I was very disappointed in this book. I loved the first one, but this one was booooring. The main problem was that the love story doesn't actually start until 70% through the book. Seriously. Before that, there are just casual moments of the characters getting a glimpse of each other and saying Hi on campus. The rest is full of stupid, gag inducing sorority and fraternity scenes and conversations. Like, Who cares?? Basically NOTHING happened for a very long time and that nothingness wasn't even entertaining. This COULD have been a great story. Once they got together, I liked it, but there was not much of that. (If you are reading this because you loved their dad, Tyler or Preston, you'll be disappointed. They make VERY limited cameos.)
Two things I hated in addition to the horrible, childish sorority/ fraternity scenes: 1) the author made the heroine into a girl eager to have sex with a near stranger (which she did with two different guys.) There was not even a date or a real conversation between them first, and the heroine was the aggressor/ temptress in both instances. Ok, fine. But THEN, when Tucker questions if someone else could have fathered her baby, the author and the hero tries to tell us that the heroine is 'not like that'. Well, clearly she is. We just saw her be like that. I mean, the heroine was so busy grabbing Tucker's junk the moment he walked into the library that she didn't even listen to the words he was saying to her which were basically, 'why are you doing this? I barely know you.' Why would any self respecting woman keep seducing a guy when she is getting a vibe that that? We were supposed to be angry at the twins for tricking her, but she was All over them! The moment she sees him at a party, led Trent down a dark hallway in her panties and heels then had sex with him three minutes later; as soon as Tucker walks into the library, she grabs his junk and invites him for sex in a classroom. But she's such and innocent, wholesome girl...?? I think the author ruined a good character as a sacrifice for what she thought was a hot sex scene. Then again, everything about the heroine, Jemma, contradicted what the author and Jemma tried to tell us about her. Supposedly she was 'above' sorority hijinx, a wholesome girl who didnt even want to be in a sorority and yet she let herself be dressed as a whore and marched through campus over and over. She walked through campus and into a fraternity party in high heels and a bra and panties, dressed as a Lingerie model. (Because all wholesome girls do that, right?) THEN she saw girls there in bikinis and said she pitied them that they were willing to show that much skin. WHAT? She is standing there in lingerie as she says it!!!! Ok, I could go on and on, but you get the point.
Secondly, the book is filled with mistakes, where the author calls someone by the wrong name, and/ or completely contradicts something she has just told us about a character. It became very confusing and could have been easily corrected if she had just asked any reader and listened to a true crtitique before having this (obviously rushed) book printed. It's like the author slams something into the story, then immediately forgets what she said, and apparently she never gave anyone a chance to proof it and catch these mistakes before sending it to print!! The mistakes make the story hard to follow and leave a close reader perpetually confused. For instance, she describes two female side characters, giving one the label of 'Alabama beauty queen.' A couple sentences later, she is describing the wrong one as having a history in pageants. In the next chapter, the heroine is looking at Tucker, musing over wanting to talk to Tucker again (by name 'Tucker') and in the next sentence she says she looked over at Trent. At this point, she doesnt even know that a Trent exists, so she can't call him Trent!!! VERY annoying!!!