“Transparency” is the story of an older, larger, bearish gay man, Charlie, who becomes infatuated with a younger, smaller, twinkish man, Taylor. Charlie is very upfront and knows what he wants and isn’t afraid to Taylor that he wants him. Taylor, on the other hand, is very shy and worries about how Charlie may react when he discovers the truth about Taylor.
The story is very well done and I enjoyed these two characters and their differing personalities that allowed them to come together. It also touched on the subject of transgender, something I hadn’t read before and it was something I appreciated gaining knowledge about. It provided a lot of insight and I thought it was very touching that Charlie accepts and loves Taylor no matter what.
My concern with the story was that it was far too short. Both Charlie and Taylor needed some back story, especially with Taylor going through the transition of becoming a man and being teased and bullied over it. Charlie needed more back story involving Anderson, his bigoted friend who refused to accept Charlie and Taylor’s love. I realize that we needed to be introduced to a villainous character, but I think the poker scene seemed unnecessary and it would’ve been better if we were shown Charlie and Anderson’s past relationship.
There also needed to be more of a reaction from Charlie when he finally learned the truth about Taylor. He accepted it, maybe a little too quickly. A story like this that touches on so many important issues definitely needed to be fleshed out more. It felt very rushed.
That being said, the story is very well-written and you understand the pain and fear that Taylor feels as the relationship with Charlie develops. I just wish the authors had developed this story a lot more.