The Plot Thickens
Chapter 1 started out with a complete bang and from their the story just took off. The plot thickened and the drama was heavy. You have 3 people from terrible up bringings trying to find their way through life. They been lied to, taken advantage of, and all of that reflects how they act and treated each out. Especially Keemie and Pebble. He has the worst attitude of them all, but I give him one thing and that's loyalty. He is a man of his word but when that word is broken all hell breaks loose. Everybody is a suspect to him. But it's funny how life works and how a traumatic experience can turn a person completely around. You don't miss something until you've either almost lost it or it's gone. Bonnie also brought some heat to the story. Here I was thinking she was this timid person, but she was on her G. Bonnie is one those types that pop when necessary and once she's out it over. There's is no changing her stance, that goes for Adriel and her Mama. The ending was like a breath of fresh air. It was good to see how everyone moved on to better things. Oh yea, Gianna, she needed to be taught a lesson. It was a hard one but you can't play with people lives like that.
The moral is it doesn't matter how many men/women have to go down, you never let your past hinder your future. Man Down, Life is Up.