Some spo iler ish con con tent to justify the rating.
My overall impression of this installment, it’s not worth it and it’s no where up to par with book one in this series.
Here’s why…
It should be mentioned that I found book one in this series to be extremely well planned, written and detailed. The story in book one made sense and the progression of the heroine through her struggles and the relationship building between both mains was done wonderfully.
I came into book two hoping for just half of what book one offered even. Unfortunately, it fell flat from the beginning.
The book opens with Quin and Vivian, they’re the main POVs for a while into the book. But then as the book moves on there are interchanging POVs from different characters within scenes and chapters with NO smooth transition. At times, I was like WAIT who’s this POV from now? 1st person? 3rd person? Floating above the scene like a fly hovering about relaying their impression? What’s happening?
Based on this alone I’d rather have the author have held back on publishing this until she had it more polished.
The mains – Rosie and Rokai.
Rokai wasn’t a bad man male character. I enjoyed his personality when interacting with Rosie, did not care for his otherwise quick to snap persona, though it was warranted towards his parents it seems. I enjoyed his retribution behavior for Rosie.
I did not like that species were not noted. So Kron and his sister that is rescued, Li’Orani are not of the same species apparently? What are they? The other rescued two females and the boy, what are they? Considering this is an intermingled multi species universe, this is sort of a big detail that needs including.
Rosie – Well, what can I say? I didn’t care for her. She basically sounds like an old gang banger from Brooklyn NY. She even has a tattoo tear drop under one eye, she says she offed someone who hurt her friend, which made sense…but to actually have the tattoo of that like a gang banger? She just was not an attractive in attitude or physically sounding female. Props to the A for trying to diversify, but ehhhhh this one wasn’t a good choice. Did not care for her brush off and attitude towards Rokai.
SECONDARY Characters – OH WOW THESE SIGNIFICANTLY DROPPED THE RATING! So this book is from MULTIPLE POVs. Not just the two mains or the previous two mains.
One, I didn’t appreciate Vivian constantly in ALL the other females business and going all postal on the males and healer about the rescued females. I get the point she was trying to make that she understood their situation. But the way she came off in this book was a bit over the top and cringe worthy.
Now Kol and Ada Jane…well, it seems like these two are next in line for book three, but if the A is reading this, PLEASE DON’T WRITE THEM A BOOK! Kol, oh poor Kol. He’s been so sweet and wanting a human mate since the beginning of book one. He doesn’t disappoint in this installment either, but Ada Jane who is to be his mate…HORRIBLE. Absolutely, horrible. She’s described as being a larger in statue girl from Nebraska, you know the corn raised type, okay that’s cool. But her attitude…it’s so bad. She was abducted in the 1980’s and it’s now 2121, she’s having a hard time wrapping her head around that. She doesn’t believe it when she’s finally told. Kol wants to be her mate and is good to her. She just continuously keeps saying she wants to go home back to Earth. That’s her thing throughout the whole book. I get it that she wants to see for herself because her character is not strong enough to accept her current situation and take charge of her life. So she basically says she can’t be with Kol and is mad at him because she hasn’t been taken back to Earth. She does not see ANYthing from his POV or even try to understand his POV. She’s so heck bent on Earth so she LEAVES him and goes back to Earth where there is nothing for her.
Ada Jane basically ruined this book for me. You could tell she’s self centered and weak minded. She wasn’t able to process what happened to her, the truth right in front of her, so she has to go back to Earth. Okay, a lot of people would probably be like her. BUT THEN WHY did she not sit down and actually COMMUNICATE to Kol that she needed to go back to Earth for XYZ reasons, would he take her etc. COMMUNICATION is what was needed. A real conversation. She dropped the ball on that. Based on her from this book and leaving him, I have no desire for this couple to have a book and Kol deserves better than the treatment he’s receiving. The excuse in this book is that oh it’ll bring them together and they’ll get out of their own way blah blah blah. Well, poor Kol wanting her now and being stuck wanting her because of the mate bond. There’s no way I’d hurt my mate like she is doing and now he’s stuck with her. How can a real relationship ever have a solid foundation now for these two? It couldn’t, not in real life anyways, not after that level of hurt regardless of what she’s been through, not considering how his species recognizes their mate.
Also, this book really seemed to focus more on what was going on AROUND the main characters and not a real development focus on this books supposed mains.
I did not feel any love or romance between the two mains. I saw why they’d be attracted to one another, but it didn’t like a romance and frankly got way more interested in other characters than them.
Cover – The colors on the cover don’t adequately match the description of Rokai in this book. The cover appears grey, where as in the book he’s mentioned several times as being more sage green. Also, the photo shopping editing of adding horns onto the male on the cover is terribly done.
Hot scenes – What hot scenes? There is one brief non-hot scene where Rokai messes with Rosie below the belt, it wasn’t really needed as it didn’t do much for the story progression. There is finally one hot scene, around the 84 percent mark that was not wrote very hot. At that point it felt over due and like an after thought. It wasn’t romantic, sweet or hot. It was just kinda… there.
Triggers – The possible triggers I noted that some readers may find were acts of violence done as retribution and there were some other females rescued. The rescued females state at the time they were discovered was detailed to readers. However, the heroine is not in a situation during this book that is trigger worthy, you just know she experienced abuse before.
Would I recommend this book? Only if you want to have a bit of a slice of life read about Quin and Vivian from book one.
I feel like the author must have known this wasn’t the best installment as its introduction price is 99 cents, which is what I paid. I wish it had been in Kindle Unlimited instead.