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Alpha Commander: Wilds of Wynmere
I lost Earth, but I gained love…
When I left Earth to work with the Wynmerian race, I always expected to return. I’d heard stories of men who’d fallen to the charms of these gorgeous aliens, but I knew that couldn’t happen to me. I was different… right?
It doesn’t take long after I meet Andax, Commander of the S.S. Trothor, to start to question everything… and give him everything.
When I left Earth to work with the Wynmerian race, I always expected to return. I’d heard stories of men who’d fallen to the charms of these gorgeous aliens, but I knew that couldn’t happen to me. I was different… right?
It doesn’t take long after I meet Andax, Commander of the S.S. Trothor, to start to question everything… and give him everything.
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145 pages, Kindle Edition
Published February 14, 2020
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October 12, 2019
Maybe only two
It was quick. It was rushed. The formatting made me want to scream. There were SNIPS of good world building. Little pieces that made me think it would be more than just the bare bones obvious. But it wasnt. The best part of the book was that little bit that was like "any questions?" . Sadly even that was pushing it.
This is actually like 2 or maybe 3 books. I honestly stopped reading during the story with the hooker. I ACTUALLY perked up at the beginning of that story because even though I figured it was an alien omega Pretty Woman it was well written.
Bottom line: 3 stars because even though it was kinda generic and way way WAY too rushed there were tiny peaks of good world building that I wish I had a satisfying story to go with.
It was quick. It was rushed. The formatting made me want to scream. There were SNIPS of good world building. Little pieces that made me think it would be more than just the bare bones obvious. But it wasnt. The best part of the book was that little bit that was like "any questions?" . Sadly even that was pushing it.
This is actually like 2 or maybe 3 books. I honestly stopped reading during the story with the hooker. I ACTUALLY perked up at the beginning of that story because even though I figured it was an alien omega Pretty Woman it was well written.
Bottom line: 3 stars because even though it was kinda generic and way way WAY too rushed there were tiny peaks of good world building that I wish I had a satisfying story to go with.
March 2, 2020
It was okay.
Overall it was an okay book, I just feel like it didn't really add much to the "Aliens need humans to reproduce" trope.
[Spoilers]
I thought it was going to with the crash in the Wilds of the planet, but when I saw how much was left in the book, it was easy to see that this event was just a blip in the story. There were also quite a few throwaway events that honestly did nothing to enhance the overall story, like the girlfriend who was obviously destined to fail. Like you could tell from the beginning that the relationship would end sooner rather than later.
All in all, it felt like an hour wasted for me...
Overall it was an okay book, I just feel like it didn't really add much to the "Aliens need humans to reproduce" trope.
[Spoilers]
I thought it was going to with the crash in the Wilds of the planet, but when I saw how much was left in the book, it was easy to see that this event was just a blip in the story. There were also quite a few throwaway events that honestly did nothing to enhance the overall story, like the girlfriend who was obviously destined to fail. Like you could tell from the beginning that the relationship would end sooner rather than later.
All in all, it felt like an hour wasted for me...
February 22, 2022
This was a decent start
This book is short and almost like a .5 versus 1st book. We meet our main characters get and idea of the conflict we'll be seeing. However, some of the verbiage used is a tad cheesy and we never get both POV. I'm hoping the next one being longer will work out some of these kinks and I'm looking forward to reading it.
This book is short and almost like a .5 versus 1st book. We meet our main characters get and idea of the conflict we'll be seeing. However, some of the verbiage used is a tad cheesy and we never get both POV. I'm hoping the next one being longer will work out some of these kinks and I'm looking forward to reading it.
September 23, 2022
Danggggg
This book was amazing! Short and a bit of a cliffy, but it was well written and had immense world-building going on. From the reviews, I was expecting something barely put together. The UST was off the charts and smoking hot, for as short as it lasted. I’m in, I’m so in….
This book was amazing! Short and a bit of a cliffy, but it was well written and had immense world-building going on. From the reviews, I was expecting something barely put together. The UST was off the charts and smoking hot, for as short as it lasted. I’m in, I’m so in….
January 15, 2021
Interesting
I didt know what to make of this book. But was pleasantly surprised. I enjoyed it. I wish it had more story or rather background information to it. But it was well edited and written. I enjoyed this a lot. On to book two now
I didt know what to make of this book. But was pleasantly surprised. I enjoyed it. I wish it had more story or rather background information to it. But it was well edited and written. I enjoyed this a lot. On to book two now
July 25, 2017
2.5-3/5
Brain-candy, but it served its purpose.
Brain-candy, but it served its purpose.
October 10, 2017
Way, way out
I know it’s Sci-Fi but still. It left a lot to be desired. Maybe a real fan of Sci-Fi will like it.
I know it’s Sci-Fi but still. It left a lot to be desired. Maybe a real fan of Sci-Fi will like it.
April 13, 2019
I didn’t read the end of the description on Amazon, and so I didn’t realize that 55% of the pages in this book were actually other books.
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