Goodreads, PLEASE let us have half stars. It’s books like this that make it hard to figure out whether to round up or down.
[REVIEW]
DISCLAIMER: When writing a negative review, it is never my intention to sound like I don’t think ANYONE should read a book I rated one or two stars. If I discouraged you, I might be taking away your chance from discovering your newest favorite book. Therefore, please don’t let my review TOTALLY deter you from reading Rogue Princess. This is simply collection of my thoughts and opinions on the book. This is me saying, “I didn’t like Rogue Princess and here’s why.” I’m not saying, “I didn’t like Rogue Princess, and here’s why you shouldn’t like it/read it.”
(I am aware some people need to see others’ thoughts and opinions to help them to decide whether or not to buy/read a book. If this review does help you, and that’s what you needed, that’s fine! However, don’t just take my word for it. Look at what others are saying, and decide from there.)
*Trigger/content warnings in this book for kidnapping and talk of an arranged marriage*
If you know me, you know that I’m TRASH for Cinderella retellings. Call me basic, but if I see the word “Cinderella” on the blurb, I’m picking the book up. I was especially intrigued by this one because I heard that a gender-swapped retelling—AND it gave me low-key Lunar Chronicles vibes. Therefore, I went into this EXPECTING to love it.
Unfortunately, I did not enjoy this very much. For one, the pacing was all over the place. One moment the characters were running for their lives, and the next they were chilling. For another, the romance got VERY aggravating to read about at times. This was NOT enemies to lovers, folks. Don’t let anyone tell you otherwise. Anyways, the more I read of this, the more I thought I was going to hate this.
BUT THEN, a plot twist was revealed somewhere in the last ~30% of this. This plot twist entirely changed my thoughts on things I’d been frustrated about beforehand. Was the plot twist developed to its full potential? No, and I really think that this whole book should’ve been lengthened and polished more. But that plot twist DID get me. And that’s the main reason I’ve been going back and forth between rating this two or three stars.
Anyways, let’s get into the specifics! Maybe that’ll help me figure out what to rate this.
MY THOUGHTS ON…
WHAT I LIKED:
•Aidan and Delia did have some good banter! I especially loved it near the beginning, it reminded me of Aladdin and Jasmine’s in Disney’s Aladdin. It wasn’t enough for me to be like, “Oh my gosh, PLEASE get together, I can’t get enough of you two!!!” But it did make me laugh a few times.
•I knew this was going to be a Cinderella retelling, but I also picked up on some Rapunzel elements when Delia mentioned having long hair and feeling trapped in the castle. My favorite type of retellings are when fairy tales/fairy tale characters come together (i.e. The Lunar Chronicles and The Sisters Grimm), so that was a pleasant surprise!
•My favorite character was Delia’s sister Shania. She made me chuckle anytime she talked about the suitors with Delia, or when she teased Delia about crushing on Aidan. I also loved when she comforted Delia after Aidan rejected the proposal and ran off. She was such a good sister!
•Like I said earlier, the plot twist did shock THE HECK out of me. Aidan actually being an AI and being used by the Resistance??? Suddenly, certain choices he’d made beforehand that had either confused and/or frustrated me made PERFECT sense. Also, this reveal made me EVEN MORE worried when his stepfamily told him to kill Delia at the ball (while also making sure he wouldn’t remember why he was going to the ball in the first place). Like I said earlier, I do think the plot twist could’ve been fleshed out just a little more. But that was still a dam good plot twist.
MY CRITIQUES:
•I do think the story started too late. Which is odd for me to critique, because my usual complaint is that a story opened up too early. When it came to Rogue Princess, though, the main characters met within the first two chapters, and suddenly we were thrusted into action. We didn’t get a glimpse of Aidan’s life with his stepfamily until Chapter 8, nor did we learn much about Delia other than she was reluctant to get married. I think we needed a few more chapters before Aidan and Delia met so we can get to know the characters and get settled into the world more.
•This needed SO MUCH more world-building. I wanted to see more of the place Aidan lived, to see more of what the average citizen’s life was like. I wanted to understand WHY the citizens were getting restless. SHOW us, don’t just tell.
Additionally, Delia’s suitors were from vastly different planets. I didn’t expect to travel to each one, but I DID want to know more about the histories and relationships between Delia’s and her suitors’ planets. I wanted to see why it was so hard for Delia to choose for political purposes, all while falling in love with someone who was NOT one of the suitors on top of that.
•Most, if not all, of the side characters were one-dimensional. I couldn’t tell you the name of any of Delia’s advisors or servants. I didn’t care about any of Delia’s suitors, not even Felix, even after he was revealed to be a bad guy. Aidan’s stepfamily was part of the Resistance, but then had a sudden change of heart, and we really didn’t get to spend time with them to figure out why. Also, there was a lot of unrest, so why wasn’t Delia’s mother, the queen, more concerned about it? Even if she wasn’t, WHY NOT? There was so much potential to give depth to all of these characters, but unfortunately, that didn’t happen.
•Aidan’s stepfather, A VILLAIN, was depicted as fat. For the love of Pete, can we STOP having the only fat characters in books be villains? Fat people have voiced countless times about how hurtful the evil, greedy fat character trope is. Fat characters deserve be properly and positively represented. Do better, authors.
•Aidan and Delia were supposed to go from enemies to lovers, but they were hardly enemies before they were thinking, “Wait, you’re not so bad, maybe I DO like you.” No no no no NO. Give me ENEMIES to lovers, not enemiestolovers. Like I said, Aidan and Delia’s banter when they were falling in love was good—I have no doubt that the banter would’ve been just as good if they’d been enemies for a little while longer.
•Going off of that, Delia proposed to Aidan within less than A MONTH of knowing him. I know they couldn’t have more time together because the Resistance was using Aidan, and needed to rebel as soon as possible. But a PROPOSAL?! There could’ve been another way for Aidan and Delia to have a fallout before the big reveal.
•The climax and ending was WAY too rush. Within one chapter, Felix was defeated, Aidan found out he could actually live a full life, and everyone was living happily ever after. The last chapter was Aidan telling Delia that they can’t produce an heir, Delia saying she was fine with that, and then that was it. Like, okay, it’s good that you’re both fine with not having children. But how are you going to figure out who’s next in line after you die? And why end the book there??? It was just so random???
FINAL THOUGHTS:
After writing this review, I’ve come to the conclusion to rate this two stars. I really hate saying that, because I REALLY thought I was going to enjoy this. Unfortunately, I just feel like everything needed to be developed A LOT more.
I’m not sure if and who I’d recommend this to. Maybe if you’re looking for a sci-fi novel that’s not TOO HEAVY on the world-building, you might enjoy this. If you’re trash for Cinderella retellings as much as I am, you could try this, but maybe just don’t be like me and go in with HIGH expectations.