Provided by the State Library Victoria as part of the Inky Awards.
This is a rant, all thoughts are my own and I mean no offence to anyone.
I’m really questioning what the actually heck I just read, and I don’t mean it in a good way either. The good thing is that not everything was that bad, hence the two stars instead of one, so I’ll start with the spoiler free good stuff, before we get onto the non spoiler free of all the things that I didn’t like, and all are my own unbiased opinions.
First off, the cover. I like it and it suits the book(not in a bad way, I promise), in that there is a blade and if you weren’t aware, the book focuses on Norse mythology in an urban setting, so urban fantasy as well, which is also kinda cool. Some parts of the writing was also done well, there’s a love triangle, consistent plotting and it is not all that boring at times of a read. All positives. There’s plenty of action, weird mythical creatures, a dosage of class, and a fair bit of romance, things that reflect well on modern YA, so the appeal is certainly there. However, exactly none of that was was executed to a good degree and while the author tried to incorporate many good things, they all fell flat. Furthermore, it has one of the lowest ratings on Goodreads that I have yet seen for a fairly popular book, and it all goes downhill from there and as such, major spoilers from here, so is you haven’t read the book, maybe it is time to go.
The New York Times dubbed it, “Generated an excitement not felt in the industry since Stephanie Meyer or perhaps even J.K Rowling.” *Scoffs loudly.* One of my biggest issues is that this book does not feel original in any way or form. Instead it felt like Hocking read a lot of the big popular YA urban fantasy books, and then smushed them into one book. It’s based heavily around Norse Mythology which instantly reminded me of Magnus Chase and there’s also a fair share of walking around and meeting up with strange creatures which also screams works of Riordan. The whole killing immortals, seems very similar to killing demons from the Shadowhunters Chronicles and there’s even training places and schools. I simply felt that the book didn’t really bring anything all that new and exciting to the table of YA.
“I’d just learned everything I believed was a lie.”
What a load of nonsense. One thing she believed turned out to be a lie, which is nowhere as the lies that Eve went through in Lifel1k3 which is another Inky longlisted book. As it is told from first person perspective, some of the narrative, like that quote above really ended up bothering me. Another major pet peeve in this book. A character threatens another character, goes into an argument of about two words, and the character who was previously so adamant, immediately gives up and this happens about four to five times throughout this book, and guess, what? They all reply with the same word, “fine.” EVERYONE SINGLE TIME! That either means every character has the personality of a piece of grass, and they all use exactly the very same word, or that it was lazy writing on the author’s part, and I’m willing to believe both.
Which brings me to say, I couldn’t not care for any of the characters… like, at all. When Marlow, who is the main character’s mum dies, I didn’t not even blink an eye, why, because Marlow was an annoying character who did absolutely nothing and I hated her with my soul. She was cruel and the whole problem in this book happened because of her being stupid. I could not ship any of the characters and the romance, dare I say it, felt really forced and rushed, and way too much instalove. Oh look, your mum just died, this guy ambushed me in my own apartment, but hey, who cares, let me hook up with him because he looks nice. Can you not? Also, that ending was the worst piece of bull I have actually read. Malin walks up to the hated enemy, stabs him, he laughs and then proceeds to drop dead. The grand finale that I was looking for was actually a hundred page tale of them taking a train and getting lost in a maze, and while an epic battle scene was expected, she just goes stab and then he pops dead. No plot twists no nothing, unless you count ending which ends on a cliffhanger which is something that is way to prevalent in YA books, but is also one of the most annoying things to find from a book.
Everything feels too much like a copy of other books, the characters are all dead inside and the cover looks pretty. That’s about it. 2.5/10