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Taking Down Herobrine: An Unofficial Minecraft Adventure
Mike, Oak, and Jack are villagers. One day, a school is made because Herobrine is destroying villages around their village. The three must stand up against him, and prove that villagers can become warriors, or else the world could be doomed forever.
83 pages, Kindle Edition
Published February 21, 2020
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Brandon Safiran
12 books10 followersMy name's Brandon, and I write Minecraft mysteries, stories, and other exciting short books for kids to read. In my free time, I shoot hoops, play Minecraft, and write books.
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FORGOTTEN VILLAGE SERIES BOOK 2 JUST RELEASED! https://www.amazon.com/Forgotten-Peop...
CURRENTLY WRITING:
"The Forgotten Village Series" Book 3.
The first book is out here: https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B09...
Check out my author page on amazon: https://www.amazon.com/Brandon-Safira...
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May 18, 2021
Work on the speed
A little too fast. A way to help with this is if you describe every scene instead of just saying "Herobrine started attacking him."
Say "Herobrine dashed from the other side of the battle and clashed swords with him." Or something like that. Just try and describe scenes better. I didn't even know where they were battling Herobrine. And try not to be too specific with the numbers, as it can be a bit repetitive. Like, instead of saying "There were over a 1000 zombies." Say something more like "There were a countless amount of zombies."
Anyway, that's most of my advice, and I'm pretty tired. It's like 1:30 am right now sooo
Bai
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*Random puppy fart*
A little too fast. A way to help with this is if you describe every scene instead of just saying "Herobrine started attacking him."
Say "Herobrine dashed from the other side of the battle and clashed swords with him." Or something like that. Just try and describe scenes better. I didn't even know where they were battling Herobrine. And try not to be too specific with the numbers, as it can be a bit repetitive. Like, instead of saying "There were over a 1000 zombies." Say something more like "There were a countless amount of zombies."
Anyway, that's most of my advice, and I'm pretty tired. It's like 1:30 am right now sooo
Bai
:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
*Random puppy fart*
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