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Lost in Time #1
The Cave Girl
Sitting here on the beach, I could see my now useless glider plane, various bits of driftwood and debris, and a girl with long black hair, about 150 feet away. The girl was new. She hadn’t been there for the past three days the way that everything else had. I was sitting under a tree looking out at the ocean. It was probably the Pacific Ocean. I didn’t know for sure.
When she got closer, she called out, but not loudly. It sounded something like, “Aquilala soma towatsina.”
Or something like that. I didn’t understand a word of it. It was a nice language though. I liked the sound of it. She looked like some kind of cave girl, fur bikini and everything. If she didn’t try to kill me, maybe I’d at least have some company.
This was weird. I was calmly accepting, and maybe actually embracing the idea that I was stranded on the edge of a jungle with no way home. Maybe there was a village with a telephone on the other side of the trees. In a way, I hoped not.
I felt happy to see her, but not exactly excited. It wasn’t like I thought, “Oh my gosh, I’m rescued!” It was more like, “Hey, she’s kind of cute. Nice bikini. Nice tan too.”
When she was about 50 feet away I stood up and stepped onto the sand.
When she got closer, she called out, but not loudly. It sounded something like, “Aquilala soma towatsina.”
Or something like that. I didn’t understand a word of it. It was a nice language though. I liked the sound of it. She looked like some kind of cave girl, fur bikini and everything. If she didn’t try to kill me, maybe I’d at least have some company.
This was weird. I was calmly accepting, and maybe actually embracing the idea that I was stranded on the edge of a jungle with no way home. Maybe there was a village with a telephone on the other side of the trees. In a way, I hoped not.
I felt happy to see her, but not exactly excited. It wasn’t like I thought, “Oh my gosh, I’m rescued!” It was more like, “Hey, she’s kind of cute. Nice bikini. Nice tan too.”
When she was about 50 feet away I stood up and stepped onto the sand.
258 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 13, 2019
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September 18, 2019
I have read every book she has available on Amazon and enjoyed every one of them. This was no exception; loved it, couldn't read it fast enough and now I'm a bit sorry its over.
The story itself in this book is pretty simple. Thats not what draws me in. Its the philosophy, the point of view, the ideas presented. And lots of great sex. A good bonk and a good conversation. Maybe not for everyone but I love it.
This book really affected me for some reason. It's been almost therapuetic.
The story itself in this book is pretty simple. Thats not what draws me in. Its the philosophy, the point of view, the ideas presented. And lots of great sex. A good bonk and a good conversation. Maybe not for everyone but I love it.
This book really affected me for some reason. It's been almost therapuetic.
October 3, 2019
Enjoyable story
A lot of inner reflection but a good story as well. A bit of Socrates Cavern twisted with Land of the Lost. I look forward to the next one.
A lot of inner reflection but a good story as well. A bit of Socrates Cavern twisted with Land of the Lost. I look forward to the next one.
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September 23, 2019Decided not to read further. Didn't like writing style.
November 11, 2021
IQ dropping to primitive Lv
The story is a mess of no explanation on how the MC found him self in a strange world. I came to hate many of his choices like how he sabotage his plane from being found with idiotic reasoning or how he thought getting involved with the natives with no idea if he could’ve spread disease to/or from the native. They’s point show how bad world building destroyed the story progressive building.
There where several Hugh plot holes in the story such has the language bridge the Mc fell off of has I can not see him has a genius or the native to figure out each other languages that fast. An then there was the the explosion of his harem that it killed the story if felt like they where just throwing them selfs at him for the littlest reasons. If you came for a story avoid this if for erotica then skip 80-90 of the story for some cheesy R-rated content.
The story is a mess of no explanation on how the MC found him self in a strange world. I came to hate many of his choices like how he sabotage his plane from being found with idiotic reasoning or how he thought getting involved with the natives with no idea if he could’ve spread disease to/or from the native. They’s point show how bad world building destroyed the story progressive building.
There where several Hugh plot holes in the story such has the language bridge the Mc fell off of has I can not see him has a genius or the native to figure out each other languages that fast. An then there was the the explosion of his harem that it killed the story if felt like they where just throwing them selfs at him for the littlest reasons. If you came for a story avoid this if for erotica then skip 80-90 of the story for some cheesy R-rated content.
November 12, 2020
Another enjoyable tale from the mind of Marilyn Foxworthy
I eagerly await the next volume of this story and several of this authors other series
Particularly Eevona space command and the next volume of the Nogud Legacy as well as the
Honest attractions series
The characters in these stories are engaging and very likeable at least to me and as long as this author
continues writing I will keep reading her stories
I eagerly await the next volume of this story and several of this authors other series
Particularly Eevona space command and the next volume of the Nogud Legacy as well as the
Honest attractions series
The characters in these stories are engaging and very likeable at least to me and as long as this author
continues writing I will keep reading her stories
August 23, 2021
Back to the stone age
Just started reading marilyn foxworthy books and have enjoyed all of them so far. A few editing errors here and there but not enough to detract from the story. Only thing I don’t like about this book is that it is the first one and now I have to wait for the next.
Just started reading marilyn foxworthy books and have enjoyed all of them so far. A few editing errors here and there but not enough to detract from the story. Only thing I don’t like about this book is that it is the first one and now I have to wait for the next.
February 20, 2023
Funtime
Reading this story, and each of your other stories, is a great fun time.
The interaction and chemistry of the characters is not only entertaining but captivating as well.As each one grows, individually, they each grow together.
Marilyn Fox worthy your stories are some of the best I've read, in my 72 years.
Thank you!
Reading this story, and each of your other stories, is a great fun time.
The interaction and chemistry of the characters is not only entertaining but captivating as well.As each one grows, individually, they each grow together.
Marilyn Fox worthy your stories are some of the best I've read, in my 72 years.
Thank you!
October 1, 2021
Surprising, thoughtfully and sexy.
Read this without expectations, prepare to be pleasantly surprised. This is not the story you expect
That comes from living in the moment.
Live for the one, stay for the Four.
Read this without expectations, prepare to be pleasantly surprised. This is not the story you expect
That comes from living in the moment.
Live for the one, stay for the Four.
October 2, 2021
Too wordy
Sooo slow and way too detailed. An editor is very needed to trim this down to size and make it easier to read. Cliche and bad writing abound in this attempt at soft poem sci fi
Sooo slow and way too detailed. An editor is very needed to trim this down to size and make it easier to read. Cliche and bad writing abound in this attempt at soft poem sci fi
November 21, 2021
Great story
I really enjoyed this book. Not your usual read, I thought at first it would be interesting but end up just being about sex. Boy was I wrong. It went in many different directions but was easy to follow. I strongly recommend.
I really enjoyed this book. Not your usual read, I thought at first it would be interesting but end up just being about sex. Boy was I wrong. It went in many different directions but was easy to follow. I strongly recommend.
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April 27, 2022Awesome story
I have enjoyed this new adventure of man that found an island that time has not changed and the people there were from before and some were descend of sailors that wreak there.
I have enjoyed this new adventure of man that found an island that time has not changed and the people there were from before and some were descend of sailors that wreak there.
May 1, 2020
Awesome
Like all of Marilyn's books this was exciting and fun.Already wishing next book was here.Now I have to adventure and start another series😋
Like all of Marilyn's books this was exciting and fun.Already wishing next book was here.Now I have to adventure and start another series😋
October 27, 2021
Outstanding story
Enjoyed reading thus story loved the format and looking forward to book 2. Held my attention through out the book very well written
Enjoyed reading thus story loved the format and looking forward to book 2. Held my attention through out the book very well written
November 17, 2022
Great book
Second time reading this book. Can't wait till next one is out. Suspenseful written. Land that time forgot meets 20th century!
Second time reading this book. Can't wait till next one is out. Suspenseful written. Land that time forgot meets 20th century!
August 12, 2023
storyline
The storyline is fun sometimes hard to read but you get used to it as you read more. Kind of get to know the aspect of cave people. Thanks for writing
The storyline is fun sometimes hard to read but you get used to it as you read more. Kind of get to know the aspect of cave people. Thanks for writing
January 6, 2024
easy love
I really enjoyed this book. The sex was honest and the story honest and possible. The writing was outstanding. Would love to see a book 2. John
I really enjoyed this book. The sex was honest and the story honest and possible. The writing was outstanding. Would love to see a book 2. John
September 20, 2024
fine story a must read
I really enjoy Ms Foxworthy’s work, she makes it interesting. She puts together a great dialogue. Her characters are people we like
I really enjoy Ms Foxworthy’s work, she makes it interesting. She puts together a great dialogue. Her characters are people we like
December 3, 2025
Lost and confused
A man who is initially confused, lost, and alone manages to survive with the help of a native woman. Without her, he would soon have died.
A man who is initially confused, lost, and alone manages to survive with the help of a native woman. Without her, he would soon have died.
January 9, 2020
It has some moments, but just didn't move enough for me.
I've been reading a lot of the author's work recently, I suspect as an escape from the more "serious" stuff I was reading before, and there are elements I like or I wouldn't keep doing it. There were however a couple of the most recent books that I gave up on and they don't show up here so I don't savage them in a review. This phase seems to be coming to an end, as I don't see the story progression I'm expecting after this many related books.
There are obvious character tie-ins happening (expanded in those other non-reviewed books) and this is an interesting world that really needs more emphasis on the tech and the apocalypse. The relationship stuff is well established at this point and can be pushed to the background to build the world (this one and Earth proper) and get more story moving.
I won't give up quite yet, but the next sequel or two will determine if I continue putting my time into the author's books. YMMV as always of course.
I've been reading a lot of the author's work recently, I suspect as an escape from the more "serious" stuff I was reading before, and there are elements I like or I wouldn't keep doing it. There were however a couple of the most recent books that I gave up on and they don't show up here so I don't savage them in a review. This phase seems to be coming to an end, as I don't see the story progression I'm expecting after this many related books.
There are obvious character tie-ins happening (expanded in those other non-reviewed books) and this is an interesting world that really needs more emphasis on the tech and the apocalypse. The relationship stuff is well established at this point and can be pushed to the background to build the world (this one and Earth proper) and get more story moving.
I won't give up quite yet, but the next sequel or two will determine if I continue putting my time into the author's books. YMMV as always of course.
March 25, 2023
What happens if you take a man out of modern civilization and add four beautiful cave girls and a secret history?
Marilyn Foxworthy is one of my favorite authors of steamy adventures. The world building on the island is very well done. The language the islanders speak is a wonderful creation by the author.
A man from our world arrives on a lost primitive island. There he finds real and sexy adventures. Especially when he meets four outcast women. The hairy islanders are the norm. But the hero and his ladies are smooth, just like some mystical elder. Greats stuff!
The main character even finds time to consider who he really is, now that the distractions from the technological modern world has fallen away.
Thanks, Marilyn!
Marilyn Foxworthy is one of my favorite authors of steamy adventures. The world building on the island is very well done. The language the islanders speak is a wonderful creation by the author.
A man from our world arrives on a lost primitive island. There he finds real and sexy adventures. Especially when he meets four outcast women. The hairy islanders are the norm. But the hero and his ladies are smooth, just like some mystical elder. Greats stuff!
The main character even finds time to consider who he really is, now that the distractions from the technological modern world has fallen away.
Thanks, Marilyn!
October 10, 2019
Zugzug?
Ahhh Marilyn! Another wonderful story with adorable ladies and a storyline that is compelling! This new direction allows me to say truthfully that I have been inside Marilyn Foxworthy 's tunnel of love and I am overwhelmed by the things she shared with me there. I KNOW everyone who travels this path will discover what I did it they let themselves. Marilyn, I meant no disrespect, I have the highest regards for you and your amazing magick!
Ahhh Marilyn! Another wonderful story with adorable ladies and a storyline that is compelling! This new direction allows me to say truthfully that I have been inside Marilyn Foxworthy 's tunnel of love and I am overwhelmed by the things she shared with me there. I KNOW everyone who travels this path will discover what I did it they let themselves. Marilyn, I meant no disrespect, I have the highest regards for you and your amazing magick!
September 30, 2019
It is different
It is a fun read. It is different and contains a lot of description. This makes it hard to stay focused
It is a fun read. It is different and contains a lot of description. This makes it hard to stay focused
October 6, 2021
Sorry but this book didn't work for me, too much unhelpful information, the book was also padded .
Shame because I like this author.
Shame because I like this author.
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