Marked as "Did Not Finish".
This may be an amazing book, some of the reviews are raving about the story content. But, as for me, I can't get past the typos. The glaringly obvious typos.
Page 9 (which is actually the second or third page of the book) The censorship was not in the book, that is put there by me.
"I’m going to drag her back here and
f*****! end her for daring to leave. I f*****! warmed her! I take a deep
breath to try and clam myself some. "
So..... he "warmed her" and he needs to "clam" himself some.
Page 11 is where I stopped.
"While lost in my thoughts, I’ve forgotten to pay
attention to the road, and when I look up there is a damn dear smashing
through my windshield! I slam on the brakes but the impact makes me jerk
the wheel, and I end up in a ditch with my tires stuck and a fucking dead
deer laying half inside my SUV. FML, I don’t even know where I’m at. I
reach over and grab my cell phone out of the center console.
“ARE YOU FUCKING KIDDING ME?” I scream. My phone has no
signal! None. I’ve got to be cursed or something. Looks like I’m walking;
I hope there is a gas station or house not too far from here.
Finally, after what feels like three hours, I make it to a gas station.
There is a cute little bookstore and café combo next to it. Oh, I’m
checking that out before I leave."
So...while lost in thought, while driving, there is a damn "dear" smashing through her windshield. Yep, totally. There is a dead deer lying half inside the SUV, FML, I don't even know where I am at.
I found this book very....simplistic. I'm not sure if that is the correct word. It seems like it is written how the author feels that people think. But, a story isn't necessarily meant to be written as an inner dialogue. It also comes across as very juvenile. I don't know where I'm at, FML....and the fact that there are a heck of a lot of F bombs......
This book may get better and be an amazing read but I won't find out because I am shelving it at page 11.