2-2.5 stars
I received a free ARC from VSP Publishing in exchange for a review to be released by the 20th of July.
Man oh man, has this book caused some trouble with its rerelease. Like many others, I was sent a DM on Goodreads asking to review this book. The premise interested me and it is on the short side, so I agreed. They told me to wait until next week for my copy to be sent. Here is a part of the email message that took me by surprise:
Please do not forget to post your review before July 20 and if you doesn’t like the book, thank you to let us know by email instead of posting a bad review (less than 3 stars). Indeed, as you know each advance reading copy provided cost a fee to publishers, so we prefer to invest in a good marketing campaign.
The Publishers have deleted their account so our Goodreads DM thread is no longer available for me to view, but I never agreed to give it a certain rating in exchange for a copy. My reviews are honest and try to be helpful to fellow readers and authors.
The author and publisher wanted to redo the book somehow so there are reviews from the first release. My review is for the second release. I'm stating this because I don't know if there is a difference between these two version as I only have access to the second one.
This book is about a woman who goes by the moniker Baroness, her real name is never given, and she is essentially a person whose business is to help women who hire her find out if their husbands are cheating and if they are use illegal tactics to get them to finance their soon to be ex-wife's new lifestyle. Another aspect to her business is to help women attract the man of their desires through calculated means. The title "seduction expert" is used as she not only helps women seduce men but seduces women into trusting her while they're in the most vulnerable, scared position they could be in. She's used her skills to build a business, become a respected member of upper class Parisian society, create and head a secret feminist organization with a vast network of fellow wealthy and well-regarded women (some of who were past clients), and land one of the most wealthy and handsome eligible bachelors in all of France. We as readers follow her around throughout her life in a sort of diary format while she deals with professional and personal highs and lows.
Just to be clear there is no romance in this book. Just because a character’s job deals with breaking and building a relationship doesn’t mean it’s a romance. If you’re reading this expecting romance of any kind then skip this book. This is more slice of life Contemporary as we’re watching Baroness live her life and seeing her inner thoughts. Definitely feel this book has been mislabeled on Goodreads.
For almost half this book I didn't feel too bad about this story; a more accurate description would have been "it's not bad but not great" viewpoint. This character is probably one of the most unlikeable females I've read about, and I can see many people being unable to finish this book out of annoyance with her attitude and personality. For me, I didn't really mind it as it's just another side of how certain people are in real-life. Maybe dealing with someone who is quite similar to Baroness has left me more tolerant to her thoughts and actions? Who knows.
While reading this book I noticed several issues of awkward phrasing that could have been fixed with a different word choice, missing words, a capitalization issue, and numerous typos. Since this is the second release of the book, I didn't expect these errors and became frustrated with how frequently I found them in the latter part of the book. Another slight issue came from the characters themselves. They all seemed pretty two dimensional. You have the characteristic mama's boy, evil future mother-in-law, super nice yet gullible future father-in-law, meek secretary, alcoholic troubled P.I., sketchy Serbian bodyguard (in truth I found this character kind of racist), and evil beautiful, popular rich female who uses anyone in her path. Usually characters like this, while a dime a dozen, can bring a plot along, but these characters took the plot from "meh," "slightly interesting," to flat out "messy" and "cringe worthy". With the introduction of Baroness's love interest, I did become more invested in the story but all the issues compounded together to leave me frustrated in the end.
My biggest issue deals with how the author chose to handle the topic of feminism. Baroness is a self-proclaimed feminist and seems proud of it. She claims to be helping women who have been used by their husbands restart their lives and realizing they don't need men to be happy and fulfilled with their lives. They can instead find it by giving back to other women who have gone or are currently going through similar situations. It sounds nice, right? Yet, the way the author handles feminism throughout the book seemed negative instead of empowering. Baroness is constantly belittling EVERYONE she meets, regardless of gender; she constantly has inner monologues of how practically everyone is of lesser quality than her in numerous ways. Honestly, she uses everyone to her advantage to climb her way to the high life especially financially. [She's a gold digger.] This isn't really feminism as she's just being a man hating witch but uses the guise of feminism to excuse her terrible actions. I get that it's part of her personality, but it's damaging and misleading to what feminism actually is about.
There is a possibility of a future plot as this book is the first in a series. As I stated before, Baroness from the beginning has a superiority complex over everyone but one individual. The only individual she even likes is her best friend Chloe. They actually get along with each other and Baroness seems to be her truest self with Chloe. Even “gracing” her with genuine smiles and laughs. There were hints that Baroness may be attracted and even in love with Chloe, but didn't realize it even though she believes almost everyone she knows to be hopelessly in love with her and she's always the smartest person around. It'll be interesting to see if she happens to figure that fact out.
This book just went down hill for me in the later part. The cover is reminiscent of The Devil Wears Prada and the book seems to be trying to have a character like Miranda Priestly with Baroness. These reminders are its greatest downfall as we've already seen these characters and plot in many other books. I'm not sure I can recommend this book as there are others that have more engaging characters and better driven plots. If you like reading about unlikeable characters living their lives through manipulating others than give this a shot but keep your hopes low.