Wow, this book is like THE disappointment of the year for me. I don't usually rate anything two stars, but damn, I really hated this one..
For context, I had to read this book for class. Was even happy about it in the beginning.. I mean, look at that cover!! However, I wanted to close it as soon as I read the first page. I am not at all a poetry person, and the writing style was just not for me at all. Some quotes are nice, sure, but overall?? A lot of it felt like it was descriptive just for the sake of being descriptive, and that the author was trying too hard for her words to be deep and impactful that everything just fell flat. And, somehow with all that description, she still ended up telling and not showing well, everything. It was all spelled out for the reader, and along with a very preachy tone, just did not work for me. And that's not even mentioning quite a few very icky lines that are just.. why
The premise of this poetry collection was promising - a feminist take on greek mythology that gives voice to some characters and puts a spin on perspectives, along with supplying the reader with "life lessons". But the execution SUCKS. My question is - what exactly are those life lessons if you're either only taking the good bits, or the bad ones turned pity parties where none of the characters hold any accountability whatsoever? Yes, for sure, the lesson to learn from Hera is for sure to hurt the women your husband cheated on you with. Wow, thanks, Nikita Gill!! Such a great life lesson fr!! It's not like you can learn anything from mistakes, ever..
The portrayal of mythological figures was absolutely horrible. The women are idolised, men are either victimised or villanised or both, and everyone reads the same. To start with women - as mentioned before, they don't seem to have done anything wrong at all in Nikita Gill's eyes. It's either not mentioned at all (i.e. Athena and Arachne), or mentioned but is framed as the right thing to do. Yes, ofc Demeter didn't mean to be abusive or cause any famines!! she was just a worried mother!! completely reasonable, all of it!! As are all of Hera's actions ofc ofc, she's like a big protector of women apparently!! This idealisation combined with the feminist ideas (which are great, don't get me wrong.. but not like this) makes every single character read as the same person and almost completely unrecognisable from their mythic personalities, and thereby rids them of any dimension that the author tried to give them.
Now, onto the men. In the first section of the book they are given no perspective, which makes you lost in what's happening unless you've read the myths. ok, that would've been fine, if it stayed that way. They are also villanised there, and (mostly) rightfully so in my opinion. But THEN, I started to have questions post page 53.. because suddenly, they are given perspectives. Which would also be fine, if the narrative didn't take 180 degree turn. Suddenly, the gods like Zeus, Ares, etc are being thrown their pity parties!! No, they weren't evil out of their own will, ofc not.. TheY wErE jUsT rAiSeD tHaT wAY and cOuLdN't ReGuLaTe ThEir eMoTiONs:(( awww how sad this... like, guyssss, they just DiDn'T kNoW iT wAs BaD:(( it's not their fault
THAT PISSED ME OFF SO MUCH. TAKE RESPONSIBILITY FOR YOUR ACTIONS. ACCOUNTABILITY IS IMPORTANT. I DID NOT PICK THIS BOOK UP IT TO READ ABOUT ZEUS WHINING ABOUT HOW HE DOESNT UNDERSTAND WHY CONSENT MATTERS. LIKE WTF.
AND ANOTHER THING THAT COMPLETELY TOOK ME OFF?? THE "X, AFTER" SECTIONS. Want a modern AU? THEN READ LORE OLYMPUS, NOT THIS FREAKING BOOK. Reading about these ancient babies going to therapy and adjusting to oh such difficult life in 21st century made me think that my eyes would fall out from how much I was rolling them. These modern sections were a torture to get through, as they were, once again, overly humanising the gods and making them into people who they just weren't. Like the only half decent After section was about Artemis, though it still made me cringe a lot as I was reading it.
Honestly, reading all these chapters from the gods' perspectives made me think that Nikita Gill decided that she made them bad enough in the beginning, didn't want to be called a man-hating feminist, making her overcompensate with all the victimisation.
I could go on about this forever.. but I won't, and I already spent an hour writing this review. Conclusion: the concept has good potential, execution falls flat. spare yourself.
p.s. not giving it a 1 only because there were a couple of nice poems and quotes. also because of the tiny bit of gay sprinkled here and there