali-like artistry and often poetic verse. This guy has talent, but (and here's the but) his work could benefit from another edit. 5-star work is sometimes paired with stuff not up to snuff.
The theme of the short story collection is not masked by its title, with the last story (very Poe-like) arguably falling outside the religious realm (or inside, depending on just where the Andromeda had sailed and... well, you decide). I think Andromeda was my favorite tale, with Hellbound a close second. All the tales are enjoyable and worth a read.
If not for the one reservation, When Angels Fail could be a five-star read. The author has serious potential, and I will certain keep an eye on the progression of his career.
When Angels Fail has moments of absolute brilliance. Benavidez can conjure up imagery that invokes the spirit of Poe and authors like Laird Barron (not dead). The pages of his series of short stories are filled with surreal, Dali-like artistry and often poetic verse. This guy has talent, but (and here's the but) his work could benefit from another edit. 5-star work is sometimes paired with stuff not up to snuff.
The theme of the short story collection is not masked by its title, with the last story (very Poe-like) arguably falling outside the religious realm (or inside, depending on just where the Andromeda had sailed and... well, you decide). I think Andromeda was my favorite tale, with Hellbound a close second. All the tales are enjoyable and worth a read.
If not for the one reservation, When Angels Fail could be a five-star read. The author has serious potential, and I will certain keep an eye on the progression of his career.
November 8, 2014
This book most definitely kept my attention! It gave me the same kind of chills and "whoa" moments I got when first reading anything by Edgar Allen Poe! (in a modern and twisted way!)
Amazing job Mr. Benavidez!
Amazing job Mr. Benavidez!
July 27, 2014
Four short horror stories competently written with lots of vivid & detailed images of blood, guts & gore!
April 21, 2016
Okay, so Mr. Benavidez revised and reworked this one until it's basically an entirely different book. I will say it's still a solid four stars. Benavdiez has one of the most original writing styles of any indy author I've read. It's more of a literary style than most.
The stories are lyrical, filled with dark imagery and haunting visions. I see a recurring theme in the stories as it relates to religion, but I assume that's where the "Angels" come in. I'm not sure of Benavidez's religious background, but the stories seem to indicate Catholic.
Some of the stories are very abstract, almost poems in prose form. Others are more traditional horror tales. Benavidez isn't shy about tackling any subject regardless of how taboo. The imagery is disturbing, but almost beautiful at the same time. I will say these most of these tales require an open mind and vivid imagination, as the stories are at times open to interpretation.
I won't get into each story other than saying my personal favorite is Andromeda. This was a "ghost ship" tale that may as well have been written by Poe.
After reading this, I would say Benavidez is at present a raw, unpolished talent with a ridiculous amount of potential. Given his relatively young age, he has plenty of time to hone his craft, and when he does he very much has the potential to be the next Clive Barker, who I'm most reminded of by his writing. As previously stated, Poe is also visible at times, although by making these statements I am not at all saying his work is derivative. Far from it. It's wildly original.
I'd also like to say the cover fits the theme very well. The black and white, moody photograph sets the tone for what lies within.
Overall, this is a strong work from a newcomer to keep an eye on. I'll be looking at more of his work in the future, and I recommend any readers of horror should as well.
ORIGINAL REVIEW:
Mr. Benavidez may just be the next Clive Barker! I must admit when I started reading I didn't know exactly what to expect, but I was hooked from the first page. The first story was probably my favorite, but the rest didn't disappoint. Mr. Benavidez definitely has his own writing style, but he is versatile at the same time, as the last story had a different style then the first, and the others fell somewhere between. I was most reminded of Clive Barker, but then I also saw hints of H.P Lovecraft, but in no way is the entire work derivative. The writer has his own voice and I am sure he will continue to develop it as the years pass.
If you like short horror stories, particular ones that are poetic and lyrical, than I think you will enjoy this one!
The stories are lyrical, filled with dark imagery and haunting visions. I see a recurring theme in the stories as it relates to religion, but I assume that's where the "Angels" come in. I'm not sure of Benavidez's religious background, but the stories seem to indicate Catholic.
Some of the stories are very abstract, almost poems in prose form. Others are more traditional horror tales. Benavidez isn't shy about tackling any subject regardless of how taboo. The imagery is disturbing, but almost beautiful at the same time. I will say these most of these tales require an open mind and vivid imagination, as the stories are at times open to interpretation.
I won't get into each story other than saying my personal favorite is Andromeda. This was a "ghost ship" tale that may as well have been written by Poe.
After reading this, I would say Benavidez is at present a raw, unpolished talent with a ridiculous amount of potential. Given his relatively young age, he has plenty of time to hone his craft, and when he does he very much has the potential to be the next Clive Barker, who I'm most reminded of by his writing. As previously stated, Poe is also visible at times, although by making these statements I am not at all saying his work is derivative. Far from it. It's wildly original.
I'd also like to say the cover fits the theme very well. The black and white, moody photograph sets the tone for what lies within.
Overall, this is a strong work from a newcomer to keep an eye on. I'll be looking at more of his work in the future, and I recommend any readers of horror should as well.
ORIGINAL REVIEW:
Mr. Benavidez may just be the next Clive Barker! I must admit when I started reading I didn't know exactly what to expect, but I was hooked from the first page. The first story was probably my favorite, but the rest didn't disappoint. Mr. Benavidez definitely has his own writing style, but he is versatile at the same time, as the last story had a different style then the first, and the others fell somewhere between. I was most reminded of Clive Barker, but then I also saw hints of H.P Lovecraft, but in no way is the entire work derivative. The writer has his own voice and I am sure he will continue to develop it as the years pass.
If you like short horror stories, particular ones that are poetic and lyrical, than I think you will enjoy this one!
September 1, 2016
The characters in this book of short stories are impacted in various ways by a supernatural undercurrent weaving its way through each macabre tale. The author's use of imagery adds depth and a striking intensity to each story, drawing the reader in, and taking them on a journey that is both chilling and profound.
The stories felt a bit disjointed, but they weren't without merit. Out of the four stories, I particularly enjoyed Andromeda, where a ship's captain, lost at sea, begins to unravel as he writes in his journal, documenting a painful and surreal adventure at sea. This story was less gruesome than the others, and quite lovely!
The book contains plenty of gore and dark themes, as one would expect from the title. And although there were some editing issues, the author has a lot of potential and creativity to offer. If you are a fan of horror and the macabre, you will enjoy this book!
3 1/2 STARS
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The stories felt a bit disjointed, but they weren't without merit. Out of the four stories, I particularly enjoyed Andromeda, where a ship's captain, lost at sea, begins to unravel as he writes in his journal, documenting a painful and surreal adventure at sea. This story was less gruesome than the others, and quite lovely!
The book contains plenty of gore and dark themes, as one would expect from the title. And although there were some editing issues, the author has a lot of potential and creativity to offer. If you are a fan of horror and the macabre, you will enjoy this book!
3 1/2 STARS
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April 30, 2014
This was one of the "sickest" books I have ever read. If you love gore, you will devour this. Its not my cup of blood, but those who delight in the Macabre will dance on their graves in glee over this.
June 14, 2014
When Angels Fail is a collection of short stories that lives up to its title. Each story is gruesome, marked with death and horror in one form or another. These stories aren't simply gore and shallow scares even with their emphasis on horror.
Benavidez provides certain insights into human nature which dwells on the dark side of the mind. Those insights make you pause, consider the meaning and serves to pull you farther into the story. You become invested in the characters laid out even for the short time they're on stage. If those characters slip in blood you feel as they fall and understand their emotions when they get back up.
One of those insightful passages and one of my favorites was from The Father and the Harlot. It involved a priest and behavior that fell short of the virtues he was meant to uphold;
"Many had been to his sermons, listened intently to his preaching of love and happiness, sin and disaster, the difference between love and lust. Many more knew him more intimately as the man who wept during sermons of 'oh yes' and 'right there'. As the man who prayed after each moment of intense lust, only to pounce upon them again with a desire that was unlike any man, much less an ordained priest."
Hellbound, the longest and most twisted of the stories in this collection was my favorite and The Priest and the Harlot ran a close second.
Each story felt as if it were just the beginning of a longer work. A chapter of a novel not yet finished or not yet begun. That would be one of my only complaints; I would have enjoyed reading more and this collection was too short.
The editing would be the second complaint. Another round wouldn't have hurt but the essential quality of the work was still visible through the errors.
Recommended for anyone who enjoys horror in the short form and violence, gore and sexual situations in their reading. Benavidez is another up and coming author to watch and i'll have to read more of his work in the future. In short, damn good and worth the read.
I received a free copy of When Angels Fail from the author. Not necessarily for a review but at least as a Collection I could read. The review was an option, it was made sure that it would be an honest one and I've done my damndest to make it that way.
Benavidez provides certain insights into human nature which dwells on the dark side of the mind. Those insights make you pause, consider the meaning and serves to pull you farther into the story. You become invested in the characters laid out even for the short time they're on stage. If those characters slip in blood you feel as they fall and understand their emotions when they get back up.
One of those insightful passages and one of my favorites was from The Father and the Harlot. It involved a priest and behavior that fell short of the virtues he was meant to uphold;
"Many had been to his sermons, listened intently to his preaching of love and happiness, sin and disaster, the difference between love and lust. Many more knew him more intimately as the man who wept during sermons of 'oh yes' and 'right there'. As the man who prayed after each moment of intense lust, only to pounce upon them again with a desire that was unlike any man, much less an ordained priest."
Hellbound, the longest and most twisted of the stories in this collection was my favorite and The Priest and the Harlot ran a close second.
Each story felt as if it were just the beginning of a longer work. A chapter of a novel not yet finished or not yet begun. That would be one of my only complaints; I would have enjoyed reading more and this collection was too short.
The editing would be the second complaint. Another round wouldn't have hurt but the essential quality of the work was still visible through the errors.
Recommended for anyone who enjoys horror in the short form and violence, gore and sexual situations in their reading. Benavidez is another up and coming author to watch and i'll have to read more of his work in the future. In short, damn good and worth the read.
I received a free copy of When Angels Fail from the author. Not necessarily for a review but at least as a Collection I could read. The review was an option, it was made sure that it would be an honest one and I've done my damndest to make it that way.
April 11, 2014
Horror short stories can either be badly done or excellent crafted. Sometimes, in a collection, you find a bit of both. In When Angels Fail: Tales of the Macabre...all of the stories are perfectly crafted.
From the outset, the author is clearly inspired by Clive Barker and Stephen King and it shows (in a good way). By proxy there is an element of HP Lovecraft in these disturbing, horrifying words which makes for some tense, graphic horror. Michael Benavidez knows how to create a disturbing, tension filled short story and never lets up. There are four tales here for your pleasure/terror and I hope he keeps writing material like this. It's refreshing to see an indie author who respects the horror craft and isn't afraid to stick to his laurels rather then phone it in with a modern horror rip-off.
Four stars you say? Well, I wished there was one or two more stories in here. A personal preference which shouldn't reflect on the author as a whole.
With a firm grasp and knowledge of the source material, Benavidez homages and praises Barker and King in equal measure. True, he's a fan of these horror legends but somehow he makes these stories his own. In fact, if you don't know who Barker or King are, these stories stand alone as excellent examples of horror from a deformed mind. Combining gore, sex, mutilation, paranormal horror and, at times typically like Barker, sadomasochistic tendencies - these stories will keep you turning the pages, even if you feel at times the ending will haunt you.
If that's the case (it was for me) then the author's work is done. A horror writer to keep an eye on.
From the outset, the author is clearly inspired by Clive Barker and Stephen King and it shows (in a good way). By proxy there is an element of HP Lovecraft in these disturbing, horrifying words which makes for some tense, graphic horror. Michael Benavidez knows how to create a disturbing, tension filled short story and never lets up. There are four tales here for your pleasure/terror and I hope he keeps writing material like this. It's refreshing to see an indie author who respects the horror craft and isn't afraid to stick to his laurels rather then phone it in with a modern horror rip-off.
Four stars you say? Well, I wished there was one or two more stories in here. A personal preference which shouldn't reflect on the author as a whole.
With a firm grasp and knowledge of the source material, Benavidez homages and praises Barker and King in equal measure. True, he's a fan of these horror legends but somehow he makes these stories his own. In fact, if you don't know who Barker or King are, these stories stand alone as excellent examples of horror from a deformed mind. Combining gore, sex, mutilation, paranormal horror and, at times typically like Barker, sadomasochistic tendencies - these stories will keep you turning the pages, even if you feel at times the ending will haunt you.
If that's the case (it was for me) then the author's work is done. A horror writer to keep an eye on.
May 7, 2014
Very dark and dense. There are vivid strokes of potential in here, particularly with language. I loved the writer's use of imagery, especially in parts of the surrealistic bloodbath of a short, Hellbound(my fave).
However, there are a few technical things e.g., short story collections need a Table of Contents! Preferably one that links to each story. There are also far too many fragmented sentences, and the sheer density of paragraph structure can make this tiring to read, which is a shame because the stories all have the spark of a good tale. Some generous and thorough editing could ignite that spark to a fire.
I definitely look forward to seeing more from this writer, good horror is always in short supply.
However, there are a few technical things e.g., short story collections need a Table of Contents! Preferably one that links to each story. There are also far too many fragmented sentences, and the sheer density of paragraph structure can make this tiring to read, which is a shame because the stories all have the spark of a good tale. Some generous and thorough editing could ignite that spark to a fire.
I definitely look forward to seeing more from this writer, good horror is always in short supply.
December 13, 2014
Four short stories. I found each one very different from the other and a great read. My favorite is HellBound followed by The Father and the Harlot.
The Father and the Harlot: It always starts with a priest and a prostitute, doesn't it. Gory but much needed.
The Chase: What a chase indeed. I wouldn't want to meet Sammael. :'(
HellBound: Females have a very strong power over men. Our bodies are our best tools and weapons to use when we want something. It is sure powerful to be a females. How very dominatrix of me, right. ;)
Andronmeda: I thought space but it's the sea.
The Father and the Harlot: It always starts with a priest and a prostitute, doesn't it. Gory but much needed.
The Chase: What a chase indeed. I wouldn't want to meet Sammael. :'(
HellBound: Females have a very strong power over men. Our bodies are our best tools and weapons to use when we want something. It is sure powerful to be a females. How very dominatrix of me, right. ;)
Andronmeda: I thought space but it's the sea.
February 2, 2020
There’s a ton of potential here!
Michael has beautiful prose and I love the angel and demon themes he has throughout this collection.
Michael has beautiful prose and I love the angel and demon themes he has throughout this collection.
November 18, 2020
I flew through this book. Every story was gripping and well-written, and I found myself reading multiple stories per sitting (which I tend to avoid with short story collections).
It felt very raw and unfiltered, but in a good way. The stories stuck to their narratives without falling into rant territory, but still seemed to deliver their social commentaries with unmistakeable effectiveness.
Speaking with the author, I was made aware that this book came from a place of very personal angst, and was very much informed by his views at the time. As such there was a dark satire present throughout.
Despite my five star rating, however, this is not a perfect book. There were some choices in the writing style that I didn't necessarily agree with, and I found some spellings and word choices inaccurate; however, like the Japanese art of kintsugi, it's the flaws of this collection that gives it character.
If it wasn't worth a 5 star review, I wouldn't have flown through it quite so fast. It's a sign that something being perfectly written is not a prerequisite for an enjoyable experience (and the flaws are only minor).
I would absolutely recommend reading this book (and get ready for the sequel: As the Shadows Fall).
My personal favourite stories in this collection are: "Deep Breath, Death Wish", "Off the Rails", "Hell Bound" and "Andromeda".
It felt very raw and unfiltered, but in a good way. The stories stuck to their narratives without falling into rant territory, but still seemed to deliver their social commentaries with unmistakeable effectiveness.
Speaking with the author, I was made aware that this book came from a place of very personal angst, and was very much informed by his views at the time. As such there was a dark satire present throughout.
Despite my five star rating, however, this is not a perfect book. There were some choices in the writing style that I didn't necessarily agree with, and I found some spellings and word choices inaccurate; however, like the Japanese art of kintsugi, it's the flaws of this collection that gives it character.
If it wasn't worth a 5 star review, I wouldn't have flown through it quite so fast. It's a sign that something being perfectly written is not a prerequisite for an enjoyable experience (and the flaws are only minor).
I would absolutely recommend reading this book (and get ready for the sequel: As the Shadows Fall).
My personal favourite stories in this collection are: "Deep Breath, Death Wish", "Off the Rails", "Hell Bound" and "Andromeda".
May 5, 2014
I heard and read a lot of great things about this book so I thought I'd check it out. Turn's out the author has quite the sick imagination and I went for the gruesome ride and it was well worth it. All the stories had a sinister feel to them with really no character to be a fan of and I don't mean that as a bad thing I mean each story had a creepy character that left you thinking, wow this guy is something else! The author's upside was also is downside at times, description. He was quite vivid in his gory and macabre like explanation of things however sometimes he used too big of words or described something to the point where it was hard to figure out what he was talking about or what was going on. However, when this wasn't the case, descriptions were quite enjoyable and entense as you could not help but be grossed out yet wanting more and more, at least that's how I felt. A lot of the details and descriptions given made me try to invision what was happening or what I was seeing and other times I wished I didn't invision the sheer brutality that took place in parts of each story. The book delivers in all parts of horror, gore, sinister, wicked and many more; all things that make macabre what it is and stands for.
The Father and the Harlot- A story about a priest who is not what he appears to be.
The title alone made me think ooh a naughty priest and while that was the case it went way beyond my expectations as their was utter carnage brought forth and I am not one for spoilers but I'll say this, normally a priest is called in for exorcisms yet he was the one that could have used one!
The Chase- A tale of a man with cruel intentions who tries to make a princess his wife.
The lightest story of the four in my opinion. I found this story to be alright, it was described and written well I just couldn't get as into it as I would have liked, it was a decent story though.
HellHound- An artist who paints dark and morbid things paints and takes on his latest creation.
Oh dear lord where do I even begin with this one? I'll get what I didn't like out of the way, I felt while it was clearly longer then any other story it didn't really need to be. Also this was the story where I felt descriptions could have been dialed down a bit. Now...as for what I liked? The gore factor, the insanity, the intense horror was all 10's across the book. Author Michael Benavidez doesn't shy away from speaking his sick mind in telling of the main character who goes through quite a horrific ordeal and that's putting it lightly! I haven't read a more gross and eventful story since the Rakasha Demon so this was certainly a fresh reminder.
Andromeda- A story of a captian lost at sea with a unruly crew who writes in his journal.
At first I thought they were in space but realized they were at sea. You wonder where they are and you really feel for the captian at least I know I did. This story was as calm as the sea told on the pages and a breath of fresh air and back into reality comapred to the story before it. Very well told and to me it felt like the telling of an old Hemingway tale.
Overall, if you like dark, twisted and insanely gross and intense horror then this my friends is a book for you. I thank the author for sending me on a horrific journey and I definitely recommend this for those who like their horror as high as they could crank it if it were volume on a stereo. For those who have weak stomachs? Yeah..move on cause this isn't for you!
The Father and the Harlot- A story about a priest who is not what he appears to be.
The title alone made me think ooh a naughty priest and while that was the case it went way beyond my expectations as their was utter carnage brought forth and I am not one for spoilers but I'll say this, normally a priest is called in for exorcisms yet he was the one that could have used one!
The Chase- A tale of a man with cruel intentions who tries to make a princess his wife.
The lightest story of the four in my opinion. I found this story to be alright, it was described and written well I just couldn't get as into it as I would have liked, it was a decent story though.
HellHound- An artist who paints dark and morbid things paints and takes on his latest creation.
Oh dear lord where do I even begin with this one? I'll get what I didn't like out of the way, I felt while it was clearly longer then any other story it didn't really need to be. Also this was the story where I felt descriptions could have been dialed down a bit. Now...as for what I liked? The gore factor, the insanity, the intense horror was all 10's across the book. Author Michael Benavidez doesn't shy away from speaking his sick mind in telling of the main character who goes through quite a horrific ordeal and that's putting it lightly! I haven't read a more gross and eventful story since the Rakasha Demon so this was certainly a fresh reminder.
Andromeda- A story of a captian lost at sea with a unruly crew who writes in his journal.
At first I thought they were in space but realized they were at sea. You wonder where they are and you really feel for the captian at least I know I did. This story was as calm as the sea told on the pages and a breath of fresh air and back into reality comapred to the story before it. Very well told and to me it felt like the telling of an old Hemingway tale.
Overall, if you like dark, twisted and insanely gross and intense horror then this my friends is a book for you. I thank the author for sending me on a horrific journey and I definitely recommend this for those who like their horror as high as they could crank it if it were volume on a stereo. For those who have weak stomachs? Yeah..move on cause this isn't for you!
April 15, 2014
I received a copy of this from the author in exchange for an honest review. (Thanks so much Michael!)
This collection of short stories is both creepy and tense in equal measure. I enjoyed each of the stories though each one is very different from the others.
There are four stories in all, the second of which is more Fantasy-based and reads like a snippet from an epic tale hiding amongst the truly shiver-worthy Horror-based tones of the other three.
The characters are skilfully brought to life throughout and they swiftly engage the reader in the short time before the tales end. The descriptions are detailed and somewhat graphic in places, they are always carefully crafted to lure you into their world to experience the horror first hand.
On occasion it had the poetic gentle touch of Lovecraft and in others an almost Poe like turn of phrase. Perhaps indicating the authors influences.
I’m not sure there is a common thread joining the stories together, they seem more a random collection than tales that belong together, and this version does need editing, but I can overlook both of these issues and enjoy the stories for what they are. Entertaining and engaging – I would happily read more from this author.
This collection of short stories is both creepy and tense in equal measure. I enjoyed each of the stories though each one is very different from the others.
There are four stories in all, the second of which is more Fantasy-based and reads like a snippet from an epic tale hiding amongst the truly shiver-worthy Horror-based tones of the other three.
The characters are skilfully brought to life throughout and they swiftly engage the reader in the short time before the tales end. The descriptions are detailed and somewhat graphic in places, they are always carefully crafted to lure you into their world to experience the horror first hand.
On occasion it had the poetic gentle touch of Lovecraft and in others an almost Poe like turn of phrase. Perhaps indicating the authors influences.
I’m not sure there is a common thread joining the stories together, they seem more a random collection than tales that belong together, and this version does need editing, but I can overlook both of these issues and enjoy the stories for what they are. Entertaining and engaging – I would happily read more from this author.
July 31, 2014
Thank you to the author Michael Benazvidez for providing me with a free copy in exchange for an honest review!
To say the least, this book was very dark and almost slightly depressing. However, it was very descriptive and left no stone unturned. This book is a collection of mini stories basically about the dark side of human nature.
I absolutely loved the last mini story. It definitely has potential to become a full-size book!
I loved the first two stories as well but I was a bit confused while reading the second to last story. Sometimes it got a bit too descriptive and metaphorical (or that could just be me).
Mr. Benavidez has definite potential as an author and I can't wait to read some more of his work!
Final Verdict:
A very nice collection of stories if you aren't scared off by dark images and the primal side of human nature. Sometimes it got a bit too descriptive for me but I think if they were expanded, it would be the perfect amount. This author has lots of potential and I'm excited to read more of his work!
3.5 stars!
To say the least, this book was very dark and almost slightly depressing. However, it was very descriptive and left no stone unturned. This book is a collection of mini stories basically about the dark side of human nature.
I absolutely loved the last mini story. It definitely has potential to become a full-size book!
I loved the first two stories as well but I was a bit confused while reading the second to last story. Sometimes it got a bit too descriptive and metaphorical (or that could just be me).
Mr. Benavidez has definite potential as an author and I can't wait to read some more of his work!
Final Verdict:
A very nice collection of stories if you aren't scared off by dark images and the primal side of human nature. Sometimes it got a bit too descriptive for me but I think if they were expanded, it would be the perfect amount. This author has lots of potential and I'm excited to read more of his work!
3.5 stars!
August 27, 2016
When Angels Fail is a collection of 4 short horror stories, all written with varying amounts of gore/brutality to each. Andromeda, the last story of the collection, is my favorite. I thought Benavidez did a great job with delivering an almost poetic type of prose dipped in creepiness. Written from the POV as the captain and a crewmate of a ship lost at sea via journal entries, this story stood out to me as a job well done in the author's ability to write horror on both ends of the spectrum. The horror in this story is less gory and more of a morose whisper. The Chase, my second favorite in the collection, has elements of fantasy included. I found myself wishing it had been a little longer. Hellbound, the most violently descriptive and my least favorite of the 4, follows a talented and mad artist through a disturbing journey. Though not my particular favorite due to the intensity of brutal imagery, Benavidez definitely gets points for creativity of plotting. 4 stars!
April 19, 2014
This collection of short stories shows a lot of promise.
What I liked: the subject matter was interesting and the general mood generally very creepy. The stories are varied and don't pull punches, which I appreciate.
What I didn't like: the first story has a LOT of sentence fragments. I almost put the book down at that point (but I'm glad I roughed it out). There are grammatical errors and spell-check mistakes scattered throughout the whole thing - another round of editing is needed.
Overall - 3.0/5. I don't think this was quite ready to be on the market, but the author shows a lot of promise! Good luck!
What I liked: the subject matter was interesting and the general mood generally very creepy. The stories are varied and don't pull punches, which I appreciate.
What I didn't like: the first story has a LOT of sentence fragments. I almost put the book down at that point (but I'm glad I roughed it out). There are grammatical errors and spell-check mistakes scattered throughout the whole thing - another round of editing is needed.
Overall - 3.0/5. I don't think this was quite ready to be on the market, but the author shows a lot of promise! Good luck!
January 2, 2021
I loved this book! Each short story was captivating. Raw with emotion and thought provoking. The brilliant writing and intriguing stories completely overshadow the few minor editing mishaps. I cannot wait to read more from this author! Highly recommend!
February 23, 2014
About my review: When I say "scene", I mean each section where there was a break.
A bit of general stuff: I don't normally (ever) read this genre, so keep this in mind. I'm very pro-dialogue and action rather than internal thought, so take what I say with a grain of salt (as an author should always do anyway) because this is very description- and internal thought-heavy. This is fine. It's just not what I'm used to. Below begins the reviews of specific scenes.
The Father and the Harlot
Scene 1
The first paragraph is a good start. It draws readers in. The character is intriguing—a bit of an oxymoron, really. The writing style is immediately appealing. It's got a good amount of description and action, and the thoughts of the character aren't always what would first occur to someone.
Scene 2
Good intro to the next character. It gives us an idea of her background.
Scene 3
Well that was weird. But well-described. I could certainly see what was going on.
Scene 4
Creepy. Good ending. It intrigues the reader to continue.
I think this could benefit from a paid copy-editor. The grammar isn't bad and there aren't typos, but there are just little things here and there, like sentence structure and little grammatical errors that, if cleaned up, could make the story look so much more professional.
The Chase
Another good ending to this one. Some quick comments:
There's a character named Sammael in the book I'm reading right now. Just thought I'd mention that. :)
I found the beginning of this one a bit boring. There was a lot of description and not much going on. Just my first impression.
Again, grammar, sentence structure, wording, repetition of words...this could really use a copy-editor.
HellBound
Scene 1
Intro to the character...interesting. I get a good idea of what he's like right away.
Scene 2
Creepy. Good comparisons used in the descriptions. I get a little bored in so much description and internal thought, but it's fine. It was nice to have conversation between the two other guys in there to break up the thoughts a bit.
Scene 3
The descriptions at the beginning of this one were great. I liked that this started out with one type and then contrasted with another. This scene also gave more insight into Javier's character and what he wants. He wants to know what he is.
Scene 4
And we finally find out who the mysterious woman is. Kind of weird. Not sure I completely understood what it was. Maybe could add a bit more description (not more flowery language, but more information).
Scene 5
Actually, don't add more info in the previous scene. This last scene did it. So if I understand correctly, Creepy. Brilliant. But more creepy.
Andromeda
Scene 1
Lots of description. As always, the descriptions are detailed and flowy. I enjoy them. Journal entries bore me a bit because they're full of "tell" and not "show", but the descriptions do a good job of setting up the story and keeping me interested.
Scenes 2-5
These scenes do well to intrigue me and keep me interested. They build up to something, they continue the story, they drag me along with it. They give a lot of insight into the main character. One note...I didn't realize the MC was a guy till scene 2. For some reason Jiligan sounded like a woman's name to me, so that's how I pictured the captain in the first scene.
Scenes 6-7
And something happens. But I don't know what it was. I get that the captain doesn't want to describe the sight, but for the readers...maybe? :) Or at least a bit more detail. Nothing ridiculous. Too much detail takes away from the reader’s imagination.
Scene 8
Sad ending. :( Glad there's some crew member info at the end. I will reserve judgment till then.
Scenes 9-11
Well, not exactly a happy ending. And the reader is left wondering what the heck was really going on. Not a bad thing. But frustrating for me and the rest of the readers.
So basically, really not sure how these stories fit together, if they're meant to at all. But just another thing to think about.
A bit of general stuff: I don't normally (ever) read this genre, so keep this in mind. I'm very pro-dialogue and action rather than internal thought, so take what I say with a grain of salt (as an author should always do anyway) because this is very description- and internal thought-heavy. This is fine. It's just not what I'm used to. Below begins the reviews of specific scenes.
The Father and the Harlot
Scene 1
The first paragraph is a good start. It draws readers in. The character is intriguing—a bit of an oxymoron, really. The writing style is immediately appealing. It's got a good amount of description and action, and the thoughts of the character aren't always what would first occur to someone.
Scene 2
Good intro to the next character. It gives us an idea of her background.
Scene 3
Well that was weird. But well-described. I could certainly see what was going on.
Scene 4
Creepy. Good ending. It intrigues the reader to continue.
I think this could benefit from a paid copy-editor. The grammar isn't bad and there aren't typos, but there are just little things here and there, like sentence structure and little grammatical errors that, if cleaned up, could make the story look so much more professional.
The Chase
Another good ending to this one. Some quick comments:
There's a character named Sammael in the book I'm reading right now. Just thought I'd mention that. :)
I found the beginning of this one a bit boring. There was a lot of description and not much going on. Just my first impression.
Again, grammar, sentence structure, wording, repetition of words...this could really use a copy-editor.
HellBound
Scene 1
Intro to the character...interesting. I get a good idea of what he's like right away.
Scene 2
Creepy. Good comparisons used in the descriptions. I get a little bored in so much description and internal thought, but it's fine. It was nice to have conversation between the two other guys in there to break up the thoughts a bit.
Scene 3
The descriptions at the beginning of this one were great. I liked that this started out with one type and then contrasted with another. This scene also gave more insight into Javier's character and what he wants. He wants to know what he is.
Scene 4
And we finally find out who the mysterious woman is. Kind of weird. Not sure I completely understood what it was. Maybe could add a bit more description (not more flowery language, but more information).
Scene 5
Actually, don't add more info in the previous scene. This last scene did it. So if I understand correctly, Creepy. Brilliant. But more creepy.
Andromeda
Scene 1
Lots of description. As always, the descriptions are detailed and flowy. I enjoy them. Journal entries bore me a bit because they're full of "tell" and not "show", but the descriptions do a good job of setting up the story and keeping me interested.
Scenes 2-5
These scenes do well to intrigue me and keep me interested. They build up to something, they continue the story, they drag me along with it. They give a lot of insight into the main character. One note...I didn't realize the MC was a guy till scene 2. For some reason Jiligan sounded like a woman's name to me, so that's how I pictured the captain in the first scene.
Scenes 6-7
And something happens. But I don't know what it was. I get that the captain doesn't want to describe the sight, but for the readers...maybe? :) Or at least a bit more detail. Nothing ridiculous. Too much detail takes away from the reader’s imagination.
Scene 8
Sad ending. :( Glad there's some crew member info at the end. I will reserve judgment till then.
Scenes 9-11
Well, not exactly a happy ending. And the reader is left wondering what the heck was really going on. Not a bad thing. But frustrating for me and the rest of the readers.
So basically, really not sure how these stories fit together, if they're meant to at all. But just another thing to think about.
January 18, 2015
This collection of short stories was full of the stuff of nightmares. I found myself repeatedly grossed out, but in a good way. I do wish a couple of the stories were longer. Hellbound was the longest and also my favorite of the four. That one would make a hell of a movie. I would recommend this for any fan of horror.
*I was given this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.*
*I was given this book from the author in exchange for an honest review.*
September 3, 2020
When Angels Fail is a collection of bloody, brutal and wildly imaginative horror stories that span themes of religion, family, relationships, and more, and build layers upon layers of subtext into gore and description. The writing itself is incredible - it's so interesting, having seen some of Michael's more recent work, to take a look through this and realise just how far his work's come since, and just how much he's developed and changed as a writer, but having said that this early stuff is still exceptional. The prose is beautiful and poetic and clearly quite Barker-influenced - the gore is tasteful, except for where it's perfectly jarring and shocking, the description is inventive and fluid, and the language used crashes wonderfully from Biblical dialogue to Laymon-esque prose to something that almost reads like Milton poetry.
I could gush about the man's writing style for days, but the stories themselves are worth at least a little discussion - plot is unpredictable, and twists and developments come at the reader one by one without ever feeling repetitive or foreseen. Often with collections of short stories, they can begin to feel formulaic, but these stories range in complexity and setting so much that it never tires. It's hard to narrow down favourites but the first, "An Angel Fails", is an incredible start to the book and another favourite of mine, "Andromeda", shows just how easy it is for the writer to slip into one of his characters' shoes and genuinely become them for a while. "The Father and the Harlot" deserves an honourable mention for some really cracking lines.
As I say, the writing since this publication has become even more refined, more beautiful and more mature, but that certainly doesn't take away from the obvious skill, imagination and talent shown here.
I could gush about the man's writing style for days, but the stories themselves are worth at least a little discussion - plot is unpredictable, and twists and developments come at the reader one by one without ever feeling repetitive or foreseen. Often with collections of short stories, they can begin to feel formulaic, but these stories range in complexity and setting so much that it never tires. It's hard to narrow down favourites but the first, "An Angel Fails", is an incredible start to the book and another favourite of mine, "Andromeda", shows just how easy it is for the writer to slip into one of his characters' shoes and genuinely become them for a while. "The Father and the Harlot" deserves an honourable mention for some really cracking lines.
As I say, the writing since this publication has become even more refined, more beautiful and more mature, but that certainly doesn't take away from the obvious skill, imagination and talent shown here.
January 31, 2021
This collection of stories by Michael Benavidez feels deeply personal. As could be guessed by the title, there is a common element of religion throughout these stories, most of which are overwhelmingly dark.
There are some beautiful passages in this book. There is also anger and doubt, both of which are made relatable through the heavy prose. That same verbose prose also slowed down the pacing at times, but that may have been an intentional stylistic choice, as it often served the narrative well in the end.
I did enjoy this book, and I plan to read other works by Benavidez soon. I would recommend this to anyone who likes stories about the battle between good and evil, as well as anyone who has their doubts concerning religion.
There are some beautiful passages in this book. There is also anger and doubt, both of which are made relatable through the heavy prose. That same verbose prose also slowed down the pacing at times, but that may have been an intentional stylistic choice, as it often served the narrative well in the end.
I did enjoy this book, and I plan to read other works by Benavidez soon. I would recommend this to anyone who likes stories about the battle between good and evil, as well as anyone who has their doubts concerning religion.
May 13, 2021
The short tales within the pages hurt me. I related to the struggles. I felt like some of the characters. Having grown up in a religious/cult setting, the references were fantastical and hit home. Definitely spooked me this morning (as it is a quick read). The words danced around each other and collided well. Structure/formatting is a nightmare for independent authors self-publishing, so I didn't mind the flow of it. I feel like Benavidez may have held back on some of the stories, and hope that his other works are more "in your face," and less safe-played. With all that, I'm thrilled to look into his second anthology. Well worth a read, especially during a dark and stormy evening.
April 7, 2016
Very well written I've enjoyed this book, had fun it was written so beautifully that I had to highlight passages of highly recommend for all fans modern horror
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