It is a very sweet story with good bones, but really needed to be a full novel instead of a novella to accomplish its goals with all of the stuff crammed in.
I didn’t get a chance to feel much of anything for the characters, because there was no development; it just bounced from one unlikely plot twist to the next. Take the twelve twists down to three with some solid development and I likely would have quite enjoyed the story.
Lastly, it’s laden with my pet peeve of the gratuitous use of the exclamation point. Personally, I hate them and cringe when I see them books because there are more skillful ways to accomplish the point, but I know that’s an unfair expectation. But this story had so many I almost stopped reading.