I've read several of Casandra Boyson's stories and loved them, this one had a couple of things in it that I didn't remember from the other stories, and they bothered me.
1. She said that the Son was created. I don't know if she was talking about when Jesus came as a babe to save us from our sins, or that He became the Son because the Father created Him. Neither is true. He always has been and always will be One with the Father and the Holy Spirit. There was no beginning for any of them. When Jesus came as a babe, he gave up His spirit form and took on a human form so that He could live as an example for us and then give His live for us and then rise again, physically, from the grave.
2. Calling the Holy Spirit, HS. I used to write HS in my Church notes, but felt like I was being disrespectful of who He is. Calling Him HS takes away from who He is and gives Him a nickname that is too familiar. Yes, we are close to our Father and the Son and the Holy Spirit, but we respect and honor them despite our relationship with them. I don't call my husband by a nickname that would not show respect to him (like my old man) - I call him nicknames that edify him and build up our relationship.
Other than that, I quite enjoyed the story, thus the four stars. It was a clean read as well and I appreciate that immensely. I wasn't sure until the end of the story who our heroine was going to end up with!