Scott R. Jones has written a stand-alone novel, one with a meticulously crafted setting and flowing, seemingly-effortless dialogue that combine to create an immersive experience, once which drew me into the world of Den and Makarios, the skin of the Stonefish, and held me there—holds me there, still. It is rare, when I encounter a story that affects my thinking so profoundly that I find my thoughts wandering back to it days later, unable to move on to another book, to complete mundane daily tasks, without straying back to the deep psychological gutting, the wounds still leaking fresh trauma, and tracing that puckered flesh with fond remembrance.
The setting of Stonefish captured me immediately, with a level of detail and precision that I would expect from a naturalist. I live on the coast of northern California, surrounded by towering forests of redwood and sequoia, with the town of Willow Creek (known for its devotion to the local legend of Bigfoot) only an hour inland. I was transported in time to a very believable future, in which the planet’s decline has resulted in rising tides and thinning of the forests, with fungi heavily populating the dying trees and the more resilient, prehistoric ferns persisting, as the heat drives more fragile organisms to extinction. Jones’ imagery is breath-taking at times, futuristic architecture overgrown with mosses and lichen, manufactured totems posing as original historical objects, the mimicry of wood indetectable to someone like Den, whose previous exposure to the natural world is all but non-existent in a modern age of technological immersion. Jones’ attention to detail is crucial to contructing a world which is, in itself, a simulation, assembling the setting piece by piece so that, when the blindfold is finally removed, the effect of everything falling to pieces is that much more destabilizing.
The characters of “Stonefish” also possess a multi-layered depth, whether they are central or minor characters. Jones has a special talent for names that stick. Makarios? Excellent. The man is in his sixties, physically fit, and charismatic. The descriptions of his constant hand movements and air quotes bring the personality of Makarios to life, as does the repeated reference to objects, media, or sayings that “date” the man and emphasize the generation gap between Makarios and the much-younger Den, who is often left scratching his head in confusion. As a character, Makarios is intense, complex, intelligent, and broken. He possesses a sense of humor that frequently caught me by surprise, but this lapses with melancholy and exhaustion, the end result being an emotionally erratic man existing with a crushing knowledge of reality. Makarios is also a victim of torture at the hands of the Archons, a form of torture which I found both unexpected and uniquely heart-wrenching. He is courageous, beyond comprehension. And always, through the many enlightening moments that Gregor Makarios shares with the Den, the man is sorry. I would read this book again, if only to spend more time with Gregor Makarios.
Den is also a very well-written, developed character, occupying the dubious middle ground between disbelief and conviction. He serves as an excellent foil for Makarios’ character, and his constant questioning and responses to the truths unraveling around him guide the story’s progress. I was very impressed by how seamlessly Den’s narrative carried me through the gaps in time between present and past. His inserted commentary never felt forced, as though something needed to be explained. Rather, it contributed to the overall presentation of his character as a reporter, his ultimate goal to convey his experiences in a concise, understandable package to anyone who might read the fruit of his labors. I pitied Den. The process through which Jones uses Makarios and the Archons to enlighten Den is a painful one, and in the end, I wasn’t sure what fate I wished upon Den—what would be a more merciful outcome.
Li’l Dougie. If you had asked me a week ago if I’d ever form an attachment to a chronic masturbator, I’d have laughed you off. Now, I’d probably shed a tear. He will never stop jerking it. Bichael—the guy who always looks the same every time you see him, always on a bike, always going somewhere, never stopping. The Archons, with names like “Mandibole”, “Babayoko”, and “Ol’ Dirty Bastard”. Charlie Mack, with her intelligence and spunk, reclaiming lost languages and visiting with the ghosts of her ancestors. Each character, however briefly mentioned, leaves a lasting impression.
The horror. Jones allows it to creep steadily into the plot from the beginning, an unsettling paranoia that builds throughout the story. Black-eyed, sharp-toothed landotters, massive, elusive sasquatch, flesh-manipulating Archons—a parade of creatures walking the fine line between legend and reality, between reality and the “outside”. When the real horror begins, it is unrelenting. Jones writes gore with the twisted expertise of authors like Nick Cutter and Nathan Ballingrud. I could see it, feel it, sink my hands into the pulsing, pulpy mess and withdraw them, red and glistening. If a perfect blend of shit, blood, and adrenaline exists, Jones has tapped that source. On the heels of that gore comes a sensory deprivation that is equally terrifying. Everything is stripped away. Read this book. Try to walk away unchanged. It’s a powerful venom, and the sting is deep.