Cliffhanger
I wish I had paid better attention and seen this was a 2-parter. I wouldn't have wasted my time.
Aside from the abrupt ending and no set time to expect the next book, reading this was a chore.
1. Pedantic, unnatural dialogue. The lack of contractions made me wonder if the writer wasn't a native speaker of English, and I was shocked to discover the writer is American.
2. Too. Many. Characters. Way too many to keep track and all so one-dimensional it was too difficult to try.
3. Poor character development. The leads, Gabby/Brie and Christoff 'Cross', are bland and lack defined personalities, particularly Cross. Gabby is marginally better defined if only to show she is childish, spoilt and prone to foolish decisions.
4. No chemistry. Like, none. Cross, nearly a decade older, feels like a big brother to Gabby and aside from a moment here and there, that's how he treats her. They aren't even together through 90% of this book and share very few scenes. And because of the void where chemistry should be, the sex bits were uncomfortable and kind of...yucky.
5. Too many WTF moments. This book was a mashup of really annoying tropes and the plot was all over the place. I didn't even know this was a mafia story until the last couple chapters. Until then it was sort of a jumble of suspense/N/A/coming of age/forbidden-unrequited love. But it was all poorly executed, particularly the foundation and reason for the title.
If a person is trying to make a clean break from their 'old life' and make a fresh start, then that means they should be ALL IN. If they are related to people who can track them thru their phones, it's probably not a good idea that one of their family members KNOW WHERE THEY ARE. If a person is turning their back on their family by escaping in the dark of night, it defeats the purpose if they are in regular contact with that family member. It is also rather pointless to be so worried that your old life will find you if you tell the people you are leaving behind what you are doing - and why. As such, there is no reason to change your name unless, of course, it is a contrivance of a wee girl having a temper tantrum.
Unfortunately, the name change is a contrivance, full-stop, to attempt to lend credence to a misleading blurb.
Perhaps 80% in, there is a scene where Gabby...or Brie...reacts like she is in imminent danger - but would it not make more sense if that danger were related to the 'situation' she'd run from rather than something unrelated? Dante had NOTHING to do with her family. He had everything to do with her possibly being a tad TSTL. Because really, who gets involved with someone they admit makes their skin crawl and expects it to end well?
'Contrived' should be this book's title, because that's what it is. A load of contrived drama thrown willy-nilly on the pages through flashbacks, internal dialogues and large time jumps where helpful information is skimmed over or skipped entirely.
To be somewhat fair, there are hints of something solid here to build a story upon, but sooo much more work needed to be done before hitting the old 'publish' button. Constructing character outlines, for instance. A plot outline or specific bullet-points to trim the excess. I get it that stories often have sub-plots, but this is not a story that benefits from them. This story needed to stay tightly focused and include only a handful of players. But the point here was indistinct and a committment to what it was (might be) about came far too late to get me invested. In addition, there were over a dozen characters to keep straight that I really didn't care about at all.
All in all, confusing, boring and MC's with which I felt no connection. Oh, and a stupid cliffy.
I do hope the writer takes her time with the sequel and cleans her story up a bit for those interested in continuing. However, I won't be reading part 2. If a book isn't fully available to me at the time I read it, I won't choose it and doing so this time was an oversight on my part. The reason I don't wait for sequels is I lose interest - even with a good book. For one I really didn't enjoy it should be obvious I'm not going to be invested in a continuation that could be months away.
Read at your own risk.