What do you think?
Rate this book
Sheever's Journal, Diary of a Poison Master
Synopsis:
For five years Me’acca Mysuth Sheever has lived among his “sworn enemies,” pretending to be one of them. One night he buys a journal, its pages blank. The woman who sells him the journal extracts his promise to record his deeds for study. “Lo, the steps of your life mark the journey of your soul.” To expose his prior life, however, would be akin to suicide, for Sheever is a man brimming with secrets.
He begins the journal cautiously, describing the area where he works as a cook, and the people he’s forced to endure. Hints of his past emerge as he also records day-to-day events. As the journal evolves, he finds himself more entangled than he ever wanted to be in the lives around him, and more sympathetic to people he wanted to hate.
Memories haunt him, and he struggles to maintain a grip on his sanity as he prays for – and fears – the signal that his years in exile have ended and he can return home.
This then is Sheever’s Journal, Diary of a Poison Master.
About the Author:
K. Ritz lives with her husband in a small town in Massachusetts. This is her first book in a series about a world of shadows.
For five years Me’acca Mysuth Sheever has lived among his “sworn enemies,” pretending to be one of them. One night he buys a journal, its pages blank. The woman who sells him the journal extracts his promise to record his deeds for study. “Lo, the steps of your life mark the journey of your soul.” To expose his prior life, however, would be akin to suicide, for Sheever is a man brimming with secrets.
He begins the journal cautiously, describing the area where he works as a cook, and the people he’s forced to endure. Hints of his past emerge as he also records day-to-day events. As the journal evolves, he finds himself more entangled than he ever wanted to be in the lives around him, and more sympathetic to people he wanted to hate.
Memories haunt him, and he struggles to maintain a grip on his sanity as he prays for – and fears – the signal that his years in exile have ended and he can return home.
This then is Sheever’s Journal, Diary of a Poison Master.
About the Author:
K. Ritz lives with her husband in a small town in Massachusetts. This is her first book in a series about a world of shadows.
410 pages, Paperback
First published January 1, 2019
50 people are currently reading
50361 people want to read
About the author
K. Ritz
1 book7,377 followersK. Ritz lives with her husband in a small town in Massachusetts. This is her first book in a series about a world of shadows.
Ratings & Reviews
Friends & Following
Create a free account to discover what your friends think of this book!
Community Reviews
Displaying 1 - 30 of 95 reviews
October 22, 2024
I haven't really liked any straight up fantasy books (as opposed to fantasy horror or historical fantasy) in a few years. They just didn't vibe for me. I'm so glad I read this one, so glad it was published, because it's what I've been waiting for: someone using fantasy as an excuse to do an anthropological deep dive on a culture they made up, but without getting self-consciously pretentious about it like most Le Guin descendants tend to. Essentially, I applaud K. Ritz for having the determination to write something that is kind of unmarketable, and having read it, it's more than understandable to me why it came through a vanity publishing micropress.
To be clear, this book is great. I think it's amazing. I loved it. But I can readily admit it's not for everyone, and the necessities of its shape and style mean it loses the easy audience a more conventional novel would have. I'm not saying it's too deep for normies to understand-- much the opposite, in fact. This book is fantasy, but it's not epic fantasy about world changing events, so it loses the Sandersonian crowd; there are stakes, but no battles and all the sex and violence is off screen, so it loses the ASOIAF crowd; it's fantasy about small events and bucolic experiences, but some very not cozy things happen in it, so it loses the Legends & Lattes crowd; it's got incredibly intricate aspirations in its construction, theme, and pacing, but it's written with very accessible and at times simplistic prose, so it's going to lose out on the literary fantasy crowd.
To be clear, of it changed any one of these things, it would fail to achieve its goals, but in doing so it makes itself very difficult to find a ready-made audience. I firmly believe if this was published ~20 years ago, it would have made a huge splash, but in the current landscape of over-genrefied marketing, it doesn't fit easily into a prescribed box.
What the fuck am I talking about?
Sheever's Journal is the journal about a man named Sheever, who is a poisoner, and it details a huge chunk of his life as he works in the kitchens of a noble house in a fantasy land of the author's creation. You would think this means it's a book about court politics and intrigue. It's not. It's about being Sheever, and what that means to Sheever, written as though it was a normal human's journal. I've read diary-fiction, and most of them cut corners with the diaryness to make themselves more literary; nobody has that good a memory, and almost nobody would write novelesque prose in their diary, but we expect it because we all know it's a novel and this is what we want to read, in the same way that even the most 'grounded' movies still star the world's most beautiful people. K. Ritz has no interest in this. Her novel refuses to ever forget that it's Sheever's Journal-- sentences are simple and short, written quickly, several scenes don't make sense, and things are frequently unexplained. The political situation of the world Sheever inhabits is extremely multilayered and complex, and you're not supposed to understand all of it-- if someone from another world read your journal, would they know the difference between Christianity, Christ, a Christian, and Christina Aguilera? In this book, you'll meet Dyns, Drays, and a man called Dyn; good luck keeping them straight. In the end, you don't really need to. It's supposed to be confusing. Indeed, multiple questions the novel asks, mysteries the characters entertain, are unresolved. These things are never revealed, either because Sheever doesn't know, because he already knows, or because it will be covered in the next book.
And that's what makes it great, for me. It's a book that's unflinchingly itself, and damn the consequences. It's also frequently heartbreaking and deeply evocative; some scenes in this book are going to be tattooed on my memory for years to come.
If any of this sounds remotely interesting to you, don't walk but run to read this novel. But if it sounds like it's not for you, don't force it. This book exists for itself, and in a world with an eternally shrinking quantity of midlist authors-- especially in genre fiction-- I think that's a fantastic accomplishment.
To be clear, this book is great. I think it's amazing. I loved it. But I can readily admit it's not for everyone, and the necessities of its shape and style mean it loses the easy audience a more conventional novel would have. I'm not saying it's too deep for normies to understand-- much the opposite, in fact. This book is fantasy, but it's not epic fantasy about world changing events, so it loses the Sandersonian crowd; there are stakes, but no battles and all the sex and violence is off screen, so it loses the ASOIAF crowd; it's fantasy about small events and bucolic experiences, but some very not cozy things happen in it, so it loses the Legends & Lattes crowd; it's got incredibly intricate aspirations in its construction, theme, and pacing, but it's written with very accessible and at times simplistic prose, so it's going to lose out on the literary fantasy crowd.
To be clear, of it changed any one of these things, it would fail to achieve its goals, but in doing so it makes itself very difficult to find a ready-made audience. I firmly believe if this was published ~20 years ago, it would have made a huge splash, but in the current landscape of over-genrefied marketing, it doesn't fit easily into a prescribed box.
What the fuck am I talking about?
Sheever's Journal is the journal about a man named Sheever, who is a poisoner, and it details a huge chunk of his life as he works in the kitchens of a noble house in a fantasy land of the author's creation. You would think this means it's a book about court politics and intrigue. It's not. It's about being Sheever, and what that means to Sheever, written as though it was a normal human's journal. I've read diary-fiction, and most of them cut corners with the diaryness to make themselves more literary; nobody has that good a memory, and almost nobody would write novelesque prose in their diary, but we expect it because we all know it's a novel and this is what we want to read, in the same way that even the most 'grounded' movies still star the world's most beautiful people. K. Ritz has no interest in this. Her novel refuses to ever forget that it's Sheever's Journal-- sentences are simple and short, written quickly, several scenes don't make sense, and things are frequently unexplained. The political situation of the world Sheever inhabits is extremely multilayered and complex, and you're not supposed to understand all of it-- if someone from another world read your journal, would they know the difference between Christianity, Christ, a Christian, and Christina Aguilera? In this book, you'll meet Dyns, Drays, and a man called Dyn; good luck keeping them straight. In the end, you don't really need to. It's supposed to be confusing. Indeed, multiple questions the novel asks, mysteries the characters entertain, are unresolved. These things are never revealed, either because Sheever doesn't know, because he already knows, or because it will be covered in the next book.
And that's what makes it great, for me. It's a book that's unflinchingly itself, and damn the consequences. It's also frequently heartbreaking and deeply evocative; some scenes in this book are going to be tattooed on my memory for years to come.
If any of this sounds remotely interesting to you, don't walk but run to read this novel. But if it sounds like it's not for you, don't force it. This book exists for itself, and in a world with an eternally shrinking quantity of midlist authors-- especially in genre fiction-- I think that's a fantastic accomplishment.
July 17, 2024
K. Ritz’s debut novel, "Sheever's Journal, Diary of a Poison Master," introduces readers to the richly textured and morally complex world of Me’acca Mysuth Sheever. A nuanced character study wrapped in the trappings of a fantasy thriller, this novel explores themes of identity, secrecy, and redemption with both depth and nuance.
Set in the year 516 post Cyntic War, Sheever, a former predator now living in exile, masquerades as a cook in the kitchens of High Lord Fesha Trivak. This dual life is meticulously documented in a journal he purchases from a mysterious woman, who urges him to record his deeds for study. The journal becomes a confessional space where Sheever's guarded past and evolving present intertwine.
Ritz’s narrative is compelling not only for its intricate plot but also for its operatic language, which seduces the reader from the opening lines. The author masterfully constructs a world that feels both exotic and grounded, filled with political intrigue and personal vendettas. The narrative voice is distinct, capturing Sheever's transformation from a bitter man living among enemies to someone who begins to question his own prejudices and actions.
The novel’s strength lies in its ability to balance detailed world-building with deep character development. Sheever's interactions with the people around him, particularly as he becomes more entangled in their lives, reveal his internal struggles and gradual shift in perspective. His relationship with a widow and her family adds an emotional layer to the story, highlighting his journey from isolation to reluctant involvement.
However, Ritz does not shy away from the darker aspects of Sheever’s past. The memories that haunt him and his constant battle to maintain his sanity add a psychological depth to the narrative, making it not just a fantasy adventure but a profound exploration of a man's fight for redemption.
The secondary characters, from the high lord he serves to the enigmatic woman who sells him the journal, are well-developed and contribute significantly to the narrative’s richness. Each interaction Sheever has is charged with tension and potential revelation, keeping the reader engaged and invested in his fate.
Ritz’s debut is notable for its ability to blend fantasy with a keen psychological insight. The journal format allows for a deep dive into Sheever’s psyche, making his journey one that is as introspective as it is action-packed. The language is lush and evocative, the plot intricate yet accessible, ensuring that the novel appeals to a broad audience.
In conclusion, "Sheever's Journal, Diary of a Poison Master" is a triumph of fantasy storytelling that also raises pertinent questions about identity, morality, and redemption. K. Ritz has crafted a narrative that is both immersive and thought-provoking, marking a promising start to a new series set in a world of shadows.
Set in the year 516 post Cyntic War, Sheever, a former predator now living in exile, masquerades as a cook in the kitchens of High Lord Fesha Trivak. This dual life is meticulously documented in a journal he purchases from a mysterious woman, who urges him to record his deeds for study. The journal becomes a confessional space where Sheever's guarded past and evolving present intertwine.
Ritz’s narrative is compelling not only for its intricate plot but also for its operatic language, which seduces the reader from the opening lines. The author masterfully constructs a world that feels both exotic and grounded, filled with political intrigue and personal vendettas. The narrative voice is distinct, capturing Sheever's transformation from a bitter man living among enemies to someone who begins to question his own prejudices and actions.
The novel’s strength lies in its ability to balance detailed world-building with deep character development. Sheever's interactions with the people around him, particularly as he becomes more entangled in their lives, reveal his internal struggles and gradual shift in perspective. His relationship with a widow and her family adds an emotional layer to the story, highlighting his journey from isolation to reluctant involvement.
However, Ritz does not shy away from the darker aspects of Sheever’s past. The memories that haunt him and his constant battle to maintain his sanity add a psychological depth to the narrative, making it not just a fantasy adventure but a profound exploration of a man's fight for redemption.
The secondary characters, from the high lord he serves to the enigmatic woman who sells him the journal, are well-developed and contribute significantly to the narrative’s richness. Each interaction Sheever has is charged with tension and potential revelation, keeping the reader engaged and invested in his fate.
Ritz’s debut is notable for its ability to blend fantasy with a keen psychological insight. The journal format allows for a deep dive into Sheever’s psyche, making his journey one that is as introspective as it is action-packed. The language is lush and evocative, the plot intricate yet accessible, ensuring that the novel appeals to a broad audience.
In conclusion, "Sheever's Journal, Diary of a Poison Master" is a triumph of fantasy storytelling that also raises pertinent questions about identity, morality, and redemption. K. Ritz has crafted a narrative that is both immersive and thought-provoking, marking a promising start to a new series set in a world of shadows.
February 8, 2024
Just finished "Sheever's Journal, Diary of a Poison Master" by K. Ritz and oh, where to start? Imagine finding a book that's part memoir, part fantasy, and fully impossible to put down. That's this book.
The book follows Me’acca Mysuth Sheever, who's basically living undercover among people he'd rather not be, which is already a situation ripe with tension. He buys a blank journal on a whim (or destiny, if you're into that sort of thing), and the seller hits him with a line that's something like, "Your life's journey marks the soul's steps," which is both beautiful and a bit ominous, right? Sheever starts journaling, and through his entries, we get this rich tapestry of his day-to-day life, his past, and the fears that keep him up at night. The catch? He's got secrets. A lot of them. And these aren't the "I stole a candy bar when I was 12" kind of secrets. They're the "exposing them could get me killed" variety.
What I loved about this book is how it uses the journal format to peel away layers of Sheever's character. It's not just about the poisons, though those are fascinating. It's about the man behind them, his complexities, and his moral quandaries. K. Ritz does this thing where Sheever's everyday observations about his life and work gradually reveal the depth of his character and the stakes of his situation. It's brilliantly done.
The blending of genres here is also something to rave about. It's historical fiction with a hefty dose of fantasy, grounded by the very real, very human emotions and dilemmas Sheever faces. And the writing? It's like the author has this perfect recipe for keeping you hooked, blending detailed world-building with snappy, compelling narrative.
"Sheever's Journal" is one of those books that makes you want to start it all over again the moment you finish it. It's got a cliffhanger that'll have you cursing and praising Ritz in the same breath. For anyone who loves a story that's as much about the inner life as it is about the external adventures, this book is a must-read. It's a deep dive into the shadows of a world filled with secrets, danger, and the occasional glimmer of redemption. Highly recommended for fantasy lovers and anyone who appreciates a good, soul-searching journal romp through a historically rich, yet entirely imagined world
The book follows Me’acca Mysuth Sheever, who's basically living undercover among people he'd rather not be, which is already a situation ripe with tension. He buys a blank journal on a whim (or destiny, if you're into that sort of thing), and the seller hits him with a line that's something like, "Your life's journey marks the soul's steps," which is both beautiful and a bit ominous, right? Sheever starts journaling, and through his entries, we get this rich tapestry of his day-to-day life, his past, and the fears that keep him up at night. The catch? He's got secrets. A lot of them. And these aren't the "I stole a candy bar when I was 12" kind of secrets. They're the "exposing them could get me killed" variety.
What I loved about this book is how it uses the journal format to peel away layers of Sheever's character. It's not just about the poisons, though those are fascinating. It's about the man behind them, his complexities, and his moral quandaries. K. Ritz does this thing where Sheever's everyday observations about his life and work gradually reveal the depth of his character and the stakes of his situation. It's brilliantly done.
The blending of genres here is also something to rave about. It's historical fiction with a hefty dose of fantasy, grounded by the very real, very human emotions and dilemmas Sheever faces. And the writing? It's like the author has this perfect recipe for keeping you hooked, blending detailed world-building with snappy, compelling narrative.
"Sheever's Journal" is one of those books that makes you want to start it all over again the moment you finish it. It's got a cliffhanger that'll have you cursing and praising Ritz in the same breath. For anyone who loves a story that's as much about the inner life as it is about the external adventures, this book is a must-read. It's a deep dive into the shadows of a world filled with secrets, danger, and the occasional glimmer of redemption. Highly recommended for fantasy lovers and anyone who appreciates a good, soul-searching journal romp through a historically rich, yet entirely imagined world
October 7, 2019
There is much to like in SHEEVER’S JOURNAL, DIARY OF A POISON MASTER by K. Ritz.
One quality might seem strange, so let me get it out of the way first.
Many adventure/fantasy writers place their stories in well-developed alternative, dark worlds filled with strange countries and cultures that are vaguely reminiscent of medieval or post-apocalyptic times in which magic and sorcery are as common as casual violence and swordplay. Perhaps the master of this is Robert E. Howard in his “sword and sorcery” stories such as those about Conan the Barbarian.
Ritz has developed such a setting, though his protagonist is not a swashbuckling adventurer who is “just passing through” a city or kingdom. Rather, Sheever, his protagonist, is a menial cook. It is as if the spotlight in one of Howard’s stories has shifted hero deciding the fate of worlds to a person who might have been anonymous in a sword and sorcery story.
Same type of world. Different focus.
Now. That is out of the way. Let’s look at less strange qualities that make this story worthwhile.
One of the most enjoyable to me is the plot, which is as subtle as a New Yorker story. It plays out in leisurely fashion, told in the form of journal entries. Entry by entry we learn about Sheever’s back story as a trained assassin, the complex cultures of his world, the large and small challenges, victories, and defeats of the world of a common cook.
The plot might be difficult to summarize, though I might suggest it involves Sheever coming to terms with himself, perhaps seeking absolution for his decisions and actions. It also involves discussion about belief, fate, and justice.
This is not a short book, but Ritz keeps our interest through his well-developed, and subtle, characters in the alien (to us) setting.
As with many “literary” stories, there are questions that remain unanswered. Whether this is a plus or minus depends upon the reader’s ability to handle ambiguities in fiction.
In my mind, however, Ritz’s ability to explore a “sword and sorcery” world in such a “literary” fashion makes this well worth the reading.
One quality might seem strange, so let me get it out of the way first.
Many adventure/fantasy writers place their stories in well-developed alternative, dark worlds filled with strange countries and cultures that are vaguely reminiscent of medieval or post-apocalyptic times in which magic and sorcery are as common as casual violence and swordplay. Perhaps the master of this is Robert E. Howard in his “sword and sorcery” stories such as those about Conan the Barbarian.
Ritz has developed such a setting, though his protagonist is not a swashbuckling adventurer who is “just passing through” a city or kingdom. Rather, Sheever, his protagonist, is a menial cook. It is as if the spotlight in one of Howard’s stories has shifted hero deciding the fate of worlds to a person who might have been anonymous in a sword and sorcery story.
Same type of world. Different focus.
Now. That is out of the way. Let’s look at less strange qualities that make this story worthwhile.
One of the most enjoyable to me is the plot, which is as subtle as a New Yorker story. It plays out in leisurely fashion, told in the form of journal entries. Entry by entry we learn about Sheever’s back story as a trained assassin, the complex cultures of his world, the large and small challenges, victories, and defeats of the world of a common cook.
The plot might be difficult to summarize, though I might suggest it involves Sheever coming to terms with himself, perhaps seeking absolution for his decisions and actions. It also involves discussion about belief, fate, and justice.
This is not a short book, but Ritz keeps our interest through his well-developed, and subtle, characters in the alien (to us) setting.
As with many “literary” stories, there are questions that remain unanswered. Whether this is a plus or minus depends upon the reader’s ability to handle ambiguities in fiction.
In my mind, however, Ritz’s ability to explore a “sword and sorcery” world in such a “literary” fashion makes this well worth the reading.
July 13, 2024
I had no idea what I was expecting when I started this book. In fact, it was completely different from what I thought. Based on the cover and brief synopsis, I thought it would take place in modern times and have a religious note to it. However, when I saw the dates and descriptions for each journal entry, I loved how it took place in a historical setting.
I haven't read a lot of journal-type books, but I have enjoyed every single one of them. I like how it gives me the perspective of the character alone, while also leaving gaps for me to fill in. I have to connect those gaps with the information provided. I also like how it reflects the character's day. One day can be short, while another will have a lot of details. A very interesting type of book indeed.
This book is 'literally' a diary of Sheever. He has a past, which he mentions now and then, but he is currently living in the kitchens as a cook. He bought the journal and started writing from time to time. I like how vague it can be. For example, he mentions wanting to kill somebody, and how easy it is for him as he has done it many times before. When I read that, I thought, what is it about his past? I want to know. I need to know. He also mentions the names of people from his past, and you don't know who they are exactly until later.
It's a fantastic type of book. I would recommend it to any fictional fantasy lover.
I haven't read a lot of journal-type books, but I have enjoyed every single one of them. I like how it gives me the perspective of the character alone, while also leaving gaps for me to fill in. I have to connect those gaps with the information provided. I also like how it reflects the character's day. One day can be short, while another will have a lot of details. A very interesting type of book indeed.
This book is 'literally' a diary of Sheever. He has a past, which he mentions now and then, but he is currently living in the kitchens as a cook. He bought the journal and started writing from time to time. I like how vague it can be. For example, he mentions wanting to kill somebody, and how easy it is for him as he has done it many times before. When I read that, I thought, what is it about his past? I want to know. I need to know. He also mentions the names of people from his past, and you don't know who they are exactly until later.
It's a fantastic type of book. I would recommend it to any fictional fantasy lover.
February 9, 2024
"Sheever’s Journal, Diary of a Poison Master" by K, introduces us to Sheever, who, for five years, has been masquerading among those he deems his sworn enemies.
Sheever has a complex existence, which is told in the format of a journal, through which his thoughts, fears, and experiences, are exposed, all at the behest of a mysterious woman who sells him the blank journal.
The story gradually reveals hints of Sheever’s past and the difficulty he faces in his present life, as he unintentionally gets involved in the lives of those around him.
Sheever’s Journal had every element a good story should have. An intriguing plot, attention to detail, but best of all fleshed out, well-written and well-rounded character development. It’s one of those stories that come along once in a while that makes you want to read it non-stop until you get to the end. I’m giving nothing further away here. And this, I hope, will only add to the mystery and enjoyment for the reader!
Id put this novel in the Fantasy and Historical fiction genre, so for those of you who appreciate stories that weave together different genres but also enjoy reading about personal reflection and broader, action-driven plots, then give it a try, i don’t think you’ll be disappointed!
Sheever has a complex existence, which is told in the format of a journal, through which his thoughts, fears, and experiences, are exposed, all at the behest of a mysterious woman who sells him the blank journal.
The story gradually reveals hints of Sheever’s past and the difficulty he faces in his present life, as he unintentionally gets involved in the lives of those around him.
Sheever’s Journal had every element a good story should have. An intriguing plot, attention to detail, but best of all fleshed out, well-written and well-rounded character development. It’s one of those stories that come along once in a while that makes you want to read it non-stop until you get to the end. I’m giving nothing further away here. And this, I hope, will only add to the mystery and enjoyment for the reader!
Id put this novel in the Fantasy and Historical fiction genre, so for those of you who appreciate stories that weave together different genres but also enjoy reading about personal reflection and broader, action-driven plots, then give it a try, i don’t think you’ll be disappointed!
February 21, 2024
What if you get a chance to look back on your life and reflect on the twists and turns you have survived?
That will be interesting as well as enlightening for anyone of us to know more about what has been played with us by God.
While enjoying this interesting read, I had the same thought: I felt like I should revisit my life and put it into words.
As our central character, Me’acca Mysuth Sheever, lived among enemies with a hidden identity and a motive and survived, He gets hold of a journal, and this brings him to revisit his past in terms of all the good and bad memories and all the sins he has committed to reach this point.
First of all, the writing style is immensely captivating; the start of the story would never give you a clue about the thrill unfolding further. It's immersive and exciting to know more. The life story of the central character is interesting to read, and each subplot is designed accordingly to keep a hook on the readers.
Overall, it was a different kind of read and would definitely take you to a different world
That will be interesting as well as enlightening for anyone of us to know more about what has been played with us by God.
While enjoying this interesting read, I had the same thought: I felt like I should revisit my life and put it into words.
As our central character, Me’acca Mysuth Sheever, lived among enemies with a hidden identity and a motive and survived, He gets hold of a journal, and this brings him to revisit his past in terms of all the good and bad memories and all the sins he has committed to reach this point.
First of all, the writing style is immensely captivating; the start of the story would never give you a clue about the thrill unfolding further. It's immersive and exciting to know more. The life story of the central character is interesting to read, and each subplot is designed accordingly to keep a hook on the readers.
Overall, it was a different kind of read and would definitely take you to a different world
September 19, 2019
I began reading this book/journal and I have to admit, I didn't know if I was going to enjoy a day by day record of someone's life. For me it started out a little slow, which is my reason for only 4 stars. Once I got going, I found myself getting more and more interested in how this was going to turn out. I write reviews of all the books I read and will never give any spoilers, just my opinion about whether or not I could recommend a book to a potential future reader. I truly did enjoy this, and when I reached the last page, I was a bit disappointed that there would be no more pages for me to turn. That isn't to say I didn't enjoy the book, because I did and I would recommend this book, but if you are like me you too may find yourself wondering in the first few days of this journal, "Where is this going", but in the end, you may also ask yourself, "How did I get here so fast"? Good book!
January 4, 2024
Sheever’s Journal, A Diary of a Poison Master by K. Ritz
Book Review by Dawn Thomas
410 Pages
Publisher: Strategic Publishing
Release Date: August 9, 2019
Fantasy
Someone is searching for Sheever but that seems to be an everyday event for him. The book is written in the form of a journal or diary. Sheever writes of everyday events as he sees them. He also writes about his past, his family and his fears. He reaches a point when he must decide to stay in this current life working as a cook or make a run for it. I loved this book! When I finished, I went back and reread the beginning and then went back and reread the ending. Definite cliffhanger. Amazing work! I stayed up almost all night to finish it. I definitely recommend this book to anyone that likes fantasty-type stories.
Book Review by Dawn Thomas
410 Pages
Publisher: Strategic Publishing
Release Date: August 9, 2019
Fantasy
Someone is searching for Sheever but that seems to be an everyday event for him. The book is written in the form of a journal or diary. Sheever writes of everyday events as he sees them. He also writes about his past, his family and his fears. He reaches a point when he must decide to stay in this current life working as a cook or make a run for it. I loved this book! When I finished, I went back and reread the beginning and then went back and reread the ending. Definite cliffhanger. Amazing work! I stayed up almost all night to finish it. I definitely recommend this book to anyone that likes fantasty-type stories.
Read
February 19, 2024Mika missive which in his language means glorious goat is 40 years old he has been working at a royal house for five years far from the land of his birth. When the story starts you learned there are many things Sheiver (because that is what he goes by now) is on the run but for what the reader doesn’t know at least not yet. For five years he has kept to himself his only interactions with others being mandatory at work but when he sees a woman in an alley who looked as if her throat has been cut in like she has been abused he notices she is getting trinkets to sell and wants out of guilt and or redemption to buy something from the lady so when she pulls out a beautiful journal he buys it for a topping. She essentially tells him his deeds or a map to his soul and to write them down in the book and so he does. Once he starts recording the ends and outs it seems more and more he interacts with his coworkers and although throughout the book he tells us what a horrible unredeemable sinner he is. Yet he helps a widow and her two children he teaches his boss how to write numbers in in a world where raping and beating women is a public event he protects and takes up for them. Although they think him a raise the can turn into a demon and or impregnate women with demon babies he for the most part is liked by almost everyone know a lot of things I am putting in this review but lots I am leaving out like his quest to go home again his childhood memories and so much more this book was so good once you start reading it it mentions things that aren’t familiar but the more you read the more you understand, this book is brilliant intelligent and so original I cannot wait to read the next book and feel so lucky I ran across this one. The world building is phenomenal with the different races religions and the minority groups I just found it absolutely awe inspiring and let me just say one more time this book is so original I absolutely love that I know I said that already but I just want to reiterate it so you know this is not your average read if you like alternative whirls with a great plot then you’ll definitely love Sheiver’s Journal by Que Rittz please forgive any mistakes as I am blind and dictate my review.
August 8, 2025
My hands were shaking when I was in the latter half of the book, not sure if I was hungry and couldn’t put the book down or just how the plot of the book instantly twists… I honestly do not know how to describe how this book made me feel hahaha, it is something you must read yourself to understand
February 13, 2026
Please, please, K. Ritz, I am begging you, write more, please, I'm on my knees, I'm holding your hands so tenderly with my tears staining your sleeves as I beg you
September 24, 2025
Sheever’s Journal opens with a quiet dare. A man under an alias buys a blank book, promises a stranger he’ll write the truth, and then tries very hard not to. I settled in expecting court intrigue and got something stranger and better. Lonely kitchens at dawn. Knives that are both tools and warnings. A narrator who tells you exactly what he thinks while hiding what he feels. I kind of loved how petty he can be. Also how gentle. Sometimes in the same paragraph, which made me do that nervy little smile you do when a character surprises you.
Me’acca Mysuth Sheever works in the belly of a powerful household and notices everything. The way the lamps fracture the dark before the ovens flare. The way gossip stretches around a sliver of truth until it becomes a shape of its own. He records errands and accidents and the faces of people he claims to despise. Then he keeps circling back to them, almost against his will. It’s a journal, so the plot creeps and pounces in uneven rhythms that feel like life. He buys herbs. He sharpens blades. He walks a boy through a wood and teaches him to throw a knife. You can smell the sap. You can feel the decision sitting heavy on his tongue. I went still more than once.
The voice is the hook. Dry and cutting, then unexpectedly tender. He is a poison master and a meticulous cook and a liar who wants to be known. That contradiction gives the book its pulse. He is embedded with people he calls enemies, which should make him icy, but he keeps doing small kind things that ruin his arguments. I’m a sucker for that. The moral math never balances cleanly, and I kept thinking, fine, be monstrous then, but he won’t commit to it. He keeps choosing care. I don’t know why that wrecked me a little, but it did.
On the craft side, the world building comes through texture rather than lectures. Street names. Temples glimpsed between trees. The offhand mention of a High Lord’s kitchen that explains more than a map ever would. When the journal skews domestic for a few pages, I drifted, then got snapped back by a line or a small cruelty that lands like a slap. There are a couple of entries that meander, and once or twice the lore goes opaque enough that I shrugged and moved on. Still not sure how I feel about one particular choice near a graveyard, but wow, the aftermath sits in the gut.
What makes this sing is the slow thaw. Sheever begins as a man who wants to keep his history folded away. He’s waiting for a signal to go home. He prays for it and fears it, which is such a human knot. As the pages fill, the mask slips. Brief prayers. A joke he didn’t mean to make. A moment of unnecessary mercy. I kept thinking about how evil and empathy can share a table and pass the bread with very similar hands. The last chapters leave just enough door open to feel like a first movement, but the emotional arc here is complete. I closed the book, breathed out, and sat there like a weirdo tasting the last paragraph again.
If you need sword fights every five pages, this is not that book. If you like a journal voice that slices thin and then pours salt, with small explosions of grace, this is a feast. Four and a half stars, smiling as I round up. I’m grateful I read it, even if a few entries made me hold the page for an extra beat like it might push back.
Me’acca Mysuth Sheever works in the belly of a powerful household and notices everything. The way the lamps fracture the dark before the ovens flare. The way gossip stretches around a sliver of truth until it becomes a shape of its own. He records errands and accidents and the faces of people he claims to despise. Then he keeps circling back to them, almost against his will. It’s a journal, so the plot creeps and pounces in uneven rhythms that feel like life. He buys herbs. He sharpens blades. He walks a boy through a wood and teaches him to throw a knife. You can smell the sap. You can feel the decision sitting heavy on his tongue. I went still more than once.
The voice is the hook. Dry and cutting, then unexpectedly tender. He is a poison master and a meticulous cook and a liar who wants to be known. That contradiction gives the book its pulse. He is embedded with people he calls enemies, which should make him icy, but he keeps doing small kind things that ruin his arguments. I’m a sucker for that. The moral math never balances cleanly, and I kept thinking, fine, be monstrous then, but he won’t commit to it. He keeps choosing care. I don’t know why that wrecked me a little, but it did.
On the craft side, the world building comes through texture rather than lectures. Street names. Temples glimpsed between trees. The offhand mention of a High Lord’s kitchen that explains more than a map ever would. When the journal skews domestic for a few pages, I drifted, then got snapped back by a line or a small cruelty that lands like a slap. There are a couple of entries that meander, and once or twice the lore goes opaque enough that I shrugged and moved on. Still not sure how I feel about one particular choice near a graveyard, but wow, the aftermath sits in the gut.
What makes this sing is the slow thaw. Sheever begins as a man who wants to keep his history folded away. He’s waiting for a signal to go home. He prays for it and fears it, which is such a human knot. As the pages fill, the mask slips. Brief prayers. A joke he didn’t mean to make. A moment of unnecessary mercy. I kept thinking about how evil and empathy can share a table and pass the bread with very similar hands. The last chapters leave just enough door open to feel like a first movement, but the emotional arc here is complete. I closed the book, breathed out, and sat there like a weirdo tasting the last paragraph again.
If you need sword fights every five pages, this is not that book. If you like a journal voice that slices thin and then pours salt, with small explosions of grace, this is a feast. Four and a half stars, smiling as I round up. I’m grateful I read it, even if a few entries made me hold the page for an extra beat like it might push back.
July 15, 2024
Sheever’s Journal: Diary of a Poison Master by K. Ritz was a gripping and unforgettable read! I nearly devoured it in one go, almost forgetting to pace myself. The enticing narrative and spellbinding plot had me deeply invested in the story up unto its conclusion. A tortured spirit, Sheever has been a prisoner of past dealings for five years. Living under a guise has brought its fair share of troubles and Sheever, desperate for absolution, has formed a plan to regain his freedom. But things become complicated when he becomes entangled in the lives of the people he never particularly cared for, beginning an interesting journey that willl have readers begging for more. I cannot wait for K. Ritz’s next installment in The Shadows series!
May 26, 2024
Interesting concept for a novel. A man is hunted for his past, and so he goes to live among his enemies, working as a cook in the kitchen. The time is Year 516 post Cyntic War. Sheever is devastated about the death of his partner and his child, and therefore, can't get close to another woman. However, he slowly does become interested in the life of a widow and her family.
Sheever writes of his existence and his struggle with his family's legacy, his past, and his destiny to live as a cook. He writes in this journal for 5 years.
If you like a bit of fantasy and historical fiction, you may enjoy this. I found all of the names and places a bit difficult to track, though.
Sheever writes of his existence and his struggle with his family's legacy, his past, and his destiny to live as a cook. He writes in this journal for 5 years.
If you like a bit of fantasy and historical fiction, you may enjoy this. I found all of the names and places a bit difficult to track, though.
January 14, 2026
*vague spoilers, per usual lol*
Magnificent. This is a rare kind of book, not just stylistically, but in its scope, its heart, its edge. The language and overall power of the story being told here is an internal adventure every fantasy reader should take, especially if you like character-driven high fantasy with dark sensibilities. I was taken on a journey through the mind of Me'acca Mysuth Sheever, an exiled poison master and a man trying to save his soul by hiding as a cook in the land of Meara.
Told in the form of diary entries over the course of about 5 years, the reader is thrown right into this world without much forewarning. Sheever shows us the landscape through the entries, some detailing his day-to-day as a Nobody, a cook in the High Lord's kitchens, and also his personal history, which gives the reader insight into the world.
There is quite a bit of politicking in here; sometimes it got a bit confusing trying to keep track of all the different places, people, and rules set in place, but the story itself sweeps you away. Sheever isn't necessarily from noble birth, but he was raised around nobles, by his politician father and his memsa mother. His heritage is something he holds near and dear to him, as his mother's people have historically been disenfranchised and kept out of society. Sheever spends a lot of his time remembering his childhood and his young adulthood, a time of many spoils and traumas, inflicted by himself as well as those in power around him. Sythene is the one exception to the rule, his karmic leader, this ancient being who is never quite explained but who Sheever reveres in his passages.
It's challenging trying to get into the entire scope of this novel; the meat of it is in the experience of reading it. There's no great quest or premise, it's this one man's story and his thoughts about how he's gotten to his station, but the way it's told is immaculate. I was always excited to be brought back into this man's head, never bored. The reader is supposed to be swept away, like in a trance, enjoying the ride that is Sheever's sarcasm, seriousness, and his simultaneous brain-dense and spiritual world. At his core, Sheever is a man who misses a home he cannot return to, and there is always a bit of underlying sadness to his entries.
The magic is more alluded to than used, although Sheever does have some psychic abilities that he keeps secret, ones he was trained in by his mother. The lore of the countries and their customs was fascinating, from the Games to the religion practiced by the Mearans; there are many mentions of an afterlife in varying cultures, and Sheever contemplates this extensively. Reverend Calec Wessel and his family were some of the recurring characters throughout Sheever's journal, Damut and her troubles and her insight. Sheever is unhappy to be living in a country he despises around poor and uneducated people, but he surprises himself when he finds he actually likes some of those around him. Although he is afraid to get too close, for reasons that make sense the more one gets further into the novel.
At it's core, I think "Sheever's Journal," is an open-ended mystery. Sheever himself is shrouded in the unknown, and by the end of the novel, the reader is still guessing about what is going to happen to the man, and about what he's done. Especially with the opening scene being the only part that's not a diary entry, the entire book has an air of "well what happens next?" to it.
I was taken into this world of darkness and myth, and I have many thoughts swirling in my head about it, but it's difficult to put down exactly what I mean. I think that this is what I'm talking about when I talk about complex and immersive fantasy; it crafts and weaves a tale that feels so real it's like actually reading somebody's private journal. This world is rich like baked brie, but also haunting and surreal, plagued by Sheever's nightmares, regrets, and fear.
There is a deeper meaning to be found; can grace be found, even if one has lived a life filled with death and sin? Sheever is in constant battle with himself surrounding the nature of a soul, namely his, and whether or not it can be saved, or if he's doomed to an eternity in damnation. These musings mixed with his life in a soup kitchen, and the dramas of the folks around him. Sheever thinks of himself as a coward, unredeemable, but then will change a lowly person's life just by caring enough to be the one to make it happen.
It makes one thinks about how our own lives are minutiae, really, but it's the small acts of kindness, of humanity, that make the world feel less daunting.
I want to be back inside of this world, but unsure if a sequel is coming. I really hope it does because this was a stunning read. If anything, I need to get back into journaling and maybe this is my indicator to do so!
Magnificent. This is a rare kind of book, not just stylistically, but in its scope, its heart, its edge. The language and overall power of the story being told here is an internal adventure every fantasy reader should take, especially if you like character-driven high fantasy with dark sensibilities. I was taken on a journey through the mind of Me'acca Mysuth Sheever, an exiled poison master and a man trying to save his soul by hiding as a cook in the land of Meara.
Told in the form of diary entries over the course of about 5 years, the reader is thrown right into this world without much forewarning. Sheever shows us the landscape through the entries, some detailing his day-to-day as a Nobody, a cook in the High Lord's kitchens, and also his personal history, which gives the reader insight into the world.
There is quite a bit of politicking in here; sometimes it got a bit confusing trying to keep track of all the different places, people, and rules set in place, but the story itself sweeps you away. Sheever isn't necessarily from noble birth, but he was raised around nobles, by his politician father and his memsa mother. His heritage is something he holds near and dear to him, as his mother's people have historically been disenfranchised and kept out of society. Sheever spends a lot of his time remembering his childhood and his young adulthood, a time of many spoils and traumas, inflicted by himself as well as those in power around him. Sythene is the one exception to the rule, his karmic leader, this ancient being who is never quite explained but who Sheever reveres in his passages.
It's challenging trying to get into the entire scope of this novel; the meat of it is in the experience of reading it. There's no great quest or premise, it's this one man's story and his thoughts about how he's gotten to his station, but the way it's told is immaculate. I was always excited to be brought back into this man's head, never bored. The reader is supposed to be swept away, like in a trance, enjoying the ride that is Sheever's sarcasm, seriousness, and his simultaneous brain-dense and spiritual world. At his core, Sheever is a man who misses a home he cannot return to, and there is always a bit of underlying sadness to his entries.
The magic is more alluded to than used, although Sheever does have some psychic abilities that he keeps secret, ones he was trained in by his mother. The lore of the countries and their customs was fascinating, from the Games to the religion practiced by the Mearans; there are many mentions of an afterlife in varying cultures, and Sheever contemplates this extensively. Reverend Calec Wessel and his family were some of the recurring characters throughout Sheever's journal, Damut and her troubles and her insight. Sheever is unhappy to be living in a country he despises around poor and uneducated people, but he surprises himself when he finds he actually likes some of those around him. Although he is afraid to get too close, for reasons that make sense the more one gets further into the novel.
At it's core, I think "Sheever's Journal," is an open-ended mystery. Sheever himself is shrouded in the unknown, and by the end of the novel, the reader is still guessing about what is going to happen to the man, and about what he's done. Especially with the opening scene being the only part that's not a diary entry, the entire book has an air of "well what happens next?" to it.
I was taken into this world of darkness and myth, and I have many thoughts swirling in my head about it, but it's difficult to put down exactly what I mean. I think that this is what I'm talking about when I talk about complex and immersive fantasy; it crafts and weaves a tale that feels so real it's like actually reading somebody's private journal. This world is rich like baked brie, but also haunting and surreal, plagued by Sheever's nightmares, regrets, and fear.
There is a deeper meaning to be found; can grace be found, even if one has lived a life filled with death and sin? Sheever is in constant battle with himself surrounding the nature of a soul, namely his, and whether or not it can be saved, or if he's doomed to an eternity in damnation. These musings mixed with his life in a soup kitchen, and the dramas of the folks around him. Sheever thinks of himself as a coward, unredeemable, but then will change a lowly person's life just by caring enough to be the one to make it happen.
It makes one thinks about how our own lives are minutiae, really, but it's the small acts of kindness, of humanity, that make the world feel less daunting.
I want to be back inside of this world, but unsure if a sequel is coming. I really hope it does because this was a stunning read. If anything, I need to get back into journaling and maybe this is my indicator to do so!
January 21, 2025
I recently finished Sheever's Journal, Diary of a Poison Master by K. Ritz, and I have to say, I was amazed by the originality of this story. The author does a great job of gripping the readers, introducing us to Sheever, a character whose journey is compelling.
He unfolds Sheever's journal entries, giving us an intimate glimpse into his past as a trained assassin and his current life as a cook. This allows us to see his internal struggles and growth, making his character feel real and relatable. The environment is phenomenal, cultures and religions that adds to the story.
The author unfolds the story in a way that feels natural and unforced. This approach makes the characters' experiences and growth feel authentic. I was particularly moved by Sheever's interactions with those around him, as they reveal the nuances of his character.
Overall, Sheever's Journal is a powerful and original read that offers a fresh perspective on the fantasy genre. If you're looking for a story that's both engaging and thought-provoking, I highly recommend giving this book a try.
He unfolds Sheever's journal entries, giving us an intimate glimpse into his past as a trained assassin and his current life as a cook. This allows us to see his internal struggles and growth, making his character feel real and relatable. The environment is phenomenal, cultures and religions that adds to the story.
The author unfolds the story in a way that feels natural and unforced. This approach makes the characters' experiences and growth feel authentic. I was particularly moved by Sheever's interactions with those around him, as they reveal the nuances of his character.
Overall, Sheever's Journal is a powerful and original read that offers a fresh perspective on the fantasy genre. If you're looking for a story that's both engaging and thought-provoking, I highly recommend giving this book a try.
November 4, 2024
Sheever's Journal, Diary of a Poison Master, written by K. Ritz is a fascinating book. I wasn’t sure what to expect at first and how reading a day-to-day journal could be all that interesting, but I was wrong. This book explores the life of Me’acca, the Poison Master, who is living in exile and works as a cook. He hides among his enemies acting as though he is one of them. Reading through the pages of the journal you learn a lot about the poison master, his habits, the places he visits, the people that come and go in his life, and the differences between his life now and what it used to be. At first, he didn’t know if he could write in the journal, let alone write his secrets and things about his past life, but he does start to tell bits here and there. Sometimes he regrets what he writes but he doesn’t cross it out or destroy it. It was a very interesting book, easy and fun to read, and interesting to learn all about Me’acca.
January 5, 2026
Rated 3.5*
This book was a bit of a mixed bag for me. It seemed to take forever for me to get into this book. I appreciate the detailed descriptions of the location towards the start of the book, but I feel that a 5 page description of what road connected to what area may have been a bit of overkill. I like that we get to hear about Sheever's past from his perspective. We meet plenty of characters and we get told what Sheever really thinks of them. For some reason I wasn't expecting a journal with dates. I honestly wasn't paying attention to them until towards the end of the book where months are skipped. The whole book I was wondering what was going on which was mostly a good thing. There are so many things that we're not told because it's just Sheever keeping a record for himself, no reader in mind. I love how Sheever is around women, instead of being like the rest of the cooks and workers we meet, he actually respects women as people.
This book was a bit of a mixed bag for me. It seemed to take forever for me to get into this book. I appreciate the detailed descriptions of the location towards the start of the book, but I feel that a 5 page description of what road connected to what area may have been a bit of overkill. I like that we get to hear about Sheever's past from his perspective. We meet plenty of characters and we get told what Sheever really thinks of them. For some reason I wasn't expecting a journal with dates. I honestly wasn't paying attention to them until towards the end of the book where months are skipped. The whole book I was wondering what was going on which was mostly a good thing. There are so many things that we're not told because it's just Sheever keeping a record for himself, no reader in mind. I love how Sheever is around women, instead of being like the rest of the cooks and workers we meet, he actually respects women as people.
May 6, 2025
This story the readers on a journey into Sheever’s past through his journal entries, giving a glimpse into his life as a trained assassin and where he’s at now a cook. Ritz covers different genres abit of history, some fantasy and reality. You see Sheever dealing with reality through his eyes. Its well written and the detail and attention gone into the plot and description of what’s going through out is perfect. You can’t help but keep going to see how things go for him and where he is now. The journal is Sheever’s deep and dark where you can learn a lot about his past and present life. If you enjoy reading about personal life, struggles, different worlds then I think this is the book for you. It’s an interesting read!
November 3, 2025
Enchanting, dark, and unexpectedly emotional. Sheever’s Journal: Diary of a Poison Master is a gothic masterpeice that delves into morality, power, and the cost of knowledge. Sheever is a fascinating character — both dangerous and deeply tragic — and seeing the world through his meticulous, obsessive mind is unforgettable.
The prose is lyrical and richly detailed; you can almost smell the poisons, hear the glass vials clinking, and feel the weight of each confession written on the page.
Near perfect in both athmosphere and depth — a hauntingly beautiful blend of intellect, obsession, and melancholy.
The prose is lyrical and richly detailed; you can almost smell the poisons, hear the glass vials clinking, and feel the weight of each confession written on the page.
Near perfect in both athmosphere and depth — a hauntingly beautiful blend of intellect, obsession, and melancholy.
December 1, 2024
Sheever's Journal by K. Ritz is that written in journal form, if I'm being honest is my least favorite form to read. Although the story is interesting as we learn more about Sheever and his secrets. Ritz has a lovely way of entangling a fantasy novel with suspense, which helped me to keep moving along. This is not a novel for everyone but definitely a gripping one for those who crave that fantasy world, drama intensity with the thrill of what is going to happen.
May 4, 2025
Maybe 4.5. This is one of those books where kinda nothing happens and you wonder to yourself “why do I even care about any of this?” But you do care because Sheever is such an interesting and tortured character. Interested to read more.
October 25, 2024
This book is definitely well-written.
April 5, 2025
Interesting world. Great main character. I don’t feel like I understand enough what’s happening to know what I think. I’ll read the next when it comes…
August 23, 2025
One of the best books I have read this year. I love the journal format. The world in the book is fascinating.
September 25, 2025
Loved this!
December 2, 2025
Unique and interesting, albeit with not a lot of plot progression. In a way the fact that it held my attention means the characters were well written.
October 21, 2025
I liked this more than I expected. The concept is simple. One man with a dangerous past writes a journal while hiding in plain sight among people he has been trained to hate. The execution is not simple at all. The voice is lean, unsentimental, then suddenly raw. The mode flips from mapmaking to confession and back again. It feels like someone solving for survival with limited data and limited trust, which is exactly the point.
Sheever is working in the base kitchens of High Lord Trivak. He counts coins, fuel, miles, days. He measures people like variables. Cyril runs the cooks. Tobb snores and boasts and keeps bringing women into their shared room. Liana coughs herself into a grave and the child follows, and that quiet sequence hurt more than the book makes a show of. The world around the kitchens is a system of roads and walls and rules. Royal Park. Natal compounds. The Church of Eshra with its black heart called the Saeween. You can tell the author built the logic before throwing sparks into it. I respect that.
There is a scene that will stick with me for a while. Sheever buys a blank book from a bruised woman on Snake Street, and she tells him to record his deeds. He does, then tries to stop, then cannot. The journal becomes a pressure valve and a trap at the same time. That is clever and also true to how obsession works. He wants to remain invisible. He wants to be seen by someone who can judge him and maybe forgive him. He keeps saying he loathes these people, then acts like he does not. I kind of loved how messy that got.
The politics are set with a calm hand. Uttebedt. The Kinship of the Serpent. Sythene Lonntem named with reverence and anger and a little grief. The natal legions who vow peace but do not feel safe to be near. A First Secretary with a gold chain and a smile that means trouble. None of it is loud. It is just there, like voltage you can feel when you get too close to a line.
I am not sure how I feel about Sheever with the knife and the sleeping powder. I believed it. I believed the part of him that would remove a finger to protect a secret and then bury it with the dead to balance an imagined scale. I am not saying that is sane. I am saying it fits the math of his mind. I caught myself arguing with him in the margins and then rooting for him two pages later. That contradiction is the engine here.
The prose has this interesting swing. One page is a scathing audit of kitchen hierarchy and pay schedules and the way coal moves. The next page is a memory of a woman named Sythene and it spills out in a way that feels almost embarrassing and therefore honest. Then we are back to logistics. Routes through the park. How long it takes to reach the bridge. Why a wall is stupid or smart. It reads like a builder making a model and then testing it until it breaks.
Tiny complaints. A few rants about Mearans being idiots repeat a touch and I wanted one of the women in the kitchens to push back on it out loud. One early joke about wolves felt like a wedge into a different book. Also there is a late festival scene with mead where the drunk banter goes on a beat longer than it needs. None of that matters much. The signal stays high.
Did I feel something. Yes. The burial on Cemetery Lane. The barefoot priest who says nothing and takes the roots anyway. The minor kindnesses that do not fix anything, and the petty cruelties that add up. The mare trained the Kinship way and how simple it is for him to adapt her. A single word of his mother tongue spoken after five silent years. I felt all of that.
Net score. Strong book. The journal form gives it urgency and focus. The world building is cool in the original sense of that word. Controlled and precise. The emotion leaks at the right times. A five star read. If you want character under pressure, a lived in setting, and a mind that treats attention like a weapon, this delivers.
Sheever is working in the base kitchens of High Lord Trivak. He counts coins, fuel, miles, days. He measures people like variables. Cyril runs the cooks. Tobb snores and boasts and keeps bringing women into their shared room. Liana coughs herself into a grave and the child follows, and that quiet sequence hurt more than the book makes a show of. The world around the kitchens is a system of roads and walls and rules. Royal Park. Natal compounds. The Church of Eshra with its black heart called the Saeween. You can tell the author built the logic before throwing sparks into it. I respect that.
There is a scene that will stick with me for a while. Sheever buys a blank book from a bruised woman on Snake Street, and she tells him to record his deeds. He does, then tries to stop, then cannot. The journal becomes a pressure valve and a trap at the same time. That is clever and also true to how obsession works. He wants to remain invisible. He wants to be seen by someone who can judge him and maybe forgive him. He keeps saying he loathes these people, then acts like he does not. I kind of loved how messy that got.
The politics are set with a calm hand. Uttebedt. The Kinship of the Serpent. Sythene Lonntem named with reverence and anger and a little grief. The natal legions who vow peace but do not feel safe to be near. A First Secretary with a gold chain and a smile that means trouble. None of it is loud. It is just there, like voltage you can feel when you get too close to a line.
I am not sure how I feel about Sheever with the knife and the sleeping powder. I believed it. I believed the part of him that would remove a finger to protect a secret and then bury it with the dead to balance an imagined scale. I am not saying that is sane. I am saying it fits the math of his mind. I caught myself arguing with him in the margins and then rooting for him two pages later. That contradiction is the engine here.
The prose has this interesting swing. One page is a scathing audit of kitchen hierarchy and pay schedules and the way coal moves. The next page is a memory of a woman named Sythene and it spills out in a way that feels almost embarrassing and therefore honest. Then we are back to logistics. Routes through the park. How long it takes to reach the bridge. Why a wall is stupid or smart. It reads like a builder making a model and then testing it until it breaks.
Tiny complaints. A few rants about Mearans being idiots repeat a touch and I wanted one of the women in the kitchens to push back on it out loud. One early joke about wolves felt like a wedge into a different book. Also there is a late festival scene with mead where the drunk banter goes on a beat longer than it needs. None of that matters much. The signal stays high.
Did I feel something. Yes. The burial on Cemetery Lane. The barefoot priest who says nothing and takes the roots anyway. The minor kindnesses that do not fix anything, and the petty cruelties that add up. The mare trained the Kinship way and how simple it is for him to adapt her. A single word of his mother tongue spoken after five silent years. I felt all of that.
Net score. Strong book. The journal form gives it urgency and focus. The world building is cool in the original sense of that word. Controlled and precise. The emotion leaks at the right times. A five star read. If you want character under pressure, a lived in setting, and a mind that treats attention like a weapon, this delivers.
December 18, 2025
Sheever's Journal: Diary of a Poison Master is an intriguing and unique dive into a world that combines elements of dark fantasy and medical intrigue. The novel is presented in the form of a journal, giving it an intimate and personal feel, as the protagonist, Sheever, recounts their experiences as a master of poisons. This format allows for deep insight into Sheever's psyche and creates an engaging sense of immediacy, as if the reader is being let into a secret world of danger, deception, and discovery.
The central character, Sheever, is compelling in their complexity. The journey from a seemingly simple role as a poison master to the exploration of deeper, darker aspects of the craft is fascinating. Sheever is not only skilled in the art of poisons but also seems to grapple with ethical dilemmas, the consequences of their work, and their personal motivations. This adds a level of depth to the story that makes it more than just a tale about the use of deadly substances.
One of the standout features of the book is its rich world-building. The author clearly has a passion for the subject matter, and the book is full of fascinating details about poisons, their effects, and the history of toxicology. For those interested in alchemy, medicine, or even criminal history, this book offers an insightful look into a niche but fascinating world.
That said, Sheever's Journal is not for everyone. The pacing can be slow at times, and the diary format may not appeal to readers who prefer a more conventional narrative structure. The tone is dark and often grim, which may be off-putting for some readers looking for lighter material. The book does require a level of patience to fully appreciate the deeper themes of morality, power, and the consequences of one's actions.
The prose is evocative and atmospheric, effectively setting the tone for the darker aspects of the story. However, some readers may find the writing a bit too dense or flowery in parts. There’s a certain level of abstraction and introspection in Sheever’s musings, which can make the plot feel somewhat secondary to the character’s inner thoughts.
In terms of themes, the book doesn’t shy away from exploring heavy topics like the ethics of using poisons for personal or political gain, the responsibility of knowledge, and the personal cost of living a life filled with secrecy and danger. These themes are thought-provoking but could be off-putting for those expecting a more action-oriented story.
Overall, Sheever's Journal: Diary of a Poison Master is a fascinating read for fans of dark fantasy, character-driven narratives, and those interested in the less savory aspects of science and history. It’s a book that demands careful reading and introspection, and while it may not be for everyone, it offers a unique experience for those who are willing to dive into its dark world.
The central character, Sheever, is compelling in their complexity. The journey from a seemingly simple role as a poison master to the exploration of deeper, darker aspects of the craft is fascinating. Sheever is not only skilled in the art of poisons but also seems to grapple with ethical dilemmas, the consequences of their work, and their personal motivations. This adds a level of depth to the story that makes it more than just a tale about the use of deadly substances.
One of the standout features of the book is its rich world-building. The author clearly has a passion for the subject matter, and the book is full of fascinating details about poisons, their effects, and the history of toxicology. For those interested in alchemy, medicine, or even criminal history, this book offers an insightful look into a niche but fascinating world.
That said, Sheever's Journal is not for everyone. The pacing can be slow at times, and the diary format may not appeal to readers who prefer a more conventional narrative structure. The tone is dark and often grim, which may be off-putting for some readers looking for lighter material. The book does require a level of patience to fully appreciate the deeper themes of morality, power, and the consequences of one's actions.
The prose is evocative and atmospheric, effectively setting the tone for the darker aspects of the story. However, some readers may find the writing a bit too dense or flowery in parts. There’s a certain level of abstraction and introspection in Sheever’s musings, which can make the plot feel somewhat secondary to the character’s inner thoughts.
In terms of themes, the book doesn’t shy away from exploring heavy topics like the ethics of using poisons for personal or political gain, the responsibility of knowledge, and the personal cost of living a life filled with secrecy and danger. These themes are thought-provoking but could be off-putting for those expecting a more action-oriented story.
Overall, Sheever's Journal: Diary of a Poison Master is a fascinating read for fans of dark fantasy, character-driven narratives, and those interested in the less savory aspects of science and history. It’s a book that demands careful reading and introspection, and while it may not be for everyone, it offers a unique experience for those who are willing to dive into its dark world.
Displaying 1 - 30 of 95 reviews