Frankly, the best thing about this book were the acknowledgements. The ending.
I have so many problems with this- I don't even know where to start.
This book got two stars solely because I was able to get through the entire thing, despite the amount of skimming I did.
I'm going to start with the one thing I liked about this book, and just flow from there.
The pacing- I really enjoyed the pacing in this. It was a light, fast-paced novel, which I can appreciate. It didn't take too long to read, which was a nice counterbalance to the heavier non-fics and classic sci-fi I've been reading lately. After taking so many days to finish those books, I was getting disheartened, and I was glad to finish this within two days.
However, that could just be because I skimmed a lot. I wasn't invested in any aspect of this book, so I'm not entirely sure how I held on, but I think my motivation was writing this review, lol.
Putting everything else in this review aside, it was the writing I had the largest issue with. It sounded so juvenile, out of lack for a better word. It was grammatically correct and everything, but I feel it lacked a flow, as well as desperately needing some sort of finesse. The style of writing used feels like it belongs in a middle grade novel, but the content and language defies that feeling almost completely. However, compared to the first book, the sentence structure was much improved, as compared to the stifling repetitiveness of the first. But on that same note, these subtle differences made it feel like a completely different author wrote this, since the style was completely different. The writing was often cringeworthy.
Quite frankly, this felt like a Sarah J. Maas fanfiction. It's so annoyingly obvious- that this book was heavily influenced by what books the authors have read and liked. If I had the patience to do so, I would nitpick almost every single element of this novel and directly link it to another books's parallel. It was glaringly evident- the metaphors/prose used seemed like they came straight out of SJM's books, the constant switching of POVs, and good Lord, most importantly, the characters.
Additionally, this series heavily relied on overused YA tropes such as enemies-turned-lovers, or the whole traumatized-badass-orphan thing, just to name a few. Elaborating on my previous point, you can tell exactly what these authors read before writing this book.
Let's be real. Androma Raucella, the Bloody Baroness, is a Walmart Celaena Sardothien. There' s no question there. The only difference is that Celaena/Aelin is characterized by her actions rather than what the authors constantly repeat about Andi's personality in the book. We get it. She's the Bloody Baroness, and she's super threatening.
And that's precisely my next issue. Generally, when we write, our mentors and the internet tell us to "show, not tell." This book has no shortage of "Tell, don't show." For example, Andi's crew is..uh...occupied for almost the entirety of this book. I'm not so sure how to word this, but rather than showing Andi's love for her crew through her actions, the authors just constantly repeat the fact that they're her only family.
"She was the Bloody Baroness, and she would tear the skies apart to find her family."
Or some nonsense like that. Constantly being repeated.
I apologize if that made zero sense.
Oh, and most of us don't hate Aelin like we hate Andi.
She's such an uninteresting, bland heroine that I was not invested in at all. Again, like I said before, she's the epitome of your typical edgy-teenager-traumatized-orphan-turned-badass-assassin trope. AKA Celaena Sardothien. I don't have much else to say about her. I'm not a huge fan of her idiotic impulsiveness, which would better be characterized as her recklessness, and her lack of flaws.
Dextro Arez- Yeesh, the most cringeworthy character I have read about in the past year. He is such a tryhard flirt, yet fails epically. He desperately reminds me of a 13-year-old boy with an obvious crush. His one liners were horrible, his personality was just as bad, and he just made me so uncomfortable. Gross.
Lira- As for Lira, I felt pretty meh. I didn't like her, but I didn't hate her either. She was just there. Again, like I said before, a big issue I had with this book was the tell-don't-show. As readers, we constantly get reminded of these characters' personalities, yet we don't see it in their actions, in their thinking.
Gilly and Breck- Again, lacking development. I would have liked to learn more about these two.
Nor- Nor Solis was arguably the most relatable character in that novel. Although I found her the most interesting, she still seemed so two-dimensional despite the multiple POVs, which was a major pitfall on the authors's part. If you're going to have multiple POVs, the very least you can do is add some good development for the individual characters. They missed the point completely, which is a major shame. So in that sense, the POVs were unnecessary, since they also took the focus away from Andi, who is supposedly our main character.
Valen- It's another edgy teenager! Woohoo!
And this compulsion! Again, very interesting, but lacked the development and explanation to make it even better. I didn't completely understand what this "compulsion" was. A compulsion to rule the world? A compulsion to rule peoples' minds? I was confused.
Darai- His sudden desire to rule the world just felt so random and sudden. He made a good villain, and it was a decent enough twist, but again- another two-dimensional character. A shame, seeing how much potential there could be.
As for the romantic pairing between Dextro and Androma, I found it exceedingly boring and cringeworthy. Nothing special there, zero progression between the two of them. At the beginning, they both hated each others guts, and suddenly they start throwing the L-word around? Excuse me? Forgive me for asking, but where was the progression? I felt like it just went from zero to a hundred in 0.0000004 nanoseconds. There was no turning point in their hatred for each other, no telltale signs that they were interested in forming a romantic pairing once again, other than Androma's constant jealousy.
The development for all the characters was...lacking, to say the least. Actually, "lacking" is a good word to just describe this entire book. Yep, let's go with that.
As for the plot, I actually liked the idea of it- I thought the entire Exonia thing (is that what it's called??) was quite interesting, and I liked the idea of the drug, Zenith, as well as the Xen Pterran conspiracy. However, as intriguing as the basic idea of the plot was, the execution of it failed to live up to its potential. I think every single aspect of this story- the writing style, the prose, the characters- are intertwined, so that also could have been a reason I felt this plot was a major letdown.
And now for the worldbuilding. Even if we ignore the major info-dumps all through the novel, the world building was still pretty bad. I already ranted about the inaccuracy of the supplementary map in my review of Zenith, so I'm not going to do that again.
Additionally, so many aspects of this book were just scientifically impossible. I get this was fantasy, but it's still outrageously impossible for half of this stuff to happen.
In conclusion, very disappointing, and I don't think I would ever recommend this to anyone.
Oh, and this is kind of unrelated, but like I touched on in my status update, does anyone else think that it was a coincidence I read this book on the eve of Elon Musk's NeuraLink summer 2020 update? For any of you unfamiliar, it's a chip that is inserted into your brain, primarily meant for reading brain activity and correcting longstanding mental illnesses, as well as several other goals in the future. If you're into tech and science, I highly recommend you check that out.