I was excited to start this new author, if there is something that I love more than sports romance and/or modern romance, it's a thriller romance. And this book "promised" to deliver. Promised being the operative word here.
Broody ex-military MMC ✔️
Past trauma MFC ✔️
Serial killer on the loose ✔️ ✔️ ✔️
See 👆 all the correct ingredients. Yet the cake came out flat! 🤷♀️
First ☝️, the MFC though a Park Police Officer in possession of black belt in MA 🥷 is fleity, constantly paralysed by panic attacks and faints not once ☝️, not twice ✌️, but three times in the book 🙄
Second✌️, it's insta love/lust and their romance happens in the span of 2 weeks 🥸 💅 🤨
Third 3️⃣, the MMC is a heavy smoker. Instant turn off for me 🤚 (don't judge me)
Fourth 4️⃣, so many plot flaws like 👇
The MFC is lured by blood to go into the woods in the middle of the night. Internal monolgue 👉 "It was precisely the type of situation the killer would use to pull me away. I knew it. My head knew it. but I'm gonna do it anyways cause my heart says so."
Um sorry what?!! And then she faints LOL
Fifth 5️⃣, never in my life have I hated a sleazy side character as much as I hated this one 👇
"She was fun too, opposite of me, horny as heck, and willing to jump on any willing male—or female, depending on her mood. I lived vicariously through her rambunctious dating stories and wild nights."
Just the side character I would love to read about 🙂 ..... NOT!!! 😒
Her eyes scanned over my face, and her lips pursed before she said, “Yeah, I guess. Tell me if he’s hot. If he is, I get dibs, unless you want to join in, which you know I’m down for.”
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Sixth 6️⃣, and the most unforgivable! Her only true friend, and ex military dog, gets shot, he undergoes surgery, and stays for days in the vet clinic, not ONCE does she check on him, picks up a phone to check on him or asks ANYONE to check on him! Immediately FAIL!!!
Seventh 7️⃣, an FBI agent, an ex-military operative, the whole park police division spend weeks reading data, cross referencing information and baby sitting the MFC, there was no on site investigation, no on page suspect and/or witness interviews and no case development! Nada...
And to finish this ranting off, what's with her obsession with animals. She names each one of them in the wilderness AND she cries everytime one of them is hurt AND she would choose a four legged furball anytime over the MMC! Oooookkk
Now that my nightly rambling report is over, I'd say Kennedy Mitchel is no where near Brittney Sahin, Suzanne Brockmann or Susan Stoker. And sadly, I'm gonna need to have this as a one and done experience with this author.