I wanted to love this book as much as a I loved the first instalment, but I just couldn't. These are my thoughts:
1. I knew that the second instalment wasn't going to be about Everly, even though I wanted it to be. I knew that it would be a different fairy tale (Cinderella) and that Everly, Roth, etc would show up in supporting roles. But I honestly didn't think Saxon would become one of the main characters, and worse, that I wouldn't like him anymore.
2. I just couldn't get into Saxon, and I overall didn't feel like he had much of a personality? One minute he hates her, and the next he doesn't? I'm going to talk about some pretty obvious spoilers below, so stop reading now if you cannot handle any type of spoiler.
I think Saxon is a bit basic. He hates her, makes her do chores and penance (which is weird) but doesn't kill her even though he wants to? Yet kills other people in battle like it's nothing? It sort of doesn't make sense to me. People aren't like that. Then, all of a sudden he begins to love Ash, like there's no "like" at any point. One minute he hates her and the next he'll die for her. It's kind of weird. And a bit over the top. I had to skip some of the last pages where he's just professing his love over and over and over again. Like we get it. You love her. Good for you. Oh, you'll die for her? Great. Oh, you'll give your life for her? Cool. I mean, that's sort of like saying you'll die for her, but sure, tell us how much you love her again. Saxon whispers "I would not live so that she could live".
3. The armour dust was weird. Really weird. That shouldn't be a thing. It's just making me picture them all being covered in pollen (which I guess is kind of like, uh, flower sperm, so it's fitting, but still weird).
4. Dior should have been Cinder and had more of a role in the fairy tale. I thought she was great.
5. Where are the dragons? They needed more ink time (like air time in tv shows but for books).
6. Ash's magical ability was such a cop-out. How convenient that she happens to have the strangest power which somehow provides her with the best solution?
7. Philip needed to be put in his place a bit better. He also needed a bit of a better back story as to why he hated Ash. It all felt very superficial. At least pretend he hated Ash because she broke his favourite watch or something. I don't know, I don't care, just give me something.
8. MORE EVERLY. MORE ROTH. AND FOR GODS SAKE, MORE HARTLY. There really should have been a bit more about them. I don't care if it's not really their story. They're the heart of The Forest of Good and Evil, and I want more closure.