I received an ARC copy of the book from the Publisher via. Net Galley for an exchange of my HONEST review.
Result: Disappointing
Rating: 1.50
Wow this is just…wow. First there are a few things I want to say before I start my official review of this book. I know Bold Strokes aka Old Strokes banned me because I’m blunt with my reviews; and I know honesty can be an issue for them since I actually put effort into writing my reviews & reading the stories they put out, as I don’t do what some reviewers on here do which is just give the book five stars. I’m not here to just copy and paste the synopsis of the book for my feedback and say everything about this book is grand, I always believe honesty is the best policy. Yet alas I’m tasked to review this baby diaper full of crap. I’m not going to stop writing and reviewing Ms. Frames work or any other authors work from Bold Strokes, as the Bold Strokes Staff do need to be exposed for their mistreatment to authors of color. However, I do not base all my reviews on my own bias as there are books that are good and for that I will give the author credit. However, since there is a word limit on here for these things you can find my full review on Netgalley.
Mass Murders, Dylann Roof Treatment, The Magic of Love, and Evil Black Witches.
So, I am sure people are wondering why do I ask for this book if I hate it? Well the matter is simple really; there was one character that I liked, and that character was Victorija. To me Victorija was one of the best villains that Frame had written. Victorija was complex, smart, cruel, and not without reason for her evil deeds, and the interesting part about her was that she was not wrong for her anger and need for revenge. So now that I stated my opinions on Victorija let us get to the huge issue that I have, now I don’t know about some of you readers but I’m beyond disgusted. Now the only reason why I was holding on to this trash bin of a series was because of Victorija; now mind you that I often find Frames books to be a poorly renditioned comedy of bad Twilight Fan-Fiction, but she ruined Victorija. And just when I thought Frame couldn’t get any lower, she did. However, I have a question can anyone tell me why is Victorija getting the Dylann Roof Treatment? You don’t get to have antagonists like Victorija mass murder people and just get rewarded with love and with basic Daisy no less! I mean since when are we pardoning mass murdering vampires? Now I didn’t mind that Victorija was evil and murdering people she’s an antagonist and it’s her job. However, when you have white antagonists like Victorija mass murdering humans and giving no fucks only to replace her with a black antagonist; and then to go off and then give Victorija the white mass murderer a redemption arc in the form of love, is downright a dick move.
The sudden Victorija switch up is going to lead to the same route as it always does as Victorija’s character is ruined. The reason why I say that is because after reading other books from Frame, I know she is going to take the simple route because she’s a lazy writer. I can literally save everyone nine-dollars on the next book; so Frame is going to make Daisy and her love save the day, and its gonna heal Victorija’s heart and Bryon isn’t going to kill her cousin because she’s “good” and they are going to gather to defeat the great black evil witch. Really people I just saved you money and time, Frame does not know how to write a redemption arc; and what makes me mad about this is that Victorija’s redemption arc is coming at the cost of vilifying a black woman. I mean who kills droves of people on a whim and gets a happy ending or compassion much less? I knew Bold Strokes were white-feminists, but at this point they should just put on their Klan hoods and Swastika’s if they are going to make Anka the devil at this point.
Frame and Old Strokes need to check into 2020, black people are being labeled as villains in a critical time where racism is rampant; and the literary world is changing as more women of color are writing and speaking out against racist publishers! Frame does not understand when you put a black villain like Anka it sends a message to narrow-minded people, and yes there are racist people who are a part of the LBGTQA+ community as well; I’m looking at you Bold Strokes Staff. Now I do not want to label Frame as a racist, but it is looking like the damn shoe is half-way on at this point. There was no need for the crossover with Anka as she had come from her Wolfgang County Books, and really if she wanted to make more use of black people in her books; she should’ve had black people in prominent and frequent side roles. I mean Angelo is still just a lamppost character and Anka is a villain, it still looks bad either way. I know there are a lot of readers saying they can’t wait for Daisy and Victorija’s book, but by the love of lesbian Jesus I’m praying for the people who want a train wreck like that. Now mind you I know they are characters, and this is just a book; but people think logically on what you read before dishing out five-stars.
Which leads me to the power and magic of love, like really? I said it once and I’ll say it again Frame cannot make a magic system to save her life. I mean so love just solves everything and not to mention Amelia is the chosen one how freaking convenient. I hoped to keep this professional, but really as a black woman I just can’t as this mess is ridiculous. Look I know that love is a mysterious thing, but it doesn’t have to be a stupidly unrealistic thing that just falls in line with the universe; love is a good thing but its messy and its complicated and often the world challenges your love. Like really everything concerning Amelia’s Wiccan powers are handed out to Amelia on first insight; so, she knows how to see the dead, lift shoes, and hear the voices of her ancestors all in one go? And all she did was just step into a magical game saving circle, fucks Bryon and it clicks? I mean even when Amelia “struggled” with her powers it didn’t seem believable. Really with the added pacing issues it makes her progress as a Witch even more idiotic. Not to mention the same old chosen one trope about good and evil is played out, I mean people are kind of sick of it I know I am.
Magic Water, Super Hearing, Dead Ancestors, and Strap-on Sucking Again?
Now I have to ask everyone this. Why would a vampire that you claim to be strong over and over in your books have a need for magical healing water that brings you back from death? I mean this part of the story is beyond stupid. Just when I thought the plot armor of love would protect Byron’s Crew; Boring Bhal has magic water that you can drink from her hands that will respawn Katie and Amelia quicker than a Battle Royale Match on Fortnite. First off drinking water from someone else’s hand is beyond gross I know Covid19 in the book doesn’t exist, but from that scene the inner germaphobe in me was cringing.
Also, why would you let a stray vampire into your home in the middle of a vampire and witch war! The Josie thing was so unnecessary, and even if it was necessary this book really ensures that there are no permanent consequences to dumb actions, as it is such an unrealistic view on vampires and life in general. Now I know Boring Bhal was as useless as wet cardboard drying, but to make her this magic healer that can respawn these bitches as if they were on Call of Duty really? Not to mention if she had that ability why couldn’t Bryon and Alexis keep their lovers with Bhal one-hundred and seventy years ago? Especially if they were human. It would have been better if Frame left Katie for dead and made Alexis travel to find someone to bring her back.
Which leads me to my next rant. So, can someone explain to me why is it that Bryon and Alexis keep going on about their super hearing as vampires in this book, but they can’t freaking hear when Katie is getting attacked under their own roof! Frame went on for miles a minute talking about these vampires and their superior hearing; and then when Katie gets attacked its like they can’t hear Katie struggling or calling for help. I mean if these are vampires with super hearing wouldn’t they have at least heard the slamming or breaking of a cup? I don’t know about you, but I seem to recall Katie throwing tea in Josies face. This is the same thing with the speed situation from the last book Hunger for You; Frame wrote over and over how Bryon was fast and strong, but she let her grandmother get killed while Byron had a Simba from Lion King moment when Mufasa died. Once again Frame fails at following the rule of showing and not telling; she really needs to take an online writing class because I know Fan Fiction written by blind kids sounds better than this hot garbage.
Now to bring forward another thing the dead ancestors. So, people answer me this does it make sense to you to have the voices of your dead ancestors in your head while having sex with your wife? Because I don’t know whether to call an exorcist or a therapist. I am going to be honest with you its freaking creepy that Amelia can possibly hear her dead mothers voice in the middle of sucking Bryon’s smelly onion scented strap-on. I don’t know about you readers, but when I’m having sex with a woman, I purposefully forget that I have parents. So, I don’t get why the hell Ms. Frame would write something like that. I know she was trying to correlate sex to magic, but the ancestral family thing and hearing their voices was fucking creepy; also, why is she even involving sex in the parts of the book that aren’t really needed? Frame really had a shot to make the dead ancestor voices thing work when it came to Amelia discovering her powers as a Witch. I would have made Amelia go crazy or something, I would have done anything, and I mean ANYTHING, but the dead ancestor before and after sex angle was cringy. And to double down on my point, really people ask yourself this; do you want to hear your dead grandmothers voice in your head while you are having sex? I think the answer is no. So next and final complaint.
You know…I am not a prude as a lesbian. I know with my reviews of Frame it feels like I can be, but I’m not. Often the simplistic side of me as a woman enjoys a steamy sex scene, and the girl in me enjoys a nice healthy romance between women. Personally, I like to think of myself as a freak in the sheets on more than one occasion when I read a good erotica. So for better or worse as a thirty-year-old woman I know my way around a bedroom; so that means I understand that in the middle of passion people say things that keep the moment heated during their encounters. However, when Frame says crap like this, “Although it wasn’t real, in Byron’s headspace it was, and that’s all she needed to enjoy this act. And unlike a real cock, neither Bryon nor her lover were ever let down.” Or when she writes things like, “I’m going to come on you.” Or when Frame mentions, “Would you like me to suck your cock, Principe?” I will say it once and I will say it again BRYON IS NOT A FREAKING MAN! I mean this is the grossest crap ever, like how the hell is Bryon going to come on Amelia? She is a woman dressed as a man! I mean we all know that two plus two equals four, but with Frame it is like two plus two equals Rocket Science.
Frames idea of lesbian sex is so complicated and strange. I don’t mind reading about toys in the bedroom and I believe in the power of the strap-on but there are mental limits that shouldn’t be crossed, and it feels like Bryon crosses all of those lines. Really her sex scenes with Bryon and Amelia feel like it’s a sex scene between two straight people and as a woman who loves women, I don’t want to read about a woman who acts like she has a real dick. I mean the only way I would accept Byron’s attachment to her wearing strap-on’s, was if she was a woman trying to transition as a man. I mean I get that she had to act like a man for the sake of history but I’m going to assume this book is set in the present day, so really there is no need for it to go that far when it comes to sex. Really, I feel like Bryon is one step away from getting top and bottom surgery.
Personally, I felt like bleaching my own eyes when I read that scene; just as well I’m getting sick of women who are masculine trying to put down men. I mean I get that female empowerment is here to stay, and I myself share in a masculine nature as a lesbian woman; but I don’t go into the deep end with it and think I’m an actual man, and I don’t put men down as a whole. Overall, my point is I think Frame should make Bryon transition as a man, because she’s hitting some mental, social, and physical cues that makes me want to think that Bryon wants to have a sex change. And no lie if Frame did that it would be cool as Trans-Lives do matter; but Frame needs to stop trying to ease her readers into gross sex scenes with cringy ass lines and pass it off as if they were lesbian sex. And mind you I understand that this could be a part of roleplay, but to be honest this is far from it; I wanted to read about lesbians, not cringy ass dialog during sex.
My Final Thoughts
So, in conclusion there is no way in hell that I would recommend this to anyone. In my opinion I would rate this book 1.50 stars. I mean its clear that Old Strokes and Frame have given up on this book, everything from Syntax errors to the pacing of the plot is just lackluster; and at this point she ruined the series when she screwed up Victorija’s character and put the black evil villain for no apparent reason. Alexis and Katie were barely in the book, and when we got to them, they had all the romantic chemistry and mental compatibility of paint drying; and speaking of paint. I rather burn holes into my brain by inhaling buckets of paint and gasoline, than to remember this mess again. Seriously I was really holding on to the fact that Frame would actually do something with Victorija but she didn’t, this series is beyond saving and I hate to say people are horrible writers; but there is the saying that if the shoe fits and well…let’s just say with Frame the shoe is half way on.