I'm a sucker for a piratey-feeling book, and this hit that spot fairly well. I wish there had been more time spent on ships and sailing, but the overland adventure was also interesting and well structured.
My chief complaint was that for female and male leads who were 25 and 28 respectively, they sure acted like they were barely 15 years old. I'm betting that in an earlier draft, they were intended to be teenagers but that the author decided to age them up (so that certain plot points didn't feel so icky because they were children) and then didn't consider reviewing the characters' dialogue or actions to make sure they were consistent with the change.
There were some continuity errors. For example, at different points, it was said that Fina Perona's family had 7 sons, that they had 7 total children, that Fina had all brothers, and that she had an older sister who was married with children. This was especially confusing in the older chapters when Fina was thinking about her family often and reliving memories with them.
On the topic of Fina's family, her trauma with them (her way of taking all the responsibility and assuming that everyone blamed her, that things were in fact her fault, and that her own family would be glad if she never came back) was very unique. It was so raw and real, and I felt so strongly sympathetic for Fina in those moments.
The settings were well described and vivid. I appreciated how well I could paint a picture in my head. However, the cities were all thinly veiled copies of existing locations in the Mediterranean (e.g. Venez was obviously Venice, etc.). The similarities to real-world or historical places were so blatant that it made me frustrated the author didn't try to come up with more original ideas. I don't think the homage of this book's settings to existing places worked for me.
In a similar vein, the main character at one point mentions and tells the story of a myth in the world, and it is so clearly the myth of Orion and Artemis just with different names. I see that as a missed opportunity to write something original.
The love story was interesting. The chemistry wasn't really there, but I enjoyed seeing both characters' perspectives. I liked Antonio's better; his inner turmoil was intriguing, and even though his perspective was only shown in snippets before every other chapter, I could see his development in the log entries. I loved that. Fina was very annoying; she was always pushing Antonio away so she wouldn't hurt him, repeating in her head the exact same explanation/dialogue every time, so that got old fast. Also, she suffered from extreme "Hot Girl" syndrome—every single male character (not in her family) at one point or another commented on her figure, lusted after her, or joked/talked about wanting to be with her. I really dislike a main female lead who has a core tenet of being so attractive that she can't talk to 90% of the other characters (because most characters in this book were men) without being sexually harassed. There was a clever moment where Fina weaponized her curse against someone who treated her this way, but other than that, I couldn't get behind her unbelievable desirability.
All in all, an interesting read. Not sure yet whether I will continue reading the rest of the series. I definitely thought this was a standalone novel at first.