Teenage Angst Romance Story featuring Adults
So Discount Alex was pretty cocky, brash , entitled and whiny. Jesse was the one to agree to go on the mission and follow orders but then throws hissy fits every time the Commandant gave him orders, calling rude and making her apologize. Does he not realize he's the one freaking asking for help and for them to risk their lives for strangers and yet acts entitled?
They don't NEED the star map, it's just a faster way to find their goal, but they can easily just keep checking local stars until they find another race and dome to get a star map. No they chose to risk lives and help these people and yet they are treated like it's expected of them and that the Expedition should treat them as if they are doing the favor for them, not the other way around.
What also is with Jucha always making his female characters weak willed women? Like every time he has a strong female character, she gets all weak and follow the command of the first guy to pay them a compliment. In the main characters all the females become supporting characters for Alex who opinions don't matter because he always follows his own gut, even his mate doesn't really get a say and depends on him. Here thought you'd have a strong female leader but the instant a boy gets mad at her, she starts apologize for giving him orders even though shes in command and starts to follow his lead instead.
If the natives are so great that they follow their lead, why is the expedition even needed? There was no reason for them to risk their lives for the first dome. They literally only did two things the natives couldn't do, shoot down the engines of the shuttle and take them to the dome fast. A taxi service really. They could have loaded up on natives and set them in waves of hundreds to the dome to take it, not risked their own lives. They did but still great treated like it was no big deal. Because they got a 'staaaar map' which they could have literally gotten from any other nearby system after a month or two of searching.
So you got this discount Alex acting all entitled and telling others what to do while being all 'protective' of women not letting them into danger even though this is a fight with guns and has nothing to do with physical strength, so literally the women are just as capable as him and comes off as sexist, not gentleman.
Also the Security commander first sounds super well trained and confidence, then the minute Jesse is in command he starts acting like a new recruit all shaken and not sure what to do , asking stupid questions and making horrible choices. 'Should we clear every room down here?' What the hell is this commander some green meridian recruit? Yes you should clear every room where alien insects were hiding...do you even know how to shoot!?! The switches in their personalities and abilities is mind blowingly bad.
Next, these people knows the Colony is taking over domes and chasing them but they have no guards on at times and no fail safes? If you know you might have to run, why don't you have bombs set up in these domes so when you abandon them that they will blow up after and close the way to chase you back to your homeworld. SIMPLE precautions? The Colony can remote access? Why aren't they sending in bombs to the Domes to kill people through the teleporter then? Or get on it in a large shielded turtle dome to hold off shots then charge out of it. There are so many ways to attack a platform that is just ignored.
Honestly this books scheme makes little sense, the characters are flat and seem poor copies of other characters and it feels cheap.
What would Alex do? Well he wouldn't let people shoot the incapacitated sentient creatures who are stunned thats for sure. Like they let happen. Alex freaking let a genocidal AI that killed multiple species live, he certainly wouldn't let people shoot stunned insects sentients. These people are not Omnians
Not that I agree with Alex, I'd totally say kill them all just like I think Artifice deserved death but it's not true to the characters personality or their culture.