Cute, but a bit empty.
I like Akiteru, but he’s a bit too omniscient to be believable.
Iroha is cute, but her flirting act is more desperate than annoying. I hope she grows out of it.
Mashiro is convenient for the plot, and checks off some fannish boxes, too: ☑ Tsundere
Ozuma doesn’t feel fleshed out as a character. What exactly is his personality? It seems to change.
Sumire. She is the most unrealistic character of all. She is borderline funny, with one foot well over the line. I expect her to get arrested and fired any minute now.
You might get the feeling that I didn’t like the book, but I read it from beginning to end without a gun to my head. I enjoyed it. I imagine that is why the parts that I didn’t like stood out so much. It was a good book, but also a bit predictable, and the plot events felt convenient, not organic. The plot felt more real to me than the characters did, so I hope that’s fixed in the next novel.
My favorite part of the book was the afterword where the author revealed the conversation with her editor that was the origin of this novel. Very insightful. Pulled the curtain back a bit on the light novel business.
Lastly, the uncle needs to be strapped to a rocket and fired off towards the sun. That is all.